| "Learning to Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: annieaz On: February 20, 2006 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you relly got me into this update more i love it
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Title: ceep going
Reviewed By: inuyasha_fan56 On: February 20, 2006 18:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it update relly soon please
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: annieray On: February 20, 2006 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it update more
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 00:46 EST
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i liked this chap. kagomes getting better and inuyashas becoming less of an ass. see, people really can change. *ducks to avoid being run over by airborne object* DAMN FLYING PIGS HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I TOLD YOU AND YOUR STUPID THEROPISTS TO LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!! once again great job. please update soon.
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Title: I Know
Reviewed By: Kao-gurl On: February 19, 2006 22:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it is hard to put up with stupid reviews....though I do not write fanfiction I am a literary critic....I criticize and and am criticized. I love this story....I enjoy it very much and hope you continue to the end....please to do not delay the next update.....thank you
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Title: It hurts
Reviewed By: Blue eyes cryin in the rain On: February 19, 2006 21:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story stabs at my heart. I'm crying as I write this. So sadening. I see sun rising on this darkness though and it lets me push on.Do not stop writing. You have the gift.
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: AshleyW On: February 19, 2006 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I've been reading it for a hour or more so that should tell you how much I love it ^.^ or...I'm just really slow....anyway I can't wait till the next update!
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Title: You updated!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: February 19, 2006 15:48 EST
Comment/Review:
WOOT! I wasn't expecting this for awhile, so i'm UBER happy to see that you found the time to grace us with another chappie. Loved it as always. InuYasha is becoming so different. He still has kinks but he's really learning! I just know he'll relapse though because he's such cute lil' baka. It's really fun to see the role reversal, with Kags going through all the hanyou stuff. I've seen other fics try it, but never quite pull it off. You, however, do. Oh & YW on the nom. It was well deserved!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 24, 2006 08:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story ^^ why do all your fics involve inuyasha being a jerk and then begging forgiveness? XD i love watching him squirm =P i hope Kagome gets more confidence soon and surprises inuyasha ^.~ hope to hear from you again soon!
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Reviewed By: animereader0 On: January 04, 2006 01:33 EST
Comment/Review:
very good
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Title: o my that was great
Reviewed By: kags1 On: January 02, 2006 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just luv it very very much pls update it very soon pls
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 05:54 EST
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Just finished the few chaps and all I have to say is great. I love thet wicked yet romantic plot. InuYasha was such a jerk in the beginning, but now he's coming along. Great story and I wish you luck with it.
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Reviewed By: LucyQ On: December 31, 2005 05:14 EST
Comment/Review:
I don't have a problem with your writing, and while your storyline is a little naive, that is up to you. Your story, I respect that. You even seem to be rather good. However, in the future, instead of just pasting Inuyasha and Kagome's names onto characters that aren't them, you might consider making up new names for your characters and posting this in the original fiction section. The beauty of fan fiction is that you don't have to relearn your characters - devoted fans know the nuances of their favorite characters in and out (not that you're not, I'm sure). What is nice about it though, is that you can see other people's interpretations of your favorite characters, both in AU's and continuations. When you give your characters different upbringings they are bound to be slightly different, and it is fun trying to explore them in those 'what if' situations. However, and I do think you have made this mistake - sometimes people take weird fascimiles and paste characters names in. Okay. But see, the thing is, your characters aren't really Kagome and Inuyasha - moreso, you've even lost the semblances of the original story that makes them even more beautiful. This doesn't make your fic bad, just misnamed. And frankly, slightly slanderous on the parts of the characters within. Ultimately Kagome is brave and kind-this is why people like her. And Inuyasha is loyal and kind and cocky and really very complex, and your 'Inuyasha' is some kind of beating asshole. Yeah. Not gonna happen.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: December 30, 2005 23:17 EST
Comment/Review:
this is a really good story. please update.
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Title: I'm gonna miss this fic darn it!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 30, 2005 22:05 EST
Comment/Review:
But I understand...thanks for not leaving a cliffy. That would have killed me, lol. But also thanks for updating as much as you did. It's appreciated. Damn good fic!
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