| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Title: amhor56
Reviewed By: amhor56 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 01:43 PST
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Love that lime scene! I guess they got more aquainted. Man oh man, I want more.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 23:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... WHOA! awesome chapter (know where i can order my very own inuyasha?!?!) and who is OBERON?!?!?! its killin me! how many chapters before we find out???? can't wait for more! keep up the great writing!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if that wasn't crude yash, i don't know what is. dayum. it's like *_* ! ha, this chap was awesome and i guess i was just expecting naraku to be evil, but if you say he wont be 'that' bad, then i shall believe you. i swear, i must know what happens with oberon. it's fun as hell following a fic as it's written, especially yours, but i am so impatient. i hafta see how things end up. ahhh, the torture. ttyl.
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Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally they're starting to notice the similarities between each other... I wonder if that bite Inu gave to Kag will play a bigger role later on perhaps? Only time will tell, that was a very quick update, I was so proud of you! Thanks for the new chap, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 11:12 PST
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Great chapter! I loved the part in the dorm room. And when Rin said you're stealing the lead, great line! I saw that you reviewed my story. Thank you for reading it. I'm kinda stuck on chapter seven. I know where I want to take the story but I'm not sure how to get the characters where I want them. Does that make sense? Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. This story is turning out to be as good as 'curse' and it's only chapter 10! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 10:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaa, son of a .. dammit, i pressed the wrong button and lost my review. crap, well, i had all this stuff i said and now *thinks* ok. one more time. your naraku is so dang evil and i love hating him. his cocky attitude makes it so fun!it's like i'm filled with disgust and wonderment all at once. ^ ^ as for yash, he so almost slipped big time. i wonder if(when) he and kags get together, what kikyou will do? probably get pissed over being dropped for her cousin who is beneath her in every way, and then plot to do evil things to them all. hahaha, j/k. i dunno, but i know you'll make it badass. well, can't wait to find out. happy new year! t.c p.s. more crude yash, please. lol
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 23:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh I love this story so incredibly much! Please post again SOON
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Title: so close....
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 17:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We all love to deny the obvious... seems to be a theme for this story so far... I was hoping to read more about kenren! Maybe find out what he looks like, you know to see if he has any of his fathers traits (*cough*sesshomaru*cough*. Thanks for answering my question and great chapter, lookin forward to an update!
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Title: I missed a lot!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 13:37 PST
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OMG! I looked to see you updated a new chapter, and I was happy until I found out I had missed 5 whole chapters. I missed a lot! I'm angry with myself for not reviewing each and every chapter because I love this story sooooo much! You really have a great comedic mind. I was seriously laughing from start to finish. The chapter when they got drunk was efffing genius! Not only was that chapter funny as all hell, but hot when they were in the bathroom. Oh, and if Naraku wasn't in the dorm then who was? Mmmm. Can't Wait. You have a great ability to pull readers in with raunchy comedy and beauitful figurative sentences. NEwayz, great update and I wish you luck and prosperity.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 23:19 PST
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YAY!!!! NEW CHAPTER!!! how come you didn't update on fanfic? i dont know how to get an email for updates from this site, it was pure luck that i found out you updated and it MADE MY DAY!! YAY! *bounces around* (i had too much christmas candy) ^_^; love the tension between kag and yash, i was really hoping he would take of his disguise/inhibitor thing, that would have made it REALLY interesting! are we gonna find out who oberon is soon? its really killin me! and who rin's kid's father is! (does it have anything to do with sesshy?????) can't wait for an update!!! hope you had a great christmas! and have a happy new year!!!!
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Title: Merry Christmas!!
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 19:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my favorite French/English teacher loves to say, "And the Plot Thickens!" Things are bound to be interesting now with Sango in the picture. I have a question, do you listen to music while you write? (like some sort of inspiration perhaps?)... just wondering... Anyway, happy for the update and great job!
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Reviewed By: leilachan nsi On: December 22, 2006 11:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it makes me so happy to see another chap out so early. i see the update notice and i'm like, YAAAY! as for rin's son, i just have to find out the story behind that! so interesting. and now sango's in the mix!? this is so damn good. heheh, miroku has a new challenge to face in that chick! yash is so crude... i love it. i can never get over how good this sh*t is!!!! take care and have a merry christmas, too!!!! *much love*
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 10:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens now the Sango is there.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsesssion On: December 21, 2006 23:38 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. You've got me addicted! Chapter 8 [I believe it was] had me laughing my ass off and remembring some good times. I like where you've taken this story so far and I'm excited to see if my assumptions are correct of where you may be taking it in the [hopefully not distant] future.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, sure. lol. Great chapter. I think Sango is going to bring a nother interesting element to the story, and I'm excited to see what happens next. Awesome chapter. I can't wait for the next. Update soon! ;-)
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