| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 23:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! fantastic chapter! and yay we got to learn more about fluffy! woot!!!! can't wait to see how the living arrangements work.... teehee
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the insults they exchange just keep getting better everytime... Wow that should be interesting with Sess, Inu and Miro all living in one apartment. Hopefully no Real World drama goes down, or maybe it should? I think Rin might shit a brick to know that HE is staying at Inu's!!!! That was a fast update, a little short but just enough to feed my appetite. Anyway, great job, and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inukag_obsession(nsi) On: March 30, 2007 18:10 PDT
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Oooo.... I loved it!! :D I really wasn't expecting this... like, at all! You keep him under your bed, huh? :D And what do you do with him? LOL
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 18:04 PDT
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Sess is da bomb! Only the stoic one could make me laugh. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemon or not... It still got my rocks off, so nah.
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Title: "what the..?" double take
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:23 PDT
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wiat wait wait.. back the train up.. i just read silveraliora's review and it just hit me in the head. Could Kenren be jiro's son and not Sesshomaru's? oh boy. You sneaky lil wench! throwing in a twist that isnt obvious until you read someone else review?! *thanks silver for pointing that out* now, lets sit back and eat a bowl of popcorn while pondering this new development.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*groans* i forgot to email you?! shit shit shit.. so incredibly busy, planning a funeral, uhm i have to go out of town for the next three days, but in that time i will for sure write up an adequate email. now on to the review! great chapter of course, i loved absolutely loved the bit with sesshomaru going through the fridge with a wooden spoon that was hilarous. and i love douglas adams so i totally got that part. And now in really curious. who is the missing sibling? what part does this sibling play in the story? when will rin bump into sesshomaru? will it be inuyasha who tells them, or will they do it by themselves.. and whats gonna happen with kagome? Inu mentioned that kikyou cheated on him at least twice, why does he tolerate that? *yeah i know kettle black that whole thing* but why doesnt he just dump kiks and go with kags. BOTH of them are HIGURASHI's.. right? hehe inu can just tell his dad that he switched. *grins* ah well keep up the good work and i will try and do what i said i would.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 12:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this chapter. You portrayed Sess really well. I also like your Miroku. For once someone didn't make him a sissy and a pushover! He's sly and I love you 'cause you made him very in-character. Another thing that attracts me about your stories is all the details you write. One can FEEL and SEE whatever your chars are going through. Great job! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 10:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, bachelor pad! woo hoo! hahaha. hmm, now he's that much closer to rin and... her son. i wonder how that's goin to happen. and what about kikyo? what's going to happen to her? or with her? or whatever. more soon please.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 09:46 PDT
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Another good chapter - and it will lead so wonderfully into squish and confrontations between Sess and Rin. Thanks for the heads up on Chapter 7. I usually read the previous chapter whenever a new one comes up, but I haven't gone that far back in a while. I like that you used this chapter to give us a look at Inu's childhood, even if it is from a side view. Is Jiro another one of those characters that I have forgotten from a previous chapter? Off to read chappie 7, and maybe a few others to reaquaint myself. Oh, BTW, I was reading some of the other replies where you had mentioned doing some research on the BDSM lifestyle. I have an aquaintance (who is also on the IYFanGuild) who is into the lifestyle if you have any questions. His name is new2meridies.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 08:14 PDT
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Okay, I take back what I said, er, typed about Rin's son being Sesshomaru's. I think I know, but I guess I'll just have to wait to find out. It's just like you to throw in a twist once I think I've figured it out. lol! Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 07:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought oberon was at inu's house, had me scared for a bit! but now with sesshy living with them, and rin supposed to be stopping by, this is gonna be fun! if kenren is who i think he is...hehe! i cant wait for more inu/kags interaction, i wanna see what happens there too...and with kikyou =/ awesome update!
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Title: lonely_girl (cant be bothered to log on)
Reviewed By: lonely_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 06:37 PDT
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hmm...sorry for the typos there, i type too fast and end up typing letters in the wrong places. that and i have horrible spelling anyway :P
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Title: lonely_girl (cant be bothered to log on)
Reviewed By: lonely_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 06:35 PDT
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YES!!!!!!!!! QUOTE HITCHIKERS GUIDE TO TEH GALAXY!!!!!!!!!!YEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry...its just so rare to find people odd enough to read such strage subject matter, let alone quote it...it's fantastic oh and you have a random red comma in there somewhere anywat, fantastic quote, excellent story. i love it a lot
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Title: Chappie 19
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 22:16 PDT
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So, Sesshiles has to ask for help...Inu didn't milk this enough...ya know, I'm entirely for Sess/Rin, but you don't see nearly enough Sess/Kagu on the other hand. Oh well, your story, not mine. Good background, and the mysterious Kagejiro...nice.,
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