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Reviewed By: ....###.....####....### On: May 09, 2006 19:32 CDT
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ooops! *is slightly embarrased* no I didn't realise you meant that as a joke - but no harm done. I actually did that once though - or almost. I started typing out all the ....####'s before I paused and took an actual look at what it was I was copying, and with a slap to my forhead realised what I was ACTUALLY supposed to do. XD lol well anyway, I am quite enjoying your story, although I must say that the whole inu/kag going back to her time is a little...hard to swallow. I mean I tottaly get WHY, I don't know if I personally could stand being away from my family for so long in such away etc. etc. But there are just sooo sooo (too many actually) risks, as well as the fact that they are going to be needed for the battle and need as much practice and training as possible. and what happens if they do manage to get back there, what then? I wonder if kagomes mother would 'allow' them to go back to fight this battle - or at least kagome.(I say 'allow' cause I'm not sure that if she did forbide it, that she could actually stop them from going back)Or Inuyasha might'n even try to keep her there to keep her safe. I dunno I just see a LOT of problems with it. Other than that, like I said, I am quite enjoying your story, and can't wait for more. :D P.S yes, I do listen to you...most of the time ;D but I guess I did miss that one in which you said that you were joking...unless perhaps it was merely a response to someone else's reveiw saying what I said, which since I haven't reall read any of the reviews, I wouldn't know that that's what you were talking about....eep I hope that made just the tiniest amount of sense. Also, I really like your choice of music :D (or most of it anyway)
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story yesterday, and it is REALLY good!! I must say, I'm impressed with the way you have portrayed Naraku. That seems like exactly the kind of thing he would have done. I think that Kikyou and Sesshoumaru were a little OOC, but such is what has to be done to keep a plot rolling smoothly. I am anxiously awaiting your next update! :D
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Reviewed By: ....###.....####....### On: May 06, 2006 22:12 CDT
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OI! I just left a review - most likely the one immedietly previous to this one - and in it I gave an example of how the ###'s and...'s formed the letter y, but you can't see it, as the site rearranged them XD so it was basically just a waste for me to have added that in my review and I hope that it didn't/doesn't cause you any confusion.
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Reviewed By: ....###.....####....### On: May 06, 2006 22:08 CDT
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I was just reading one of your authors notes, one of the ones mentioning how difficult it is to wite a review on this site because of al the ####.....#####.....'s you had to tyoe out, and (keeping in mind that I don't know if anyone else has already mentioned this to you or not) I figured I should write this and let you know that you're not actually supposed to write out all those ###'s and ...'s but the letters that the form..for example: ##....## .##..## ..#### ...## ...## ...## ...## is Y. I just really thought that maybe I should mention that to you, and hope that if someone else already has, or you figured it out that you won't be irritated by this. As for your story I am quite enjying it. and can't wait to read more :D
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Title: loved this chapter!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 15:32 CDT
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I have been away for awhile but am back now!! I absolutly LOVED this chapter. For the most part I don't like sess. but I really like how you moved his character but stuffed up to almost likable. Thank you!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 23:03 CDT
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Another dazzling chapter!!! Hehehe you have quitea following now!! I am curious to know how sess knew it too.. but then agia nhes pretty sharp maybe he jsut deduced it ne?
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Title: Hello. Double review....
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu/WinterMoon/Lalamoon On: May 04, 2006 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, well consider this a double review. Tryst: I liked this update. Rather troubling in some regards. But, that was a new switch on me. Rather than Sess getting intriguided with Kagome's world, he is put off by it. Hope Rin never get's dragged into the future... It my hurt his eyes when she gets back. LOL. Moon Girl: Cool. I hope to read a bit mre soon. Both: Update soon. Please? Tryst and Moon
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Title: Mind Control
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone accused you of stealing the mind control idea? Give me a break. That has been around since the dawn of time. I used Tokijin to control Sesshoumaru into attacking Inuyasha and I fully intend to use the idea in my next fic. After all, Naraku used a shard to control Kohaku's mind. Geeze, it's cannon. *rolls eyes* I also used King Oberon in a fic. People who didn't know their history accused me of stealing it from Tolkein. LOL Oberon has been around for centuries. He was a real bastard too. LOL Some people. Snow
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, all I could say is wow on those last chapters. And I don't get why do you hate Kagome I don't get why some people hate her? Well thats all I have to say, so keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahaha! Luke! I am your Father!! I'm okay... So I found you... It is I! Clouds of the SKY! under another alias on this lovely site!! Mahahahahaa! Finally I have discovered your wearabouts!!!! jk.
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Title: Chapter 63
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
63-Off to see the big bad demon. I sure hope that the consequences of them going there doesn't cause problems with Naraku. If it does, Amaya is not safe anymore. And I swear, if you kill her off, I"ll so totally flame you! I already like the picture of this demon character that you have drawn up. What kind of demon is it? I'll check back and see if you said before. Short chappie, but informative. Snow
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Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
62-LOL Miroku not groping Sango was a clear sign of the apocalypse. Good one. *sniffles* Inuyasha's eyes are so haunted. You really know how to make us curious, you know? And being subservient to Sesshoumaru is new. Is it a Pavlovian response or is it more than that? Inuyasha would have never accepted Sesshoumaru's protection before. Has he realized that he can't do it all alone? There is so much that we don't understand about Inuyasha right now. 'Kohaku'. Yes, I've used him as a reminder to the group in fics that I've written. Inuyasha defending Kagome's desire to go home was a wonderful turn around. So, next they have to get past Sesshoumaru. That might be a tough one. I don't think that he will let them go without him; not since he has become so protective of Inuyasha. Hm, hey! Maybe he could go through the well. That would be too cool. He could find weapons against Naraku. I guess all of that is a bit farfetched. But I could see him in battle fatigues with a bazooka hanging over his shoulder. Think: "K" from Gravitation. LOL Okay, a little more insanity for you. But, Kag's is going to be his sister-in-law. Maybe he should meet the family. Eh, I'm going to run out of room here. Again, great chapter. Snow
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Title: Chapter 61
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
61-I wonder why the captivity doesn't seem so far and away and distant to Inuyasha like it does to Kagome. Just what happened to Inuyasha? Are we ever going to find out? It was very thoughtful of Sesshoumaru to tell everyone not to question Inuyasha about anything. I think that is was good that everyone paired off so that they could recover before facing each other; keeping the pain level under control and re-enforcing relationships. The misunderstanding of Inuyasha's statement that they should be in bed was really cute. Him smelling her hair was so bittersweet. LOL Her long explanation about needing to go was done so funny. Almost a complete run on sentence. The way that you had him answer her was so angsty sweet and, of course, Inuyasha won't let her go alone. But, what will Sesshoumaru and Amaya say? That's going to be tough. And she told him that he was way more comfortable than any bed. And inside, he knew that he would never leave her again. How are his memories coming along? Maybe I'm just forgetting. Awesome chapter. A lot of interaction between the characters. Snow
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
60-That is great that Sesshoumaru is trying to drum up help from the group. I guess that whatever happened to Inuyasha really got to him. Bouts of silence causing suspicion. Don't I know about! That was too funny, but true. So, he is beginning to understand his father. Nice progression. Aw, Kag's and Inu play fighting. That was so cute. Oh wow! With Tensaiga's reaction to Sesshoumaru's thoughts, it's almost like his father is alive! Cool! Snow
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Title: Chapter 59
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
59-Hehe, Ayama's interactions with Kaede are quite amusing. Her thoughts are so sarcastic. Oh boy. I wonder just how Kaede is going to manage riding a fire horse. Hehe. Snow
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