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Title: Chapter 58
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
58-Kagome's condition is really sad and poor Inuyasha feels like he failed her. It isn't unlike him to be on a guilt trip. Poor guy feels responsible for everyone. And as always, Kagome tries to comfort him. Ooh, and belly butterfly kisses. Aw, he was given an excuse to take care of it. That was so sweet. It's going to take awhile for Kagome to get back on her feet, I guess. Snow
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Title: correction
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 01, 2006 09:28 CDT
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Opps! Discretion, not discetion.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 01, 2006 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I am late jumping on this train (your story.) I would like to say that I am really enjoying it. The chapters are shorter than most others; however, they are usually sharp and to the point, and your updates quick to appear. The only part that was awkward for me, was the OCC of Sesshoumaru, where his brother was sleeping on his chest. You know that we really want them to love each other, but it was hard for me to think that the boys would be this sensible, and lower their testerone levels this much. In your writing style, you waste no words. I think you are doing a great job! Want to also put my vote in on Kagome and InuYasha having a happy ending. I know this is at the discetion of the writer's direction of the storyline. Again, great job! Cynbad146
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:12 CDT
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sorry about not reviewing sooner! i was in the middle of one whe nthe power went out, by the time it came back on i had quite forgotten what i was doing!! Great chapters, i am excited to see where this little excursion of thiers leads. If i know you you have something up yoursleave and its probably devious.. but thats what i love, i love the not knowing, the twists and turns that keep me begging for more!! are you sure your not using some of amaya's mindspells on me? =P
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Title: really last thing..
Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:05 CDT
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Am I annoying you yet? Just wanted to say that I really liked the title of the one chapter.. "Sess's voice and kag's kiss" tee hee! (sorry if I got that a little off... later
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:00 CDT
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I'm your 100th review... I think.. thank you so much for responding to me.. it made me feel all warm and fuzzy 8-) I just realized somthing.. you're gonna put poor inu and kag thru more shit on the way to the well aren't you.. grrrr... poor kids.. you could give them Amaya's invisiblity cloak thing.. or.. even tho I'm prolly gonna hate myself for even sugesting this... you could make when they get back to her time.. something happened w/ the fam.. *pouts and kicks self for own stupidity* please don't do that... oh! what kind of cat do you have!? I love kitties.. I want kirara for my very own *sighs* Anyway.. I'm sure u have ideas and stuff .. just thought I'd throw that in there ^_^ (ok I actually don't know what that face is supoesed to be... but I think it's cute) oh.. I'm ADD too btw, thank you for updating so soon..I'm a bitch... more? peas and carrots? one more thing.. if I may.. how old are you? it doesn't really matter but I'm wondering =D so ttyl
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Title: Spacy I think
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 23:58 CDT
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NOOOO!!! You just get my mouth wet with interest and then it stops and I sit at the comp. screaming no. Well.....maybe not always, just when I have the energy. Great I'm so hooked on your story. Thanks. I still want to see in your head, because your imagination can't be that bad! And I'm sorry about making you think of fishing. I'm so spacy... it is hard to concentrate because there is a marathon of the original Star Treck without commercials. It's not my geek thing. I love the story *whines* just keep it comming. *looks at TV* Yea Trouble with Tribbles is on...Yes my fav. episode!!
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Title: lol... yay.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 30, 2006 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. That was a cool set of updates.. but come on... I wanna know more about what sess is going to say to inu about leaving to another era when nara is still after them... Update soon, please?
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 (not signed in) On: April 30, 2006 16:48 CDT
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P.S... Leanne again.. my apoilgies if my previous review didn't make much since.. I guess for part of it my fingers couldn't keep up with my brain.. sad neh? Antyway.. I really like the brotherly Sess thing.. it was a little strange to see.. well read.. sess holding inu.. but I guess the times were different.. also a different country (FYI I live in Texas, USA). I mean.. I could MAYBE see my brother holding me like that.. but not so much my sister.. being as I'm a chick.. and the youngest.. However.. I remember thinking something simular concerning Sango and Kohaku in one of the movies.. I was under the impression that the Japanese didn't show as much affection.. as say.. me.. a native Texas obsessed with hugs. But I guess families are closer.. ok.. I'm making my own head hurt... it doesn't matter.. you wrote the story the way you wanted to (which again.. ROCKS!) I mean.. if you'd so desired you could TOTALLY change the characters.. the beauty of fan fics. :-)Oh yeah.. last thing.. I think.. as to my statement in the previous review about inu and nazuna.. I meant that in one fan fic I read, the name of which escapes me, there was refernce to Inuyasha dating Nazuna.. and at least that didn't make me gag or cringe. Ok.. one more thing.. I noticed that you do a lot of Yaoi. I really have no problem with that.. but I guess.. I just see Inuyasha with Kagome and Miroku with Sango.. and anything else weirds me out.. I did see this brief.. very stange kagomeXsango thing in another fan fic .. then Sess somehow comes in to the picture.. yeah.. it ended up being Miroku's perverted dream then nightmare.. but anyway... I really am going to stop now.. bye (last thing I promise if ure intrested in my rambling u can email me at Leanne5582@aol.com )
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 (not signed in) On: April 30, 2006 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I REALLY like your story. Honestly when I saw all the Naraku stuff I was a little leary... worried it might be a Naraku/Kagome fic.. I don't get those... I'[m a pretty die hard inu/kag fan. I try to be open minded.. but.. well.. I hate Kikyo with a firey passion and she's the only one I could see inu w/ other than Kagome (bleh Kikyo) I did see reference to inu and Nazuna (from the spider heads episode) Anyway.. enough of my ranting...As I said.. I really like your story. Usually I'm not big on OC's.. but urs.. Amaya and the horses really fit.. and that's rare... it seems like they could actually be part of the series/manga etc. I just read ch 61 I believe.. "Comfortable" I think.. I can't wait for the next chapter! And inuyasha's first human night w/ kagome and his new softer side! YEY! (ok I'm a dork). Also.. if I may give my opinion.. I think you should hook up fluffy (sess in case u didn't realize) and Amaya. Tee Hee.... oh! and like she calls inuyasha "puppy" she should call Sess (can't spell his whole name) "Fluffy" tee hee.. but that's my opinion.. obviously its your story.. you don't know me from Eve.. so why should you take my advice.. but there it is.. Oh! also.. I love all your inner monolouge type things.. well.. I like your writing style. Very smooth and intelligent but not so much to make one feel they are being talked down to.. Ok now really enough of my rambling.. the longest review I've ever left.. Keep up the fantastic work! ~ Leanne
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 30, 2006 15:32 CDT
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Woot! new chappies! More exitement than ever! I think I will read your other fic thanx.
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Title: LOL.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 30, 2006 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... That was new. What else ya got for us? I really want more. Poor Inuyasha. I hope her mother won't be to mad at him. hehehe... Update soon. Tryst.
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Title: McSlave44
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 23:17 CDT
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Thats it?! BUt but.....*whines* I want more! I love the story, though. And it is good that Inu is goning easy on Kag about returning home. It's refreshing to say the least. Just keep the chaps. coming 'casue I am hooked. Hooked, lined, and your reeling me on in. *insert giggle here* *looking into your head* Damn I can't see your vision of the story. I want to crawl into your head and see the rest of the story! I think I sat to long reading again, energy overflow. Keep'um coming!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_cute_doggy_ears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 14:37 CDT
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Inuyasha let Kagome go without a fight ...? He is a changed person but the change is welcome to me. Love the story and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is a great story! This is the first ff I've read on this site and know that I finished with ch 59 it lett me thinking. Is Amya going to make this other character an ally or another problem?
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