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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 27, 2006 10:17 CDT
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Nice update, if a little confusing. My dear SISTER maelia8 (the one that filled all 4000 characters) just so you know, was lying and I do read yaoi! I just didn't find the fic and also was a little daunted that it was a Sesshomaru / Inu-Yasha pairing. Kinda gross. Bur if dearest Sesshy is in it, I suppose I might have to try it out. Anyway, my evil sister was giggleing as she wrote that in an insane manner, so you'll excuse her.Muahahahahahah, die maelia8, die! ahem. Thanks for writing
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Title: question....
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon (not logged) On: April 26, 2006 21:17 CDT
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First off, you're story is still great! wonderful job *round of applause* ... second, did you ever figure out what Miroku meant? and do you know if Kagome means anything? I forgot and I'm presently too lasy to go back through the chapters *.* anyways, update soon!! c-ya!! ^_^
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:32 CDT
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good chapter, short but thats all i need is a little bit to tide me over till the next time! this is definitly taking a new turn, i didn't see this coming and it makes even more curious to find out whats going to happen! Keep up the great work
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Title: Keep 'um coming
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 19:09 CDT
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Yes another chap. just for me. Yea! All that Jazz Is an interesting filler, that has left me wanting more. I love the story so much, that I had to re-read it. Thanx for digging in you imagination. And don't worry it is that unquie bit of insane that lets people write the way they do. Keep 'um coming!
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Title: LOL.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 26, 2006 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe. You know, I'm learning Japanese from reading your fics. It's starting to get into my own more and more. Anyway... Whats going on here? I hope it's all going okay. Please don't let nara find them to soon. Is Inuyasha going to be okay? Kagome has me concerned too. What about the well? It seems I'm always asking that question. Any way... Please update. Soon. and by the way... Mustard is good for lots of ailments too. Especially stomach viruses. I use it on a lot of things. Well, for eating. and for when my dogs are sick. Saved my dog from dying of parvo. that and gatorade. Okay. Ranting. Update soon. Bye. Tryst/Punishment of the Inu.
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Reviewed By: Lunar Youkai On: April 26, 2006 12:08 CDT
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If you are going to have a feast scene right after they get broken by the sorceress, then remember that after a lond period of very little or no food. The stomach will seriously cramp and reject what they will have eaten. Unless it is eaten very slowly and thouroly. Just though you might want to use that in your next chap. I love the story, very good.
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Title: McSlave44
Reviewed By: McSlave44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 07:29 CDT
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I think this whole story is refreshing new idea. Just wow to you. I think my fav. part is when Sessy comforts Inuyasha through out the night. Aniother one is the angst I got when Inu was being "petted" like a dog by Naraku. The bastard. You can really put your readers into the shoes of the char. in your storys. I love it. The sorceress is an excellent person to have people move around. This is so good I am basically bouncing in my seat wanting to read the rest of your story. You are doing a really good job,scrap that. You are doing an excellent job and I can't wait for the next chap. But since I just spent like 3 hrs reading all the story and it is really really late......or really early I think I am off to bed. Quickly while I am asleep make another chap. spring forth from your imagination, so I can read it again in the morning. I just love it!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! I think I am sleep deprived.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 01:42 CDT
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Another awesome chapter!!! I am sorry to hear you weren't feeling well, i am glad you are better though! I am glad you liked my idea and you can use it any way you see fit weather for this story or not! Hope to see more updates soon!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, your story had definetly caught my interest. Although, I find this need to tell you that this story has alot of grammatical errors. I am by no means a proffessional english writter, nor is it my first language... but it's very obvious when the sentence is written correctly, yet some words have been misplaced. Anyways... Back to the story: Great stuff! Keep it up!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 18, 2006 13:50 CDT
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WHOA! I didn't realise that................I WAS THE EIGHTIETH REVIEWER!!!! I MADE 80 I MADE 80 I MADE 80 I MADE 80 and now it's eighty one! P.S. this is supposed to be sung in an annoying chant.
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Reviewed By: Lady Orange On: April 18, 2006 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The usuall rating of course! This was an eccellent update with all the satisfying touches that only the best of stories can bring. I'm willing to bet everything I hold dear, that this fic will get one hundred reveiws by the time it's done.........-Lady Orange.........P.S. I hope you are good at ending stories because somtimes I'll read a really good fanfic that has a very disjointed, badly constructed ending. Thank you.
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Title: i.............LUVER IT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kwelgurl On: April 17, 2006 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if i could i would rate your story 100!!you are a great writer!!and the brotherly moments are seriously cool.i just have one thing to say....PLEASE CONTINUE!!if not my muse shaydee will come and force feed you chocolate covered carrots!!*not flame or threat*
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Title: You have nothing to worry about.
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: April 17, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's pretty late so I'm gonna make this short. You got me wanting more. Again. So, now what? There's still that final fight with naraku... I hope Amaya will make it out okay. Well, thats all for now. Tryst.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:48 CDT
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OMG, OMG OMG!!! The moment I have been waiting 57 chapters for!!! Thier finally reunited!!! I cannot wait to see what coming next! I am sure you have plenty of ideas floating around that mind of yours! You always seem to throw us a curve ball when we least expect it.. so what is it? ohh I got a good idea.. maybe naraku suspects that someone might try and get kagome out so he plants a incarnation ro something in her, that lies dormant until she comes to sesshies place.. i dunno maybe its a dumb idea but hey maybe it will get your mental jucies flowing!! Your an amazing writer and I am always haning off every written word and feeling you convey! Keep it up!
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Title: YEAH
Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: April 16, 2006 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe how good this story has gotten over time. I can't wait for another chapter!
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