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Reviewed By: candycanegirl On: January 06, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!! Oh come on it's not fair! They were so close to meeting each other. I have to try and remember that as an author you want to prolong the suspense a bit.......but you are going to drive me insane!
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Reviewed By: shadowfire walker On: January 01, 2006 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo when is Kagome going to remove the mask? Her hanyou daughter is just adorable! I want to read more about her.
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Reviewed By: mysticangel On: December 31, 2005 14:32 CST
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Interesting development.The reunion between them should be good.Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: seshy's wife On: December 31, 2005 14:20 CST
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What on earth did Inuyasha say to Kagome that caused her to break down? He always has been inconsiderate....but they belong together. So here's hoping they get together again.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha0024 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a really good story.. I like it alot.. so please continue with it.. It is very interesting ^^ -inuyasha0024
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Reviewed By: rubypick On: December 30, 2005 16:53 CST
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I love this story. I am so glad you update regularly unlike other authors. Keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: stealthy kit On: December 30, 2005 16:34 CST
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This is a good story, I'm glad my friend recommended it. Changeing your summary has to get people to review, it has me anticipating when the cuople are going to meet.
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Reviewed By: swirling eyes On: December 30, 2005 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your notes are the funniest thing,now your going to get me to look up what Sachiko means. So not an alternate story huh? Well now. this is getting interesting.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 13:31 CST
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Another great chapter. Oooo, the suspense is killing me. What will happen when InuYasha and Kagome meet??? *sigh* Another day, another update i suppose. Ja!
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Reviewed By: sarcasmneverhurts On: December 29, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. The gradual build up of the fic is pretty good. If you change the summary of your story you might just get more reviews.
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Title: whoops
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 02:23 CST
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ok, i don't want to sound stupid here, but it IS 3:30 in the morning and I made a mistake in the last review... No sleep and all read makes HigherBeing a very technically challenged typer. -_-'''
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Title: Hazzah!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 02:21 CST
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Woo hoo!!! Chapter four completed!!! And I must say, well done ol' bean! *fake accent gone* ahem, right... So! When's the next chapter coming up, eh? I hear authors as good as you bearly get any sleep typing away on thier computers. ^_^ plz update! i WILL be waiting!!! (ooo the suspense is killing me)
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, so here i am, just finished the second chapter and about to get on clicking the oh-so-familiar blue button to lead me to chapter number three, and i say: "Hey, this story is really, really good... I think I'll leave a comment now since I just read that this author only got two reviews." And here I am! Yes, its true... I THINK ITS AWESOME! Please update chapter four conviniently after i finish chapter three! ^_^ Or, of course, if that's too much trouble you could always do it during the daytime and not at... *looks at annoying-beeping alarm clock that gets thrown into wall every school morning*... 3:07am. ^_^
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Reviewed By: tornadotrail On: December 29, 2005 00:19 CST
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This is amazing why are you not getting more reviews? I'm going to recommend rhis story to my friends.
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Reviewed By: frostyshake(nsi) On: December 29, 2005 00:00 CST
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Damn this is good! Your story rocks,though I hate the suspense.....I'm pretty sure blue is Kagome right? Can't wait for the next chapter.
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