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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: February 15, 2007 13:27 PST
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YESS..! Naraku is not bad in this one..! I LOVE IT! So I think it's safe to say that the villain in this story is Bankotsu eh? I love the angst and all the drama that's going down and hope to God that you update as soon as humanely possible..! One question though.. Does Kikyou and Kagome actually have a close family bond in this or is it Kikyou is deceiving Kagome into thinking that she cares but will betray her in the future? Update soon! ^_^
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Title: Chapie 15
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 12:14 PST
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Ah, the noose tightens. Kagome's secret is coming out now. I can't help but wonder what Kikyo is going to think.
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 13:42 PST
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Ahh, yes. a muzzle. how come i didnt think of that? lol. but really, hes freaking me out O_o i looooooved this chap!! i just cant wait for inuyasha to do something about kag!! :D omg i cant wait for the next one!! :) Love, IK Obsession
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Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: February 05, 2007 20:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have grown so attached to these characters and their situations in such a short amount of time! i hope nothing happens to our jak or anyone else. you have me stressing, seriously. i had a very busy weekend, so i am glad i was finally able to tear myself away for a few to get to this new chap. T_T i really am into this story and bank is really starting to piss me off, in a murderous sort of way! lol this is looking to be as addictive as cotd! *hugs you and this fic*
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Title: randomness
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 18:54 PST
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Very random question just popped into my head, what would happen if Sesshomaru ate a Sloppy Joe? Don't ask me why, I don't quite understand it myself, but for some reason I think just picturing his face looking at the Sloppy Joe seems hilarious. Oh well, maybe just me... (In case you haven't noticed by now I'm a die hard Sess fan and LOVE Sess/Rin!!!)
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Title: 0.0'
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 18:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jaki, you can trade em' in if ya want, but only if you can catch him!... the whole thing with Bank, CREEPY! I can see some elements of COTD coming into this fic and I like it! Also I love the whole Rin/Inu moment, and i think we both know who she was thinking about. *cough*fluffy*cough*. so awesome job,(but i saw a few grammar mistakes that can be easily corrected) and hopefully a Inu/Kag moment in the near future perhaps? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 04:57 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. Most of all your language. I love the style. Acually I have a couple of your quotes in my diary (the 'piss' talk for instance) Your characters seem very real and I enjoy the absolute lack of 'cheesy-ness'. Great work! Oh, and I'm a bit sad that Bank is bad in this fic. They seemed to work so well with Inu in the Curse)) Oh well^__^ Anyway keep it up! and update soon!
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Title: Paper Doll
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 21:51 PST
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Oooo, angsty. I like how you've managed to twist this AU into the same Inu-Ki-Kag dillema as the original, nicely done. Of course, to borrow Kagome''s "lovely" tact, I don't think you can have someone suck you off and then forget about them. Lol. Great chapter, but like I need to tell you that.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: February 02, 2007 21:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Gosh. I was literally screaming when the realization of Bankotsu actually in the house hit. And that the dream wasn't in fact a dream. lol. Wow. Talk about dark and ominous. Bankotsu is a really scary bastard in this fic. I love it. lol. Great story, chapter, everything. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: firesjdfklsjk On: February 02, 2007 16:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely fabulous! I loved Curse of the Dragon and now I am loving this! IT IS SO GOOD! I am dying to find out what is going to happen once3 inuyasha and kagome learn more about each other! I CAN'T WAIT! UPDATE! I LOVE IT!! FABULOUS STORY! Ur a great writer! the plot is original and the storyline is fabulous! just be sure to check for grammatical errors. other than that everything is marvelous! I LOVED IT! UPDATE!
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Title: Best Suspense Scene EVER!!!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 16:16 PST
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Wow! I never literally been on the edge of my seat like that without watching an actual movie or something. That last scene was by far the best suspense scene I EVER read. My heart was thumping hard against my chest. It was sooo good. It was better than a movie and it didn't even have the scary suspense music because everybody knows suspense and thriller movies aren't all that scary without any music. Plus, the whole plot unraveled so well with the story about Bank and 'Sha's past relationship. It's funny because Inu_Grrl wrote a chapter to her new story that had me wailing and then you bang this one out. I have stand and applaud for this. I wish you luck and prosperity with this one.
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Reviewed By: yasha21 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 09:41 PST
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i have to say, i am a lazy reviewe and i should be better about it- unfortunately i am still working on it. I still love the story your writing style and your story line are amazing and each twist and turn are at times expected but still amazing to read- they never cease to suprise me! i am so glad that you are update pretty frequently. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Moon_essence1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 07:26 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh good chapter good chapter! I wonder how Inuyasha is going to act once he finds out what happend, also he doesn't know Kagome is THE GIRL u know? or does he? Confuse :P Anyway keep up the great work! Ja ne, ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 06:01 PST
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Poor Kagome. I'm so glad that the part with Bankostu was a dream. It's got to be a horrible feeling knowing that someone who almost killed you was in the house where you thought you were safe. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 01:31 PST
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man poor kagome and the end was terrifying. so inuyasha is warming up to kagome, but where do sha and titania fit into that equation?
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