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| "Chained" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Title: To hell With It....
Reviewed By: Trysted Inu Punishment On: July 31, 2006 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was a good update. LOL. Hmmm. Just don't give up... It's really a good update. Good job. Tryst
| Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 17:23 CDT
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lol, the long awaited chapter update is finally here! well, ok, maybe not so long, compared to SOME, but not to short either ;) ugh, I can't beleive you ended the chpater there though! I thought for sure we were in for some lemony goodness, or at least a little more citrusey than just kissing. *sighs* ah well. I guess I'll just have to wait. though hopefully not as long as before.....:P anyway, it was a good chpater, but really...slow paced, I think. kind of different then I expected but still good. and now I'm really intrigued to find out what's coming next. :D
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sweet that you gave Miroku and Sango some alone time. You did a really great job with their internal thinking and personalities. It was sad, then hopeful, then 'you go, girl!'. Yeah, like that. Great chapter. Okay, now this action whore needs a fix. Hm, it would be nice to see Kagome's new toys in action. They both need a kick butt session to bring up their sense of ability to defend themselves and to slay the enemy. A test of sorts. What is Sesshoumaru up to while all of this is going on? Is he trying to find allies now? Well, I can't wait for the next chappie. Considering Sango's new attitude, she shouldn't make Miroku wait for anything else. He's waited long enough and they might not make it out of the next battle alive. So, there is the two cents that you asked for. Nice chappie. Snow
| Title: Update
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: July 28, 2006 13:56 CDT
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Hiiiiiiii!!!!! Now I'm normally a very patient person but this is just gettin' ridiculous. You haven' updated in almost TWO MONTHS! Could you please update soon. I'll reveiw again after summer break just in case your on vacation now. Anyways, hope to see a new chapter soon, Kiki33
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! thought you could get rid of me with what matters the most, eh? I think somewhere in the beginning chapters you said something about "giddy hyper sleepy" looks... which i most definitely have... (it's two thirty in the morning... and i've been reading this story, again, front to back, since... i'm not sure when but it was a long time, because I have the tendency to over analyze especially when i'm reading... O_O) agh! Your fanfics are too addicting! stop being such a good writer. =P sorry, as I said... hyper, tired, so... if I'm that much from reading, you must be wayyyy more from writing. -salutes you- just W.O.W. you don't cease to amaze me with them writin' skills. you should consider sending some of these stories in to rumiko... doubt she'd not use this story as plans for the fifth movie... sorry, I've been like ranting on the entire time about something barely relevant... well... I suppose you must submit to people like me when you write for open audiences. =D (no regrets, though? hm...)well. fanfiction is REALLY good. can't wait for THE NEXT CHAPTERS! UPDATE!!! (i chose not to bother you while i was reading originally... only to strike now and make you go insane. is it fun?) well... sorry.. lard. well. update soon, i doubt i'm logged in [too, like, blargh to do that, and the computer keeps screwing up like it used to with "what matters the most"]. TWENTY PHALANGES UP! yay! X_x ____insert user here.
| Title: Chapter 66
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops, I don't think that I reviewed. Short chappie, but interesting. So, Inu can speak with the horses. I'm glad that they are willing to take them and I hope that they succeed. If I was Kagome, I sure would be tempted to stay in her time. I am anxious about how the journey will turn out. I'm really impressed with Sesshoumaru's attitude about this entire thing. He seems to be taking it quite well. Well, I hope that you are able to get another chappie out soon. But, don't take that as pressure. Feel free to email me if your need a sounding board in order to help you get the plot moving. Snow
| Title: Noooo.......
Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Where's the rest?! I NEED more!! (JK) seriously though, you can't just leave it that way! It's getting too good! (even if it is a little long ^_^) But i love ur writing. i love the way you make all of them seem so real...i wish i could write like u do. this is awesome! please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Lamb (formerly ....###.....####....###) On: June 01, 2006 17:23 CDT
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lol, don't worry about it! believe me, most of the people on this site are willing to give a LOT (sometimes too much in my opinion...) leeway for stories, and yours isn't REALLY soo bad. just a little, so it's nothing to concern yourself with, especially cause I think that all of your loyal readers will also be MORE than willing to give the needed leeway, and ignore any inaccuracies. :) hmm...I'd like to say another great chapter, but it was soo SHORT! *pouts* sigh, I guess I just have to suffer and wait for the next hopefully *coughs* LONGER chapter.... and just so you know I'm only joking, I really don't mind that your chapter was so short. A lot of people get really stressed out when someone says something like that, so, while you may have been able to tell that it was just a litte (very little) bit of humour, I just thought that I would take the extra step to ensure I wasn't pressuring you or anything....Oh boy, I think I'm babbling again....
| Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 12:54 CDT
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wow your back! Thought you fell off the face of the planet taking your story spinning skills with you. Glad your back! Hope you get some rest soon from your busy life, i cna understand that though, i jsut finished finals.
| Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: May 30, 2006 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, it's really late. I'm going to say, that was pretty good. Wanted to add a d word there, but lang. Anyway, I loved the new update. Good for Inu. Avoiding a fight. Hehehe. Also, ummm. I lost my train of thought. Tryst. LOL. :)
| Title: it's me again =)
Reviewed By: Leanne5582 =) On: May 16, 2006 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again.. AWESOME! I just wanted to give you one little sugestion. Since you kick arse and answer every ones review.. you might want to start doing a seperate chapter for the Author's Notes.. Just a thought... I'll actually go read the chapter now *smiles* lates
| Title: Chapter 47
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't believe that I reviewed this chapter, but I was reading back through the fic. This chapter brought tears to my eyes more than once. Inuyasha's suffering was raw and you made us feel his undeniable need for Sesshoumaru's comfort. The whines were what got me. *sniffles* It was comforting that Sesshoumaru gave in to Inuyasha's needs. All in all, well done. I do believe that you achieved your goal here. Snow
| Title: Chapter 65
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 23:15 CDT
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Oh, to answer your question about pavlov's response. He was a behavioral researcher and proved that you could train an animal to respond in specific ways to specific stimuli. So, what I was saying was that Naraku had so ingrained the desire to be subserviant into Inuyasha that he automatically behaves that way with one that he sees as more powerful than himself, one such creature being Sesshoumaru. A pavlovian response. We might call it a habit, but it is much stronger than that. Snowfall
| Title: Chapter 65
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha feels so guilty. I feel so sorry for him. And Kagome doesn't seem to know how to help him. It was very nice of Amaya to put a spell on the cloak for Kagome's protection. The description of the dagger was wonderful and it obviously has some hidden power. I am so worried about this trip and hope that Sesshoumaru follows them in order "to protect". I didn't get the significance of the thought that their father had Inuyasha in mind when he asked Sesshoumaru if he had someone to protect. I don't know if I could handle a big showdown before Kagome gets to see her family again. She does have a shard now, right? Okay, so you don't think that Sesshoumaru would care for a bazooka. How about a sniper rifle filled with bullets blessed by Miroku? Hehe. I can still see 'K'. Sesshoumaru should go and find SOMEthing that he would really be impressed by. I can see him smirking as he tosses a grenade without anyone seeing what he has done. Maybe Ji-chan...OMG! I can't give out the spoiler, but you know what Ji-chan has! Please send Sesshoumaru back to get it. Hehe, plus I want to see his reaction to a woman dressed in a bikini as she lays on the beach inside of the box in Kagome's living room. I can't imagine his reaction. LOL And mistaking the fire on the stove as a weapon. No one and nothing would be safe! LOL And then there is the tree that his brother was pinned to for fifty years, the brother that he didn't protect. Ah well. Enough musing. Chapter 65 was very nice. I liked the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. And if I didn't say so before, the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha was befitting how males would communicate. It was strange and beautiful. Great job. Snow
| Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 20:30 CDT
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such a sweet chapter and i love its simplicity. YNot much actually happens but you give the characters such life that it feels like a whole eon is happened. I can see it all painted inside my head...
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