| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:47 PDT
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*grins* YES!!! I can't wait for you to update this story again. Its been too long with out another mouth watering chapter. Im glad Rin figured out who beat up kags. At least, if something happened to kagome, Rin could go after bank. uhm, i have more to say, but i wanna write that email. So keep up the good work and i will eagerly await the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!! Kag and Rin fess up...well at least to each other anyway!!!! Miro is my new hero (hehe, that rhymed!), and i feel terrible for Inu. Sesshiles is in for a rude awakening, and who knows maybe we'll finally get to meet Kenren? Awesome chap, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 23:22 PDT
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i can't wait till sesshy and rin meet again! thats gonna be good! (next chapter????) stupid kikyo... can't believe shes actually picking up that somethings wrong. guess she isnt quite the dumb bitch i wish she was. lol. (lotta kikyo hate going on in my corner) is there gonna be a brawl between kags and kik? that would be HILARIOUS! great chapter (as ALWAYS) can't wait to read more of your wonderful work :D
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Reviewed By: 2lazy2putmynamein On: April 09, 2007 23:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lmao I loved miroku's comments, btw one pic's done I making two for you :D ~Sadie~ aka moon_essence1
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 22:16 PDT
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You kill me, you really do ._. Just have Kikyou shot and we'll all be happy. Really. You should do that.
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 11:33 PDT
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I'm holding u to that promise =D
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Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: April 09, 2007 10:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
things are slowly coming out and i can't wait 'till all the sh*t hits the fan. what fun. ha, poor miro and his sesshophobia! i don't blame him, tho... he cut sesshiles pony tail?! that would do it! lmao. t.c
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 09:33 PDT
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I knew I was right about Kenren being Seshilles(love that name!)! Great chapter! I'm glad that Kagome and Rin had that talk. And, like I said before, Miroku is hilarious! I love how dramatic he is, "and then I'll die.", "get thee behind me, Satan." funny! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:14 PDT
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*whoots!!!* write more,. it's getting better and better!!!!!!! personally i can't wait 'till Kikyo is out of the game *go kagome!* !! and the cookies are a reward i give for the well done job, it's and achievement. not that many authors have received them XDXD LoL!! ^.^so have more; *offers cookies, once again* update soon! i'm so hooked on this story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 23:29 PDT
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so yeah, sess is staying over and so is kikyo. and miroku, is he gonna get lucky w/ sango? i doubt it but he has his ways. and now kagome and rin are super duper close 'cause they know their secrets! yay! more soon!
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Reviewed By: inukag_obsession(nsi) On: April 08, 2007 22:26 PDT
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ooooh :D I loved this chap!!! Thank God Kagome finally told Rin... and I didn't know why Yasha is so stupid... So he has to marry a Higurashi... Hasn't he realized Kagome is a Higurashi as well? Damn, the baka!!!
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Title: Chappie 20 revised
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 21:11 PDT
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Ah, much easier to read, thankies! And yes, Drakey has no life...I check my email accounts like, almost every hour, so I'm always up to date on...updates...yeah...*runs*
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Title: Chappie 20
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 20:49 PDT
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Ah, more drama from the Taisho bros, and Rin and Kagome bond...very nice. I'm wondering, what sort of length are you looking at for this story? I mean, it seems early for Kagome to talk about confronting Bank this early. Meh, good chapter all around. And thank you for my new metaphor, Rin (love that hamster wheel!)
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Title: Blaccwolf123
Reviewed By: Dion On: April 04, 2007 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a great cghapter.I'm glad Sesshiles has finally made an appearance.I'm really curious to find out more on this Kagejiro(I hope I spelled it right)I dont remember u mentioning him before.Now sesshiles has left that slut kagura I'm guessing that leaves a lot of room for rin to get in and I bet my that what she wanted to talk to inu about was a limiter right.Plz tell me I'm right.Anyways that was a great chapter and i hope my review doesn't seem all out of wacc.Plz update soon. Your loyal fan, -Blaccwolf123
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:43 PDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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