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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 09:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh, steamy... an unexpected turn for sure... but freakin' awesome!!! That would suck if all of a sudden Kikyo stops by Inu's place and finds out kags is there! I feel bad for Sango, but she did bring it upon herself, plus she was kind of pissing me off too and I wasn't even there...oh well, Great chap. and can't wait to see what comes next, please update soon!
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Title: chpt 17 reveiw
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 11:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i spent roughly the last 12 hours or so, reading this story. OH MY GOD. Its wonderful. Its spectacular. Its a story that must be updated as soon as you can. All I ask, is that its not nearly as long as COTD. (that was a massively long story). I can't wait for Inu to find out about Kags BDSM. I cant wait for kags to figure out that inu is sha. Will Inu see the scars on kags back before he finds out if she is into bdsm? Will kagome casually let slip Bank's nickname as a name for everyone who keeps asking. That would really be a twister. Because only Inuyasha would get the reference. ohhh i see so much potential for the story, i can't wait to see what you come up with. And i love how you portrayed Jak's character. It would be an even bigger shocker if Bank killed Jak, for letting kags go. or something to that effect. Im rambling now, and i need sleep desperately. please dont let this story die out, its too incredible and i would seriously feel the loss if you left it with all the lose ends. Heh, if you ever needed suggestions in keeping the story going, i have a ton of them. Sincerely Autumn the reviewer
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 04:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*busts out laughing.. * I havent even finish chapter 3 yet, and already i have to comment. I've been to Bloomsburg PA.. I've even been to Bloomsburg University. I just find it hillarious that you mentioned it in this story. and so far, im loving every little bit. Keep it up, i cant wait to finish reading it. :) Autumn the reviewer
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 10:11 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU!!!! I LOVE THE STORY!!!!it's so good!!!!!! more chapters and ya better be quick about it!!!^.^i think this is easily one of the best stores i've read
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 09:59 PST
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Is it hot in here or is it just me? *fans self* yowza that was one steamy chapter! IT WAS GREAT!!!! ... i think my brains is fried, haha. can't wait for an update! (where does one find a guy like that??? LMAO)
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 06:17 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you, have I told you that lately? lol yea akward :P Anyways short but sweet, keep up the great work, love this story! Your an awsome writer, and the plots are great! ^_^ Ja Ne ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 23:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man. and here i thought that they would know all about her mystery man and get it on (again, hahaha). anyway, so what's gonna happen now? are they going to continue on w/ a illicit affair? will they even talk to each other the proverbial "morning after"? more soon please!
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:08 PST
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Wow, that was hot! How sweet of Inuyasha to not take her but still give her pleasure. 'We invented dirty!' I love that line. LOL You have a special talent with dialogue, and the characterization has left me open-mouthed in awe. I totally adored how you turned cliches into an entirely unearthly setting, like the line 'the silence that could have sunk the Titanic.' I was both laughing and crying through the chapter! Oh, and I love how fast to update! Wisth I could do that! Well, I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter! Shizuka Kaze
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 17:59 PST
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Wonderful and sexy chapter. I like how Sango looses her self so much in the need to protect that she actually harms her ward with her words. I also like how Miroku is still a perv and she keeps him in line. The comment about the leather pants cracked me up. I wonder what Inu would say if he had heard it. The interaction between Inu and Kagome was sweet and hot. He fights with himself to see what he really feels for her. Their scene of mutual masturbation was intense. One question though: I know that Inu is wearing an "inhibitor", but wouldn't he recognize Kagome at least a little bit? He met her as Tatiana in chapter 11 and was rather intimate. When he is more intimate here, why doesn't he realize that they are the same? Also why doesn't Kagome recognize Inu as Puck, or at least wonder what Bankotsu has done to Puck since he beat her so badly? Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!
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Title: WOWZA
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 13:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has got to be one of the best lemons i've read in quite a while. Keep it up, I mean with Inuyasha... KEEP IT UP! When is our sex scene coming?!?!
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: March 06, 2007 11:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sango Was going a little overboard on the ranting and stuff, huh. lol poor kagome, she is suffering through all of this practically alone and can't tell anyone the truth. i'm glad yash stayed and now he's realized his feelings. but, what now? and with kikyou around the corner waiting to remind them of reality, gah... i just feel so bad for them both! damn, this is one hell of a situation they are in. this keeps getting better each chap! i look forward to miro and sango's journey to discover their 'feelings' as well. heh, miro cracks me up so bad. XD
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 07:54 PST
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Great chapter! I love how Inuyasha and Sango argue everytime they talk and with Miroku there to add in a little comedy, hilarious! Please update soon!
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Title: Do dat shyt! ^-^
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 05, 2007 22:29 PST
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Wen, that was eye-popping to say the least. Congrats on the IYFG wins, and wow, woman! I read this while listening to Radiohead's "The Pyramid Song" @_@ suuuuch a trippy experience -particularly the lime. Well-fuckin-done!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 22:24 PST
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oh man poor inuyasha and kagome. why can't he break up with kikyo? it's gonna suck when they get out of that bed and have to start dealing with the real and underworld isn't it?
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Reviewed By: Sammy22 On: March 05, 2007 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and probably one of the best I have ever read.The characters are well developed along with the plot. The story flows well and is very descriptive which is is important. Anyways wonderful job and can't wait to read more.
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