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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 › » ] | Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, TMI? I would think Kagome essencially belonging to a character that was braught back from the dead and hung out with an obviously gay man would be TMI... ROFL.... Kidding, lol.
| Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 06:53 PST
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Bankotsu is a fucking ass and his brother isn't any better. Poor Kags. At least their was silver lining of hope throughtout of the chapter. Kagome just might make it, but she still has some explaining to do for her absence. Plus, I'm happy that it ended with Yash and Miro making up. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
| Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jackie just got 100 respect points! Bank got shoved off miles back... So, glad someone is going to take care of Kagome because god knows she needs somebody. Inuyasha and Miroku, awww i love the fact that they have such a strong bond like that. :) great job, and a really good way to lighten the mood. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 08:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you deleted a chapter.... that makes me sad....
| Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 23:08 PST
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poor kags. at least she has jackie on her side, i can't wait till she's better and kicking bankotsu's ass (she's gonna kick his ass right?... right?!) yay for yasha and miroku being all buddy buddy again (are the pants miroku's now? lmao) can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great writing! i love this story!!!!
| Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: January 25, 2007 20:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, no need to apologize for your fic being dark, it's just this is the first in a long while that I've come across in a long while. I think it's cool that what I expected of this story turned out to be so much more. And as for this chapter, God, I can just imagine how Kagome feels. Seriously. I'm glad Jakotsu is there. And I'm also glad Yash and Miroku made up. Great story. I love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. ;-)
| Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: January 25, 2007 10:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so bad for kagome. someone must get revenge on bank for her, or kag do it herself, somehow. luckily jak was there to take her away for the moment. i'm relieved that miro and yash have made amends and all is well on their end. i just am anxious over how and when yash and kag find out about each other. i mean, what will happen!? i am so excited. also, what will kikyou do when sh*t gets out, and is she going to be evil in this? so many things i'm anxious over. i luv it. it's a good torture! lol
| Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 08:56 PST
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Great chapter! Poor Kagome. Well, at least she's away from Bankostu. And I'm glad Inuyasha and Miroku are talking again. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: itachiiyoubastard On: January 25, 2007 08:29 PST
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Soo.. Inuyasha despises Kikyo with a passion and Kagome defends her because she doesn't want to start "beef" with her? AWESOME; but when is Kagome's secret going to be revealed to Inuyasha? I absolutely can not wait for that moment! Update soon.
| Title: You've done it again!!
Reviewed By: LyghtChyld [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 06:47 PST
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This was a great Chapie. I loved it, I was so worried Miroku would up and leave Inuyasha, glad he didn't. And for Jakotsu to stand up to back like that :two thumbs up: I need a Jakotsu plushie to snuggle. I'm glad he got her out of there. Damn you, Bankotsu!! :shakes her fist at Bank: Keep up the AWESOME WORK!!
| Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Not soon enough" still has "soon enough" in it so i'm happy =)
| Reviewed By: cherry_petals On: January 24, 2007 21:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK i love the story so far its really good i don't wannaseem rude but i would really apreceate it if you would update more often but i guess you can't rush an artist i love how kagome and inuyasha live double lives and how you have input most of the characters from the TV show. personally I hate kikyo but you gave her a personality that goes so well with the story i can't believe it. wow of all the Fanfics i have read your is one of the best. i really hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear! I found this story on IK Eternal, but had to come here for the long version... I read the whole thing in a day...! Talk about having no life...>.< But that's besides the point. OMG I LOVED IT! But I mean... wow. Bank is fucking sick... he needs therapy, and quick. As for Kagome, damn, who knew? I would have never imagined her as a sex slave... (well, little dark IK oneshots don't count... *innocent smile*) Chapter 12 really freaked me out, though. I can't believe I read the whole thing... It's like watching a lion killing a dear. It's horrifying, but I couldn't stop reading! I'm really starting to find myself fucked up. And damn that shit with Inuyasha and Miroku is a relief! I mean, Inu and Miro having a huge fight? End of the world, I say! I love how Inuyasha (as in Inuyasha, not as in Sha - who is quite amazingly sexy, I find...) is acting around Kagome. The way their relationship is evolving is adorable, if I may say. That part when Kagome pushed him off of her bed was just so cute! ^_^ I'm still really truamatized by Oberon/Bankotsu... Shit that's freaky... Oh, by the way, thanks a lot for helping me picture Inu in leather pants *thinks vaguely about a cold shower...* but it was seriously awesome! And I really can't wait for the next chapter!!! So, while I do that, I'll go read my favorite parts again!! Love, IK Obsession, or InusMistress, depending on the fanfiction site...lol
| Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 17:09 PST
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You inspire me to write! Great chapter and dialogue and beautiful use of vocab. I can't believe it's Bankotsu and DAMN he almost he almost killed her. I was on the edge of my freaking seat when he was beating her up. It was so graphic that I was chewing my nails and hoping she wouldn't die. Anyways, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
| Title: wendy's #1 fan!
Reviewed By: leilachan -nsi- On: January 14, 2007 15:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, now that i know who oberon is, it totally makes sense. ugh, what a bastard. that little 'lesson' was intense as hell, and you always do so well with your 'villians'. i swear, i could almost feel kagome's pain. damn. on a slightly lighter note, miro and the leather pants, funny sh*t! but, i also feel bad for him about yash lying to him... even though i understand why yash would lie. poor guys, they did sound like a couple. ^ ^ can't wait for the update.
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