| "Disaster or Destiny?" Reviews/Comments [ 108 ] |
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Reviewed By: carpadiem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lurve your story but I haven't had a chance to read it for a while and I just noticed that you changed the self insertion and put the girls name in. This is just my personal opinion and I mean no harm, but I liked it better when we didn't know her name so I could put my own in :) I'm sure it won't take away from the story I'm just voicing something I noticed. Anyways keep up the good work you are an amazing writer and I love your story :)
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Reviewed By: SnakeCharmerFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! It is extremely well written and everyone seems to be in character......great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Daughter of Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I love your fan fic. But did you have to kill her. And what about Ed. That must of hurt. Don't worry I still love it. But PLEASE are you making a sequel. You can't end it that way. Even though it was a good ending. Is Marie going to come back? What about Ed and Al? Oh well, if you do put up a sequel, I will read it every time you update. Still think you fic is great.
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Reviewed By: Areai On: April 04, 2006 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story, please tell me that you are writing a sequel? please! This story was too good to leave it at that. I mean poor Ed, he's going to be an emotional wreck now *begs on her knees* Please!!!
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Title: I have no title
Reviewed By: yamikitsune1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 14:48 CDT
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How...how could you end like that,why why why >.< I mean personally I do love the ending,its just the dying & being seprated from Ed thats tearing my heart into threads. As soon I read the ending I have mixed emotions saddness,anger,confusion,happiness....I was just kinda sorta picturing the ending to be less angst to be honest. But that doesn't mean I still don't love your fan fiction! No way I'm still your fan ^_^ if you do choose to write more I'll be right here checking for updates everday as always ^__^ From your F.M.A F.F fan, Ta-chan *Tasha*
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Reviewed By: RFox On: April 03, 2006 14:42 CDT
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I don't mind the name Marie. ^_^ I just got a little confused I read that all your chapters were updated recently. Now I know why. You simply added a name and corrected the grammer and spelling erros. ^_^ Nice. However, I am sad to see Marie die. I wouldn't want Ed to seek revenge either. Despite the fact that Shane probably does need to be hunted down and.....-zips her lips- That's just a bit grotesque. I cried when Marie died. That was so sad. It's a shame that "I" had to die. Oh, and might I just say, this is one of the best FMA stories I've ever read so far. ^_^ I'm simply in love with it.
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Title: WTF
Reviewed By: Shadow wolf727 On: April 02, 2006 11:47 CDT
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whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa WHOA!! w-what happened who the HELL-o kitty is Marie?? & what happened to the last chap. I'm..I'm so confused...does this mean your gonna change the ending too...-_-; like I said I'm confused but never the less I still do loooove your F.F
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Black_wolf10 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...My....God! What happened!!! Why did you have to end it there!?!?!? Are you going to make a sequel???? Are you gonna' continue with another story?????? PLEASE?!?!?! Please think about it!!!! I really loved this story, I never wanted it to end! It was so good that I thought that every time I was reading it, I just kinda zoned out and I thought that it was all a dream, but I have the proof sitting in my lap (yes I printed out every single chapter, and I read it over and over again)! I just can't stop reading it, and I don't want it to be over! I always check my email every morning and night thinking that you are going to update, but I remember that you ended it... It's sooooo sad. But it was a TOTALY AWESOME STORY!!! I'm so not lying when I say that you are the best author to the best story ever!!!!!!!!!! This story is better than any I have ever read on Fanfiction.net or any other site! I hate to say this, I mean really hate to say it, but it was a good ending (the ending is the part I hate to say). Thanks for the greatest story ever!
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Title: *sniff sniff*
Reviewed By: AcidGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NUUUUUUUU!!! I promised myself not to cry!! I PROMISED!!! This is the BEST fanfic I've ever read! But why did she have to die!?!?!? If it were possible, you could make a sequel out of it couldn't you? *sniff* hold on I'm still crying... *silent pause* *sigh* Okay, I'm done. What an overwhelming story! I never thought ANY fanfic would make me so sad as to cry. And I look forward to reading more of your stories! Thank you for making such a wonderful, funny, exciting, sad, heart pounding, hand sweating, eye widening, mouth gaping, adventurous and romantic story! T.T Your the best!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww!!! You ended it there? *sigh* That was really sad. The girl died after all that. Really, though, I think this was a really good story. If you're going to write anymore, I'll be sure to catch them!
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Title: Very sad ending....
Reviewed By: AngelOfTheRain On: March 30, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a pretty sad ending, and you even killed me!!! (In the story, of course!) But overall, I'm sad because this awfully great story has ended (sigh) I hope you make more FMA stories soon!!!
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Title: TT TT
Reviewed By: Riks On: March 29, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...God... You killed me... I can't believe you... Do you like torturing Edward?? The poor man! He's already suffered so much... TT TT -sighs- Really, was such a good fic. I'm just sad it ended like this. Poor, poor Edward...
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Reviewed By: Soruka On: March 29, 2006 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 18:50 CST
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this fic was awesome. i absolutely loved it. i sure hope you write more fma fics would love to read them. keep up the great work.
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: openwounds [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have to say that this is best fanfic I ever read. I really couldn't beleive that I had died. I was pratically end tears while I was reading it and the end was absolutely awesome. Over all the story was beyond my expectations(which is great) and and I hope you write more in the future.
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