| "Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: syne On: January 11, 2006 23:36 CST
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That family reunion was very sweet. Is Souta going to join them.
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Reviewed By: ninjew_42 On: January 11, 2006 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i told you it was kagome! u r very creul! i will try to get u back tomarrow!!! i sware it!
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Reviewed By: wild gun On: January 11, 2006 17:41 CST
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Kawaii. That tiny child is a delight. The only thing worrying me is your comment about the twist in the story. I reall yhate it when Kagome suffers. (sigh) I guess I'll just have to wait and find out. Please update as sonn as possible, or I will be worrying about what is going to happen.
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Reviewed By: Yura of the demon hair On: January 11, 2006 17:28 CST
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i loved it SOOOOOOOOOO much! i found myself skipping some words just to get to the good stuff! but now i regret it because i wish the story had lasted longer:( o well, you had better update, or i shall be cross!
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Reviewed By: janjanjan On: January 11, 2006 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good!!! when are they gonna meet? you have to continue you have a really good plot. it could turn into something really great if you continue!!!!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 18:29 CST
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Ooo c'mon! Another cliffy! Get on witht he Blue concert!!! I really really wanna know! And I know you're there. You even said so... so you'll probably get an e-mail saying: "Hey, you got a comment, go check it." And then you'll be reading this! so... yea... POST!
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Reviewed By: Kelly689 On: January 10, 2006 18:16 CST
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I'm sorry but I really must comment on your spelling. Get someone to help you. It's 'blue jeans' not 'genes'. 'Genes' are what your DNA is made of, as in genetic material. "Jeans" are pants made out of denim fabric. 'Sorry, but it was really bugging me.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 20:28 CST
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Damn... a cliffy... ish... grah... so aggrivating sometimes, neh? Well, PLZ UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! My job here is done and I wish you well on your next chapter in... Blue
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Reviewed By: rainbowbrite On: January 08, 2006 01:12 CST
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Okay since Sango and Miroku are still alive in the future does that also mean Kaede is still around? What about Shippo whatever happened to him?
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Reviewed By: lavathief On: January 07, 2006 00:03 CST
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I'm sure the argument had something to do with Kikyo right? I would not be surprised, it always is.
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Reviewed By: ragingphoenix On: January 06, 2006 23:18 CST
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Outstanding fan-fiction. I really want to know why Kagome has stayed away from her family for so long.
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Reviewed By: glazier On: January 06, 2006 20:14 CST
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So how are Miroku and Sango still alive in Kagome's time? And why does Inuyasha think Kagome is dead? Please update soon I enjoy this story.
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Reviewed By: candycanegirl On: January 06, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!! Oh come on it's not fair! They were so close to meeting each other. I have to try and remember that as an author you want to prolong the suspense a bit.......but you are going to drive me insane!
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Reviewed By: shadowfire walker On: January 01, 2006 02:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo when is Kagome going to remove the mask? Her hanyou daughter is just adorable! I want to read more about her.
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Reviewed By: mysticangel On: December 31, 2005 14:32 CST
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Interesting development.The reunion between them should be good.Looking forward to the next update.
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