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Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: April 09, 2007 10:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
things are slowly coming out and i can't wait 'till all the sh*t hits the fan. what fun. ha, poor miro and his sesshophobia! i don't blame him, tho... he cut sesshiles pony tail?! that would do it! lmao. t.c
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 09:33 PDT
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I knew I was right about Kenren being Seshilles(love that name!)! Great chapter! I'm glad that Kagome and Rin had that talk. And, like I said before, Miroku is hilarious! I love how dramatic he is, "and then I'll die.", "get thee behind me, Satan." funny! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:14 PDT
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*whoots!!!* write more,. it's getting better and better!!!!!!! personally i can't wait 'till Kikyo is out of the game *go kagome!* !! and the cookies are a reward i give for the well done job, it's and achievement. not that many authors have received them XDXD LoL!! ^.^so have more; *offers cookies, once again* update soon! i'm so hooked on this story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:29 PDT
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so yeah, sess is staying over and so is kikyo. and miroku, is he gonna get lucky w/ sango? i doubt it but he has his ways. and now kagome and rin are super duper close 'cause they know their secrets! yay! more soon!
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Reviewed By: inukag_obsession(nsi) On: April 08, 2007 22:26 PDT
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ooooh :D I loved this chap!!! Thank God Kagome finally told Rin... and I didn't know why Yasha is so stupid... So he has to marry a Higurashi... Hasn't he realized Kagome is a Higurashi as well? Damn, the baka!!!
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Title: Chappie 20 revised
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 21:11 PDT
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Ah, much easier to read, thankies! And yes, Drakey has no life...I check my email accounts like, almost every hour, so I'm always up to date on...updates...yeah...*runs*
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Title: Chappie 20
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:49 PDT
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Ah, more drama from the Taisho bros, and Rin and Kagome bond...very nice. I'm wondering, what sort of length are you looking at for this story? I mean, it seems early for Kagome to talk about confronting Bank this early. Meh, good chapter all around. And thank you for my new metaphor, Rin (love that hamster wheel!)
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Dion On: April 04, 2007 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a great cghapter.I'm glad Sesshiles has finally made an appearance.I'm really curious to find out more on this Kagejiro(I hope I spelled it right)I dont remember u mentioning him before.Now sesshiles has left that slut kagura I'm guessing that leaves a lot of room for rin to get in and I bet my that what she wanted to talk to inu about was a limiter right.Plz tell me I'm right.Anyways that was a great chapter and i hope my review doesn't seem all out of wacc.Plz update soon. Your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:43 PDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: maryaxe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 09:25 PDT
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I just started to read this story but I just have to say it's so different reading about places and things that I know! I live in Ocean County, it's so weird seeing places like OCC and Monmouth!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 05:18 PDT
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That's it? But I want to know what happens next! *reframes from pouting like a child*....Anyway I must say you have come a long way. I did read COTD (for the most part). It was nice but it has certain flaws that I am proud to annouce don't show up here. All the characters a pretty well developed. Great one liners/sayings. (I think I'm going to have to use some of them myself!) At no point has the story dragged or felt "spammy". And there is a plot along with interesting little subplots along the way. Some of which I can't wait to see how they play out. Even with my guessing and theories I'm just itching to see what you do with them. The characters all get their fair share of "stage time". Which is hard to do when you have a lot of main characters but you're doing fine so don't worry about that. I really liked that you put the quotes and special vocabulary in this story. It makes it unquie, not many authors do this. Plus it's nice to have something extra to look forward to when I read the story. I'm not really for the whole D/S thing and I thought I'd just end up breezing through those parts but I actually liked them. They were nice and sometimes fun to read. Of course I know nothing of how the true world of S&M or D/S work besides the common knowledge stuff so if it's not all "right" I wouldn't know. And thank you for clearing up the whole concealment charm issue. It bugged me that Inuyasha never smelled that it was Kagome. But after you explained how they work in your story it all became clear. I suppose I should mention how I thought that you would just have Inuyasha dangle the information about Rin over Sess' head in order to get him to help out with Kagome's situation. I should have known better. From what I have learned from your style of writing that would have been to simple. You never do things the "easy" way. Not saying that's a bad thing, it just makes me wonder if Miroku will temparily move in with Sango because he just prefers not to be around Sess that much. Not to mention that even with the new wrinkle in their relationship I just don't see Yash letting Kagome stay anywhere but his house until he repays Ban. I won't go into the overcrowded house issue, Inu ignoring his girlfriend, or how he is going to contact Rin to tell her not to drop by. Hopefully it won't all blow up in Yash's face at the same time but where's the fun in that? Can't wait for the next chapter! I trust that the rest of this story will be as good or better than what I have read so far. Once again congrats on the positive progress I have seen in your writing style. Sorry for any errors in here. We all can't be grammar goddesses...
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: April 02, 2007 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Hm, I have a feeling it was more a filler chapter to lay out the major groundwork for what's to come. I still loved it though. lol. So, you really think Inu could take on Bank and win? Wow. To be honest, the way you've written Bank in this fic, I'm not so sure. Seriously, Bank is one f-in scary and creepy SOB. lol. I'm rooting for Inuyasha though. If the author thinks INu could take Bank on, then I believe you. Of course, what you personally think, and what comes out on the screen sometimes depending on the flow and character when you write, is always subject to change. lol. Awesome writing, girl! I can't wait to read more about Sess. And when and if he ever finds out about Rin. And when and if Yash ever discovers that Kags is actually that girl he saved, etc. Love it. heh. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 10:24 PDT
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oooo Can't wait until Sess and Rin see each other again!
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Reviewed By: elly86 On: March 31, 2007 19:21 PDT
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hey your story is very good, but i just wanted to know the part that you put in french is literaly translated. Which makes it mad. In english you: shut the hel up, miroku! I'll kill you if you keep it up! which should have been translated as this if you wanted the same effect: ta gueule, miroku! Je vais te tuer si tu continues comme ça! I don't want to be rude by correcting you!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 14:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
freakin' A honey!!! an awesome chappie, i really don't get it how you can make the 'smallest' things have a meaning in the story later on!! *a talent i wish i had XD* keep posting!!! *offers chocolate cookies *
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