| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Title: the brilliant dance x
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhhhhhh! -wails uncontrollably- So saddddddd! T_T T_T T_T T_T I can't believe you actually made me die! T_T Buttttttttt that was soooo good! Oh god, so sad! T_T T_T T_T I love angst, so I loved the way you ended this story. I'm so sad it's over! T_T T_T -sniffles- Again, good job and I hope to see more stories from you in the future! ^___^
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Title: Onward to chapter 25!!!
Reviewed By: Ta-chan On: March 28, 2006 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUBARASHII !! That means wonderful in japanese which in exactly what your Fan Fiction is.You sure did take a twist I never saw it comming,ooh I just can't wait,I ask my friend every day "what do you think is gonna happen?" or "What if this happens.." I need the next chapter ^.^ Well theres really not much to say just keep up the great work & update soon...& good luck w/ school I know its so flippin annoying but thats why they made anime:to take our minds off our crapy reality -__-; sorry but n.e way good luck I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter ^_______^
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Title: Hooray! You Updated!!!
Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh heck yes, you updated!!! Very cool, the mission, I mean. Stupid girl who was all..yeah. But, that's okay, she got what she deserved! ^_^ Thanks for updating, look foward to reading the upcoming chapters!
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Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 24, 2006 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, you updated!!!!!!! The chapter was really great and awesome!!! I hope you update again soon!!!
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Reviewed By: RFox On: March 24, 2006 19:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I was waiting for this chapter and I'm glad it's out. There were just a few spelling errors and I haven't noticed any grammer ones in this particular chapter thus far. But there is one thing I can't help but comment on....Why did Mustang send Ed and the "girl" to that town? -Curious/knowing expression while raising a brow- I guess we'll all find out eventually. One more thing, school sucks and I understand that it can be a pain. ^_^ I understand it may take a while to update, but I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Riks On: March 24, 2006 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! Yay!! x3 You really do have a lot of reviews. > >;;
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 07:09 CST
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You updated!!! Thanks! I just love your story! I can't ever get enough of it! I have already read the whole thing (well what you have posted) like 9 times... Well I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: e.e
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy crap you have a lot of reviews!! Thats because you have a talent in writing really AWSOME stories!!!>.< If you become a famous(I think you already are)I will buy all of your books and go to all your book signings...and--and I look up to you even though you go to school and stuff! (I go to school too) you are such a great author!! I hope to be like you some day!!! You're so cool!!
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Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 16:28 CST
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Please update soon, I need something to come home to to make me happy. Please? I'm desperate to know what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 17:19 CST
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awww...c'mon, please update? School's probably being a pain right now, but that's why I've got this to come back to! Please update really really soon!
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Title: Please Hurry!!
Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! I really want to know what happens!!! I really LOVE this story ( I know I've said that a lot but I never get tired of saying it! ) Your FF is the best!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: elise756 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz chapter i am dyeing here
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Reviewed By: RFox On: March 21, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the originality of this story. I wish there were more chapters for me to read. I enjoyed it so much. You really know how to build up the readers anticipation. And what happened to Ed when the girl's memory of him was erased, I really felt sad for him. Poor guy. However, there is only two teeny little things I have to address. There are just a handful of spelling errors and a few grammer overlooks(errors) ^^; Other than that, this is one of the better stories on Fullmetal Alchemist. ^_^ I'm eagered to read more from you and I really can't wait.
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Title: Ta-chan
Reviewed By: yamikitsune1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah~~~ I love it the changing of the point of view was awesome! You really know how to keep Edward in character thats another reason why you & your F.F totally rOx.And the flash backs from when we first met >.< I really loved the lake part haha__ b-but you..you left it at a cliff-hanger again, must you break my heart when you end every chapter heh I'm just kidding but I really WAS crying at the end of the chapter please please please please update!!! I love your F.F soo- much its the only thing that cheers me up everyday when I come home from school,so please update & as always your doing a great job keep it up ^_^ From one of your many fans- Ta-chan
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so cool! You updated twice during the whole spring break! Loved the cliff hanger even though I hated it for...well being a cliff hanger. Update quick because...just because!
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