| "When in Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Title: Random arabic!
Reviewed By: olesialove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
And you, sadly, got it wrong. "misaa' el kher", yeah, does mean something similar to good afternoon / good evening, but that's the front part of the greeting. The response to that would be, as you'd probably write it, "misaa' en'nuur". Good morning would be "sabaah el kher" and, in response, "sabaah en'nuur" where the "kh", by the way, sounds like you're halfway into hacking out your tonsils. Actually, scratch that, it sounds like a cat about to vomit on clean carpet. Also, in the prologue, Pharaohs wouldn't be cremated and thus wouldn't have urns or ashes. For how popular this story appears to be, it really doesn't seem very engaging.
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Title: sequel to when in egypt??
Reviewed By: sliders245 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 05:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write sequel and I love When in Egypt story its great!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: animefairy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i rate your story 10 out of 10! it's a great story1 Really! i enjoyed it and i hope to read more of your stories too...i haven't finished reading the story yet but i'm at ch 20 and i love it so far!!!!! See ya!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 12:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chaptrer. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Daisuke14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE MOST AWESOME FIC I HAVE EVER READ!!! The only things that're bugging me right now are that 1) You didn't have Yugi and Joey speak Japanese in Egypt or Egyptian in Japan when they didn't want to be heard by other people and 2) You didn't have Yugi and Joey tell Atemu and Seto about the whole thing in the past, especially when Atemu proposed. Otherwise, THAT WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE READ IN MY LIFE!!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Aniras [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! Took meh like 3 days to read everything, but was greatly worth it! I just wanted to say this was a really great story, Ah enjoyed it very much, n just wanna say Ah can't wait ta read more a ur stuff!! ^.^ C ya round laters! OUT!! ~Aniras >]
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Title: wahhh it's over.....
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
......it's over..... but i can't wait for ya next fic!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
great i can't wait for the newest fanfic you'll make. what's the name gonna be called?
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet. I'm glad it all worked out for all of them, nice touch with the ring by the way ^_^ it made it sweeter...Thanks for a great read...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 08:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so glad they found each other again. I'm glad Yugi saved Atemu. I really loved it.
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Title: yayness!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 01:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah i don't have to dell with the baka anymore! (baka=boyfriend)
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Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, and as kagomegirl21 said, it'd be interesting if Atemu caught a glipse of Yugi's drawings. ^.^
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Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Their all back together again! *Dances* Update soon, damnit! *Throws you a cookie*
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ooh i cant wait to see what Atemu says when he sees all of Yugi's drawings of Antient Egypt!! update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: Cosmic Tomato [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! they're back together...It's a shame this is almost over, what am I gonna do?
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