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Reviewed By: crimsonskydeath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2011 16:37 EDT
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One person who Ranma definitely SHOULDN'T tell about the Higurashi's is Genma due to his sticky fingers and engaging problems. |
Title: FYI: Sesshomaru's Arms
Reviewed By: Trooper1023 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 12:14 EDT
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With the manga having officially been brought to a close, certain questions have been answered by the source, Rumiko Takahashi. SPOILERS UPCOMING! Personally, I always thought that Tokijin was unworthy of Sesshomaru. Perhaps Takahashi agreed with the sentiment, as late in the manga, Tokijin was broken, and discarded by Sesshomaru. The Western Lord returned to Totosai for a replacement, but the old demonsmith refused. For good reason, as it turned out. In the middle of a wicked brawl with yet another bunshin of Naraku, Sesshomaru not only spontainously regrew his lost left arm, but manifested a totally badass sword of his own. The ivory-white runic blade was named Bakusaiga, and is truly worthy of its wielder in my humble opinion. Props to an awsome crossover fic, regardless.
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Reviewed By: Dalafanole [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 18:33 EST
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It has probably been a while since you got a review for this story, but I have just finished reading it. (Have also just recently finished watching ranma 1/2 series) I think you did a great job combining these two amazing anime series'. Congrats to you and thanks for a great story! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Kaiba-Duelist On: September 14, 2007 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll tell you one thing that you had Akane's character way out of line. She is not a self centered bitch, two she has never fought over Ranma with the other girls, and finally they may fight over things but they had gotten better at the end of the series. Get Your Facts strait!!!! If you want to pair Ranma with Kagome, But get your facts strait!
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Reviewed By: Musixx On: July 30, 2007 07:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You definitely still got it. Not sure if you remember me or not, but I was a big fan of the series when you were originally putting it up. It's still great, and I just read the whole thing through (again) in one sitting (only an hour and a half). It is still a favorite. I was just wondering if Chapter One was only supposed to be a Disclaimer? Because that is all that is there at the moment. I also noticed that several of the footnotes in several chapters had been cut off, often in mid-sentence. But it is still a great and original story, and I hope you will be putting more up soon.
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 15:53 EDT
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Please, not the overly-protective sister routine wherein Nabiki declares eternal vengeance against Ranma for daring to harm Akane in any way...irregardless of how often her family, and Akane in particular, had harmed Ranma. This is one of the most overused, and baseless, cliches in all of Ranma fanfiction.
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Title: Chapter Five
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 09:26 EDT
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If this is post-Saffron, Ranma's hair is no longer affected by the Dragon Whisker Soup. Although, it could have left traces of its power in his aura.
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 09:14 EDT
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Is Ranma in ill health? Climbing the stairs should not have been any kind of problem for him at all.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even after all this time, the story is still awesome. Thank you for writing this superior fanfic. I also thank your demons of inspiration. *bows* Domo Arigato.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 23:14 EST
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Hmmm, the tale is a good one, and an amusing as well as mature storyline, combining the two most well known creations of Takahaishi-san's. Plus, Ranma gets a woman, not a girl, and finds his own true maturity, instead of remaining as a child as he was in so much of the manga. In truth, this is one of the few truly great storyline's I have had the pleasure of reading as of late, and wish to continue to peruse your work. I'll look what else you've written up sometime. Anyway, glad to see this story turned out so well. ANd while it is over a year since the story came out, I am glad I got a chance to read this. Good luck with your other projects, and hopefully they turn out as well, if not better, than this one. Saiyonara, Graypheonix
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Reviewed By: Nubnuts On: January 02, 2007 07:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Is Kagome and Ranma child gonna be human or hanyu?
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 01:38 EST
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I enjoyed your story greatly. It seems natural to do a crossover between Inuyasha and Ranma 1/2, and yet I have read very few decent fanfics that utilize their complimentary features well. My one problem with this story, which is really just a personal issue, is that I feel that Ranma would not have forsaken his life as easily as he did in this story. I would have liked to have seen more concern over choosing between Akane and Kagome, especially considering their similarities (they are actually both very violent if you think about it). However, as the story stands, it is very well done. Please continue to write.
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Title: Sealed Past
Reviewed By: Crazed One On: August 08, 2006 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always wanted to read a Inuyasha Ranma 1/2crossover! Thanks for writing such a good fic!
