| "Unfettered" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2011 19:14 EDT
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I loved this story. Great job on capturing the characters emotions. I know you said that you were going to add an epilogue but it has been a long time since you posted, so I guess we can consider it complete as it is. Even though there are a few loose ends that could be tied up, the story could end where you left it. So thank you for the enjoyable story and not leaving it on a cliffhanger. |
Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 00:47 EDT
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aww..loved it! and im so sad! this story is coming to an end! ive read it since you posted it but i dont think ive ever left a review cause im usually a lazy ass like that. haha. anyways i cant wait for the next/last chapter. hope it'll be up soon!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 04:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter, I was almost in tears when Taro was having to choose between ending the evil and dying or living as its servant. This was definitely an original way to purify the jewel which I was very glad to see. I hope for a very happy ending for the family.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2009 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting battle... good that kagome & inuyasha got taro back... happy ending?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 17:02 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 14:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is AWSOME! I hope u finish!I think you are a excellent writer!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awsome!Your a very good writer in my opinion.Keep writing more please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awsome!Your a very good writer in my opinion.Keep writing more please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Welcome back! Awesome chapter, I can't wait 4 the showdown. Will it be miko vs. miko or a giant free-4-all! I hope InuYasha windscars Kikyo's ass! I just would love to see a knock down drag out between Kagome and Kikyo. I think it's long over due! Great job~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... feel bad for taro... and kikyo is helping the demon... hope kagome & inuyasha destroy kikyo and the demon... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: blackenedlove On: February 22, 2009 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story, but Inuyasha and Kagome have been through the 'it's okay if you don't want to be with me, I'll suffer alone' stage WAY to many times, both for it to be natural and still have precedent. You'd think they'd've got it the second or third time.
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:00 EDT
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update soon! i cant wait to see what happens to inutaro and kikiyo.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 16:58 EDT
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AMAZING!!! and i've been reading so much fanfiction, you should believe me when i say that!! (usually i'm quite harsh at judging stories -a bad habit! X.X) it's such a shame you take so long to add chapters, but Do NoT WoRRy, FoR I SHall WaIT!!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! I had forgotten about this story! When I got the e-alert for the new chapter, it took me a while to reaquint myself with the storyline. It was well worth the year long wait! Damn Kikyo, I hope InuYasha kills her now! And, Kagome should use her powers to turn her body to ashes! The filthy b**ch! Great chapter! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 00:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... but kinda sad... taro gave up - then again he is just a little kid... hope inuyasha & kagome stay strong together and handle whatever kikyo and the bad guy throw at them... update when you can... please and thank you...
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