| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: April 30, 2007 11:40 PDT
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yash is gonna eventually have to make some decisions cuz everything that sango and miro are saying is true. but, it just seems that everyone is in too deep to just walk away. man, seppuku is sounding better and better. but, then the fic would be over. :( i guess the thing that has to happen in these cases is that sh*t just gets so deep and outta hand that everything explodes. then everyone finds sh*t out in the worst possible ways. XD at least, that's been my experience with keeping important stuff from people. although, this scenario has me beat. lmao can't wait for more and good luck this week with exams. banzai!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 09:27 PDT
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Great chapter! I'm glad that Kagome finally stood up for herself and told Bankostu off. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: peavine85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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The names you have given to your last two chapters are great. It might seem silly to be commenting on them, but the chapter titles are sometimes half the fun (if they are good ones).
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 21:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! yay I love this fiction so much but you already know that! when is Inu gonna find out about kagome? On another note the I've had lost of homework to so the pic is almost done!! Go you! ~Sadie~
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Title: Chappie 21
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:51 PDT
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Yeah Kags, it sucks how, on seemingly scheduled intervals, something horrible happens, like some sort of higher power it putting you through hell :P. --- Good chapter again, as a note, a few letters in the start of the chapter are red for some reason, but meh. Also, forgive me for being a hentai, but I read Sangos line "I can see it on her face", and I just laughed and blushed...I am sorry, heh heh. I have been hanging around you and Grrrl for too long. --- Also, way to have Kagome tell that dipshit to shove it! She needs to get a few goods shots on him before this story ends. Or at elast a kick in the balls :P.
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Reviewed By: inukag_obsession(nsi) On: April 29, 2007 19:51 PDT
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Ahh, I had forgotten about that... But wow.. Kag standing up to Bank like that... bravee... What now? :S What happens when he gets mad at her and goes after her family... would he? Aah, can't wait for the next!!
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Reviewed By: Kat8125 On: April 27, 2007 17:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon!! I love this story.
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Reviewed By: jewell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 07:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow story is brilliant. I love it! Most interesting fic i've ever read please keep it up and update it soon!!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: April 16, 2007 19:53 PDT
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so true. lol. this chapter, I think was one where relationships start to reveal their true intentions. like rin? she was really great in this. and I think kikyo is finally start to think about what's going on around her, specifically with Yash and all that. loved this chap. and you know what? I completely forgot about Yash's demon side so in a fight with him and bank, your right. and one more thing, I agree, bank is really creepy.... and cunning. lol.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:47 PDT
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*grins* YES!!! I can't wait for you to update this story again. Its been too long with out another mouth watering chapter. Im glad Rin figured out who beat up kags. At least, if something happened to kagome, Rin could go after bank. uhm, i have more to say, but i wanna write that email. So keep up the good work and i will eagerly await the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!! Kag and Rin fess up...well at least to each other anyway!!!! Miro is my new hero (hehe, that rhymed!), and i feel terrible for Inu. Sesshiles is in for a rude awakening, and who knows maybe we'll finally get to meet Kenren? Awesome chap, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 23:22 PDT
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i can't wait till sesshy and rin meet again! thats gonna be good! (next chapter????) stupid kikyo... can't believe shes actually picking up that somethings wrong. guess she isnt quite the dumb bitch i wish she was. lol. (lotta kikyo hate going on in my corner) is there gonna be a brawl between kags and kik? that would be HILARIOUS! great chapter (as ALWAYS) can't wait to read more of your wonderful work :D
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Reviewed By: 2lazy2putmynamein On: April 09, 2007 23:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao I loved miroku's comments, btw one pic's done I making two for you :D ~Sadie~ aka moon_essence1
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 22:16 PDT
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You kill me, you really do ._. Just have Kikyou shot and we'll all be happy. Really. You should do that.
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 11:33 PDT
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I'm holding u to that promise =D
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