| "Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: ezaangel(not logged in) On: March 05, 2006 23:21 CST
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i love it i love it i love it, lol your story rocks lol. keep up the godd work and i loved this chapter. just one question does inuyasha and kagome think the either on is dead because kagome said in an earlier chapter that she wanted to prove to inuyasha she was capable of living without his constent protection,does that mean she thought he was still alive. im so confused.
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 22:21 CST
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write faster i'm loving every minute of this story. hurry write more.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Fireangel011 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 20:54 CST
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Another fantastic chapter completed. This is one of the most original stories I have ever read. You are doing a wonderful job writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Bastard6 On: March 05, 2006 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a a wonderful fanfic..I hope you continue writing this becuase I will continue reading this since it just grabs the mind and makes you want to continue readiing it.
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Reviewed By: SilvR_Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 17:38 CST
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\/ That was me, Sorry, It didn't log me in for some reason XD
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Title: GREAT WORK!
Reviewed By: AnthonY_MyerS On: March 05, 2006 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALMOST all Tens across the board!! Great job! I do, however, encourage that you expand on Inuyasha's thoughts after the dream. It seems too empty. I also suggest connecting the dream to both Inu and Kagome. Probably with something like this: "Across the City, Kagome wasn't the only one contemplating that very same dream... If you could call it a 'dream'." Other than those, I think you did an exceptional job!! Great work, Brittney!
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Reviewed By: SilvR_Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting SOO good! anyways, I need to talk to you on Yahoo... I love this story! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Cassondra/kittenprophetess On: February 20, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really great. I like the twists and the writing is wonderful. Please update soon! ;)
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Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How did you manage to raise the suspense level again?! Stop that! XD Anyway, great chapter. I'm dying to find out what the next big plot point is going to be!
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Title: Bravo! Bravo!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I can stand the suspense!! This is such a terrific story...You have a gift at prolonging our torture..When will Inuyasha and Blue(Kagome)meet? I can't stand it! I like how Sesshomaru is softer in this story..guess it comes from having a mate and pups of his own...I can't wait till Inuyasha finds out that he is a dad! Please update soon!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Went looking for a new InuYasha/Kagome story to read, and found yours. Interesting. Not sure how InuYasha put his foot in his mouth this time, but knowing him, its not hard. And can see how his brother and Shippo would still be around, but Miroku and Sango? Hmmm...gets me wondering. Update soon.
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!
Reviewed By: marbear411 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Waves flags in the air with the authors name on them* YEAH WAY TO GO!!!!! UPDATE REALLY SOON OR I'LL GO CRAZY!!!! THIS STORY IS AWSOME!!!I'M ADDING YOU TO MY FAVORTIES LIST!!!!!!PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!YOUR STORYS ARE 100x BETTER THEN MINE!!!!!PLZ UPDATE SOON. I really will go crazy if you don't update.. YOU SHOULD GET AWARDS FOR THIS STORY!!!! P.S PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 13:47 CST
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you and you stupid cliffhangers. i swear if the last chapter ends in a cliffhanger i'll........i'll.....i don't know what i'll do go crazy most likely.Great story just enough of the cliffhanger plz.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta find out what happends!I'll do anything for you to keep updating at this speed.When does InuYasha find out that he really saw her.Please update.
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED IT!!!! you just HAVE to write more, and SOON! please? pretty please with candy-chibi-inuyashas on top? lol, i loved it, it's one of the best stories i've ever read.
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