| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: Riks On: March 19, 2006 23:49 CST
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Aww... Poor Edo... -huggles Ed- I can't believe you'd torture him like this, you evil, evil person. >/ Bah. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 17, 2006 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwww.....Poor Edo-kun.....He's really depressed... Hope ya update soon!!!!!
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Title: Oh my God!! o_o;;
Reviewed By: Riks On: March 16, 2006 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!! I can't belive you... Why Ed??! My poor Ed... ;-; I can't imagine how bad he must feel... He must dead. Or atleast close to it. > O;; Poor, poor Ed...
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Reviewed By: queen of magicians [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 15:17 CST
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You better update soon. This is such a good story... I almost cried a few times. She has no memory. cruel cruel equivelent exchange. anyways awsome story, and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: carpadiem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just couldn't hold it back...I LOVE your story! Ch. 10 is great! and oh-so sad:( But it's amazing all the same! Well keep on writing! Whatever you write, i'll read and review!
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Title: YAY! 70 reviews
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: March 14, 2006 17:37 CST
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Why why why why why,normally I can stand a cliff hanger but you managed to get me to a point that I almost cried that it ended.I-I never saw it comming its just so- *on the verge of tears* I even went as far as to print it out 7 o'clock in the morning just so I can read it again at school ^.^ Pleaaase update I can't take the suspense any more
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Reviewed By: the brilliant dance x On: March 13, 2006 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh nooo! T_T I lost my memory of Ed! NOOOOO!! T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T T_T No more kissing and hugging T_T T_T T_T Ahh I wasn't expecting that to happen! I wonder why I only forgot about Ed....aw, he must be heartbroken! T_T Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 13, 2006 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn the Equivalent Exchange!!!!! Anyway, that was an amazingly great chapter!!!! I hope ya update soon!!!!
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Title: *sniff* *Sniff*
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! Why?! WHY?! Did you have to end it right there?! It was so GOOD!!! (and have you noticed that when you update...we review after?) BECAUSE ITS THE BEST IVE READ!!!! Please take your time on the next one so that it is better than the next!! ^.^ (this one was so AWSOME though)
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Title: WOAH! ^_^
Reviewed By: OpenWounds [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Stupid equivalent exhange! Anyway great chapter this story is totally cool!!!!! ME want more Update sooon!
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Reviewed By: Soruka On: March 12, 2006 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO SAD!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I can't wait! I always count down the days until you update! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Riks On: March 09, 2006 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DDx Me again!! ^ ^; AUGH!! You MUST update soon!!! @_@;; Eeeek... v v;; I LOVE IT!! I'm gonna diiieeeee if you don't... -whimpers- Review, that is. > >;; And I'm insanely hyper right now... Wow... >
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Title: ^_*
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: March 09, 2006 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm honestly at a lost of words here.I just don't know what to write,what can I write?! Your F.F just leaves me speechless,its the best F.F ever,I'm probaly repeating myself but its true I love your F.F & so do alot of others Full metal alchemist otakus!I showed 1 of me friends at school & as soon as she read the 1st chapter she was in love w/ this F.F just like me,so now everyday at school when we see each other we ask the same question "DID SHE UPDATE?!" & at lunch or during class we sneak on the computer just to read your F.F to see what's happening between Ed & reader! You sure have alot of fans now must feel great doesn't it soon you'll have over 100 reviews keep up the great work you rOx!!
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Reviewed By: the brilliant dance x On: March 08, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-is practically bouncing off the walls- Oh. My. Gosh. I love the new plot twist XD I read the letter and I was like HOLY %&%^!!!!! Where do you come up with all these ideas? They are wonderful! I can't wait to see where you go with this.... if 'I' die in the end, I seriously wouldn't mind. It would make such a great -yet sad- ending...Yeah, I'm weird, I like angsty things... oh I can't wait for the next chapters! -fidgets anxiosuly- I seriously can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah, I had a question...Now what was it...Oh! This is techinically a reader insert, isn't it? Then how is it still on media miner since they banned them? I wanted to nominate your story for the featured stories thing....but I was afraid I would end up getting your story deleted because it's a reader insert...>.< Anyways, please update as soon as you can!!
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