| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 16:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is utterly awesome. i started reading it on ff.net but i thought that it would be better here, since it wasn't censored. i can't wait to see what happens. please have the next chapter out soon. this is way good.
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Reviewed By: leilachan ~nsi~ On: February 16, 2007 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, this really seems hopeless. i am so afraid that someone is gonna get hurt even worse than kagome. bank is so bad. when yash finds out who did this to kagome, he will be outta control. oh, this is so horrible for kagome. her emotional wounds are definitely more serious than her physical. bank, that bastard! and about naraku, he just seems like he can't stand yash and his family more than being evil. after the insight, i can understand. damn. well, this chap was really sad and i would have probably reacted in much the same way as sango if my friend were in that situation. lol t.c
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 09:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT, Chapter 15 rocks the house. I love it, love it love it love it. Update soon, PRETTY PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 09:00 PST
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Great chapter! I love how Inuyasha reacted in this chapter. And Naraku is confusing me. Is he bad, is he good? I guess I'll just have to wait to find out, huh? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 00:34 PST
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WHOA! ... that was such a great chapter! Starting with Naraku was eye opening, you saw him as someone who truly cared, not just the guy who tried to get into Kikyo's pants. I like how yash found out i think it was well done, and his reaction was fitting, it showed how much he cares for Kag, whether he wants to admit it or not. I can't wait to see how the rest of the conversation between Kag and Yash goes, can't wait to read it, I know its going to be stunning and well written. FANTASTIC CHAPTER! it was so well written
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 22:16 PST
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whoa way intense. aw and yay for kagome having sango and telling her the truth, and letting inuyasha comfort her!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! I'm so glad you updated. Loved the chapter. I can't wait when they figure out who the other one is.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: February 15, 2007 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl, I loved the ending of this chapter. I thought it was perfect. :-) I'm glad Yash knows what happened or at least has seen what happened to Kagome. I really gotta say, Bankotsu is one scary as mofo and that you are really good at writing creepy and suspense. lol. I can't wait for the next chaper. This story is so awesome, I love it. Update soon! And as for the quote, hmm... Wasn't it from House? Or did they use that and it's from someone else?
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*teary eyes* my poor kagome *huggles* Wow don't know what to say really..............keep up the good work I know! lol ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: XHanyou_LordX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 18:39 PST
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im pretty sure "truth begins in lies" is from Dr. House isnt it? or did House take the quote from somewhere else? Anyways i remember him saying that and i pondered it for quite some time lol. I love the way the story is moving so far and eagerly await updates ;)
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 16:00 PST
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REALLY?? that 'do something' might happen soon?? :D Ahh I can't wait for thatt :D I loved this chap also... Finally, Kagome's letting it out O_o I reallly loved it, and can't wait for the next one :)
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 13:37 PST
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Yeah, Inuyasha'a finally figured out that Kagome's hurt and he's showing his tender side without being OOC! You've once again amazed me at how you keep him in character. Great chapter, you mix the right amount of humor (like Miroku getting locked in the Hummer, I was laughing at that) and angst to make this a truly suspenseful read. I do have a question, though? Kagome doesn't know Inuyasha is a demon because of his limiter; what's going to happen when she finds out that he is isn't completely humna? I can't wait to read the next chapter! Also, when will Inuyasha figured out that Kagome is 'Titania' and she realize that 'Sha' is him? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: February 15, 2007 13:27 PST
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YESS..! Naraku is not bad in this one..! I LOVE IT! So I think it's safe to say that the villain in this story is Bankotsu eh? I love the angst and all the drama that's going down and hope to God that you update as soon as humanely possible..! One question though.. Does Kikyou and Kagome actually have a close family bond in this or is it Kikyou is deceiving Kagome into thinking that she cares but will betray her in the future? Update soon! ^_^
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Title: Chapie 15
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 12:14 PST
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Ah, the noose tightens. Kagome's secret is coming out now. I can't help but wonder what Kikyo is going to think.
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 13:42 PST
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Ahh, yes. a muzzle. how come i didnt think of that? lol. but really, hes freaking me out O_o i looooooved this chap!! i just cant wait for inuyasha to do something about kag!! :D omg i cant wait for the next one!! :) Love, IK Obsession
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