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Reviewed By: ebit 333 On: April 20, 2006 18:57 EDT
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i would not be that forgiving. I can see what you mean by her wanting love. But if that happened to me or my friends i would tortur him until he begged for death. I don't care if he was stronger than me i would find a way! Then i would get all of his friends that helped.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 09:57 EDT
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I love this story I hope you upodate soon
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Title: Wishing for more chappies...
Reviewed By: Kewl! On: April 07, 2006 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUV IT! Why'd you stop? MUST... SEE... MORE... I could see nothing wrong with this fic. I think what some of these reviewers are calling "destroying the fandom" is just creativity. A note to reviewers who think that it's wrecking the fandom... THAT'S WHY IT'S ALTERNATE UNIVERSE!!!!!1!!1!!one
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Title: Learning to Trust
Reviewed By: inu-kago On: April 05, 2006 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story ahope your kelp writting. you should let what other say to get you down i think the story so far is great keep up the good work. by the way i hop you get back at inuasha you what he did to kagome. and what about Koga?
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Reviewed By: Emrald of My Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very enjoyable story! I'm happy I have finally gotten to read your new chapter! Please continue to update!!
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: inukag123 On: March 12, 2006 22:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST. PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE THIS IS SO COOL YOU HAVE SO MANY FANS DO THEM ALL A FAVORE AND UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Inuobsession911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 05:06 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akihana, I think your story is great. You might say it sounds a little wierd, but I think it's very original. I absolutely love it. It has such a great plot. Just the whole idea of it is awesome. Its not cool when Yash beats her though, but the whole concept of Kagome and Inuyasha Learning to Trust after all that is happened is great. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading. !5 out of 10!
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Title: Found it !
Reviewed By: Whiteraven08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 10:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn ive been looking for this story for about 5 6 monthes! Ive finally found it and im glad u updated. Please continue , ive been waiting so long to find it and id love for you to finsih it. Thankyou!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 03:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you story is definatly a dark one, and i like it even though i don't usually read them that much^^. sooooooo.... WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?!?!?! *whines* i've been waiting for it for sooooooooo long! i love your story, but i'm warning you, it's starting to loose it's charm if it gets too mild. don't loose the dakness of this fic too soon!!(i'm not flaming you, just warning!) well anyway, love your story and idea, keep your good work on ^^=
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 13:11 EST
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I really like this story I hope you update soon
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Title: learn to trust
Reviewed By: inu bc On: February 27, 2006 07:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story you shouldn't stop writng cause of a few people i love your story and can't want for more.
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Title: HI?.........no. HEY!
Reviewed By: Forsaken Faith On: February 26, 2006 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. It's unique and fun to read. At first i was pissed you had Inuyahsa act like that, but i understand the reasoning behing it all. And i understood why the things were that way already. Idk, maybe some people don't know much about what the demon matting is suppoed to be like. It's a bond for like and you always feel conected. AND i think what h Kagome's mom said had a big factor in her staying. She wanted what her mom said to be true and was waiting to be loved. She was safe with Inuysha's family and didn't want to go back. I understand it all. And i really like this chapter. It had more fluff. :D
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Reviewed By: hanyou_swimmer(nsi) On: February 24, 2006 11:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! I am really sorry you've had so many troubles with reviewers! I hope you don't abandon the story because that would be a shame. Being raised in different envirnoments, they are going to be different people. Plus with the added fact that Inuyasha is a full demon, without ANY human blood and Kagome is a hanyou who has been hunted her life, they are going to be different people. Demons, according to the manga, relay on instinct! I would like to see how Inuyasha grew to hate hanyous as much as he does, and maybe why he moved out of his parents home? I hope you continue the story!
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Reviewed By: tduke1999 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:11 EST
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i just stumbled on your story last night and i'm really sad to see you are having so much trouble with your reviewers. just remember, this is your story and you decide the outcome. don't let negative reviews get you down. i like how you are using the mating mark as a tie between kagome and inuyasha to pull her to him. people need to remember that this is fiction and is based in a fictional environment where demons and magic are common and you can't use real life as a gage for what the characters will do. yes, kagome and inuyasha are a little OOC, but isn't that the point of fanfiction? to explore other sides of the characters we love? i also like that you aren't making their reconciliation a slam dunk, inuyasha makes mistakes and kagome is still suffering from internal scars as a result of his abuse. i have to admit i can't see how inuyasha would have grown up to be so bitter towards hanyou when his family seems so open minded. i would like to see you flesh out inuyasha a little more in that aspect and explain how he became so bitter and hateful towards hanyou. maybe kikyou was a hanyou and betrayed him? just a thought. my only other comment would be that the first couple of chapters seem a little rushed, we really didn't see inuyasha coming around to kagome, although you did cover that in his thought process later on, it just might have been intersting to see that progression. other than that i think this is a wonderful story and i've also started reading your other stories and i love that you put a good deal of angst into each of them. i love angst when you know there's a happy ending around the corner!! keep up the good work and try not to let negative reviews get you down too much, there are those of us that would like to see you finish this story with the same quality of plot that you've used so far.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: andrearay On: February 20, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have a gift use it by updating some more please
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