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Title: *Cringe*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 02:59 EDT
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I want to flame this I really really do. I want to be mean and hatefull, and it just might already be hatefull even say that I want to flame this but I can't help how I feel. I stopped reading after the claws to the face thing with Akane and Ranma. Ranma would never do that, and neither would Inuyasha. It's so out of character that I could cry, but instead I'll stop reading this and leave you with a suggestion. Read/watch the manga or anime for both series and get inspired by the canon personalities of the characters.
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: May 24, 2006 08:01 EDT
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ahhh... me again. i have to give you my apologies for taking so long to review because my computer for some reason did not show me that you have updated until now even though i have tried to check every now and then. *sighs* oh yes... now that i found out what your ff.net account is i have to review it on there too when i have time. ah yes and also to leave my account link for you ^^. i have to congratulate you on how you put together and ended the story so OMEDETOU! obviously your story is quite original and i havent read one with anything like it really. you have made the character seem more in depth and perhaps more knowledgable than in the original mangas. ive had a fun time reading and waiting for your updates and hope to do so again. good luck with your other stories
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Reviewed By: Morita Ayumi On: May 21, 2006 22:08 EDT
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I liked the story in general, but it was kind of hard to follow with the who-was-who stuff sometimes. One time, I got Sessomaru(sp? Forgive me! >.< I forgot how to spell his name) confused with Kagome's granfather.. I forgot how, but I did...
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 10:17 EDT
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:tear: it's over... good ending, great story... contemplating a sequal???
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Title: All Good Things....
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**takes deep breath** I enjoyed this story so much - though by now I think you know that. **big grin** The ending was very characteristic of Ranma/Inuyasha (I really enjoyed the disavowal of the Crew, by the way) and Kagome. And the idea of changing the trigger for the curse to the rosaries was a stroke of genius. **chuckles** How Takahashi-esque! I plan to read the revised version once 2.0 comes out, of course. I just wanted to say that this was a wonderful fic, and you are a really good writer. I have both this fic, and you as an author in my favorites, and I look forward to many more works by you. Gambatte ne in all you do!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 14:36 EDT
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GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I encourage you to keep writing and most definitley to work on your grammar... not that it is a major issue its just people tend to understand the story more if you use correct english.Look forward to seeing your next fanfic. Kisses bye!!!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 02:05 EDT
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I love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111You have to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'll be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Wolfie Nightshade On: May 11, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like this story. Ity has taken my about 2 days to get thru all the chapters. I find someparts most amuseing. Please do continue. Thanks
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**sighs** I hate real life. That's why I wasn't able to review before now. Anyway....very good chapter, as always. I really thought you had the characterizations perfect on this one (not that they aren't always good). Akane is being shown to be extremely jealous - and not a little arrogant as well. Ryouga seems to be the first to able to think and react to all this, considering his question. Maybe there is hope for he and Ranma to be real friends after this is all over - Akane probably won't want anything to do with him for awhile (I remember your earlier hint about P-chan ^_- ). I am looking forward to the denouement, of course. **grins** Let Akane get her comeuppance. And to see our favorite couple move on and finally get the happiness they deserve. Very well done chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
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Title: Luv it write more!
Reviewed By: Majiin Yusuke [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 00:58 EDT
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Love it you gotta write more...your chapters are getting shorter....(pokes them)
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Title: dreamgirl
Reviewed By: update!!!!!!! On: May 07, 2006 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 19:40 EDT
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define consecutively please... as in the next to chapters right in a row or what... update soon please please please... i'm begging here don't make me beg... oh wait too late.
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: May 06, 2006 17:06 EDT
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ah, the joy of watching someone use cool logic to smack down the irrational and outraged. bravo, lol.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 01:23 EDT
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I halfway expected Akane to say something along the lines of "It's the principle of the thing!". Looks like there'll be some explanations next time, not that everyone will accept them.
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Reviewed By: ebit333 On: May 05, 2006 22:05 EDT
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thank you for updating!!! please write more i really want someone to put akane in her place! i didn't like her in the series and i don't like her know!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 21:42 EDT
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LOL!!!!!! You rock!!!!!!!!! Keep it coming cause I love your story !!!!!!!!!!!
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