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Reviewed By: kittypaws182 On: March 24, 2007 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I really enjoyed this story. Really cute at the end & I understand how your portraied(sorry I cant spell) Inuyasha & kagomes characters. It was really nice & I liked your style of writing
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with your author's note in the fourth chapter. Inuyasha, even when he has extreme rough edges still is a decent guy. He may be predjudiced at first but Kagome is still his and as much as he doesn't like her at first he wouldn't kill her. He may have hit her in the beginning but his instincts as a dog towards someone he views as pack, at least in my opinion, would keep him from killing her until his feelings started to change. Personally, I think you should have some of the story involving Inuyasha and the mark on him because the bond should flow both ways, especially now that they are officially mated. I like how Kagome is a neko-hanyou in this fic. She always did seem a bit of a cat person and she and Inuyasha certainly fought like cats and dogs in the manga. Overall, great fic and I hope when this one is done their is a sequel!
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Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely love the fanfic you wrote and I never get tired of it ^ ^ I think I have so far read it around 7 times and I am going to read it all again *smiles*
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Title: GOOD JOB!!
Reviewed By: Bluefire001 On: June 19, 2006 21:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing was different and refreshing! I also have to say it was a much needed break from all the other types. I didn't notice one spelling or grammar mistake but that may b/c i'm just dumb!hehe! For orginality/creativity i gave you a ten b/c your story was nothing like any other stories i've read.I loved you story..it was very amusing though dark at times but everybody has a abdtime in life..and rape actually happens soo those who flamed youb/c of it should just bugg OFF!!! My overall rating would be higher then a 10 but that's the highest we could give so i gave you a 10 and YOU DESERVED IT!!!!! Props to you on a good story!!! Bluefire001
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Title: Two thumbs WAY up!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 15:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good ending!! Although ending it will make me upset but I respect that you finished a story you dont even like. Thats a true author there. Great job! It wasnt too sudden and definately didnt suck. Great job!!
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Title: Akihana!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: June 19, 2006 06:16 EDT
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You know I loved this story from start to finish, and I thank you for sticking with it even through the shit reviews. I enjoyed it immensely, and you really had my imagination going. I'm a fan of dark fiction and serious angst, so I had a ball. Thanks for the shout out, girly, & for hitting me at the other spot. I hadn't seen you in a minute and I was actually looking for you. I'm not supposed to be on this site >.> LOL, but as you can see, I do what I want-and I wanted to review you, so here I am. Excellent stuffs, girl. I applaud you. Luv & Plushies, InuGrrrl
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Title: Short, but sweet.
Reviewed By: forsakenfaith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will be honest and say i'm a little un-happy with how short it is. I wish it would have been longer, but I have been reading what you said about how you were just writting an ending for us reviewers. That's why i'm not really angry about it. I know how hard it is to write a story that the author Themself dowsn't enjoy. I also did like the happy note that it ended on. It didn't say that everything would always be good and that everyone lived happaly everafter, as so many fanfictions do. (And i am even guilty of such.) It just gave you the sense of happy-ness and you leave the fanfiction with a smile on your face. Things may have been a bit rished but not overly so. And that also goes back to the lack of liking the story. Over all I really did like this story. It was worth reading and was well written. The idea was unique and different (to me anyway). I haven't read much dark-fiction, because i'm not a big fan of it. I personally like drama, but not torture and death in a fanfiction. ANYWAY!!! Back to the review itself. I'm basically reviewing for the whole story here. I liked the way you put your words together and the words you used.I liked how you had Inuyasha's family stand up for Kagome. I also really liked how Sesshomaru was a little more open, and yet still had his trademark additude. I think maybe kagome was a little bit meekish, but it worked with the story. Inuyasha seemed to be himself, maybe a little bit more brutal...but still as dumb at times. I liked how it was more real life in the fact that Kagome didn't all the suden feel ok around Inuyasha. It took time. I'm glad you showed the conflist there. I wish that Inuyahsa's dad was in later chapters, since he did play a pretty big part in them (kagome and inuyasha) getting together, once they were at his home. The chapter where Kagome escaped to inuyasha's father's home was very well written. I cryed during that chapter and stidll have it stuck in my head. The whole story could have been made even greater if more time had been spent on it, but as you have said..time is not an easy thing to get ahold of. The story in itself was very well done and always prof-read. I think one of the best compliments i can give is that some of your chapters have stayed burned into my brain and i think they will for a long time. That's how good i thought certain chapters were. This is getting to be long. Maybe i should just take off here and start a story. jk. I'm sorry if there are some rude comments in here, but i believe in being honest when it comes to reviews. I mean that's what they are for. But, Over all the little pet-peeves i have, this story was still awsome. Great job and i hope to see more stories out by you. Keep up the good work. (that sounds so corny!) Byes. - Forsaken Faith
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Reviewed By: silverneko On: June 19, 2006 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really enjoyed your story. i dont know if i was jsut emotional when i read it or what it was but i started to cry at some parts. you are a very talented writer and i think this has been one of the best stories i have ever read. it was dark but then got happy and i dont think many authors can do that. you havea real talent. thank you for writing this
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: June 18, 2006 22:23 EDT
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well i am glad you finished it. great job. i really liked this ending.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 21:29 EDT
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Awww boo to whoever flamed you. @_@ This was a good fic, I liked it. I did notice that the ending was a tad tacked on if anything, but otherwise I enjoyed the change in characters from beginning to end. Two thumbs up from meh! ^^
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Reviewed By: _serendith On: June 18, 2006 15:41 EDT
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Don't feel bad about it - it is a creative work and you should feel pride in the result. I liked it well enough to want to get updates about it. I hope this isn't the end to your fiction writing because I would look forward to reading your things in the future. Don't let flamers get you down - they are only incapable of writing their own stories so attempt to get their dues by picking at others' works.
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Title: Love!
Reviewed By: Kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! I completely love the story that you made so far and can't wait for your Epilogue! Keep up the hard work and I am glad that you put so much effort into writting the story even though you are busy with other things ^^ Thanks again for the hard work
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Reviewed By: INIEisMINE!! On: May 21, 2006 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey gurlie! i LOOOOVE this story..im SO glad u updated.. this storys awesome and im lovin every second of it! lol update soon and KEEP GOING!
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Reviewed By: Inuobsession911-old mm member On: May 21, 2006 04:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Sorry I meant to press 15 but obviously the 1 didnt go through. I read your latest chapter, I have to say it is a shame you will be writing the epilouge soon. Its truly a good story, and its good writing, but I can understand with all the stupid ppl telling u your are crzy for writing it. Personally I would like to see it progress more and have more happen because its just awesome but again like I said I can understand. No one is crazy for their writings. When you create a story you are creating a world entirely your own, your own views, your own thoughts, your own imagination. They are yours and no one elses. No one can judge if a story line is crazy or not. Crazy is determined by each person in a different way. I hope I didn't get to like scientific on you. Even though this story wasn't as big of a hit as you would like it to be I encourage you to keep writing, you are amazing at it.
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Title: Learning To Trust
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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