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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 02:07 EDT
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i am so happy... cologne got put her in her place, i have been dying for the old bat to be knocked down a few pegs for ages... she annoys me... update soon... kay i know you'll update tuesday but i just felt like saying that in hopes of an extra chapter :hint hint nudge nudge:
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Reviewed By: James Axelrad On: April 13, 2006 16:35 EDT
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great chapter i just wish you didn't leave it at a cliffhangerr thankfully, i am sure you will be putting out the next one within a week
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Reviewed By: Vex The Warlord On: April 13, 2006 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. Your misuse of titles and names have been bothering me and we're gonna clear this up right now! Nerima Wreckers = The Nerima Wrecking Crew. Theres some more names you've been screwing up But i cant remember right now... When I Remember them I'll Inform you. Other then that a fairly good Fic. Dont be disappointed by my ratings. Im quite critical of all fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 11:19 EDT
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woohoo kags finally gets to meet one of the wreckers... this ought to be good... i cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted... good luck with finals mine aren't for another month but my theis is already becoming a problem... stupid argument won't turn out the way i want...grrr
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably thought you lost me there, didn't you? **winks** I left early last night because of my Yami no Matsuei DVDs (Must. Watch.), so I didn't see that you had updated until I got to work this morning. And yes, I am writing this review from my desk at work. @_@ Anyway..on to the review! Nice chapter, by the way. I liked the amount of intimacy you showed between Kagome and Ranma. She wawsn't trying to push herself on him (like some other women we could name!) when he was upset or anything. And I can see where it would be tough for him to be telling the fiancees that he has had it, and its all over. I am wondering why Kagome keeps looking at that old jewelry box for though, as well as to why she is going to go with him this time. I am sooooo looking forward to the answer. **grins** Anyway, you have fun with Hellsing plot bunnies and exams (if it makes you feel any better I'm in a business finance class right now, and hating every second of it), and I do look forward to your next chapter. Good luck on those exams!
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 03:01 EDT
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If I had Inuyasha, I would watch it with both subtitles and dubbing on. But I only buy the manga. Ah, good, Kagome's going to give him some assistance.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Cake On: April 11, 2006 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE, HATE, HATE, you. Why? Because i don't hate you i love you! You are such a better writer then me, =( But i still love, love, love, your story, keep going!
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Reviewed By: moonwicca On: April 09, 2006 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no you cant leave it there this is one of the best inuyasha ranma crossover i have ever read
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 11:59 EDT
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I'm not sure how to do special characters on MM.org, if you even can, but you could try typing it out fianc`ee. Not perfect, I know, but it's something. Or you could use synonyms instead. I've never seen Inuyasha subtitled, so I wouldn't know how they pronounce it. Okay, Tessaiga it is. Thanks for clearing that up.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 21:49 EDT
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g'morning, I've only seen about three episodes of ranma, but it realy doesnt seem to matter in this fic, cos you dont assume knowledge. wahey! Leaving it for me to enjoy. Excellent kukuku
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Title: A Ranma fan
Reviewed By: Flamezilla On: April 08, 2006 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I can say nothing wrong regaurding the writing and characterization in the story. I felt at the points at which you intersected the two series left the Kagome and Shippo so out of Ranma's league that it totally ruined all hope for me enjoying it. You've killed any hope for a pro-Ranma story much less one in which he is worth a damn outside of a Inu-Yasha knock-off. As a Inu-Yasha romance it's top notch, as a Ranma story it's craptacular (I also have no love for those who take the ½ out of Ranma½, and no I don't count half demon). For half-assing it I give you a 5 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: STRAWBERRY INUYASHA On: April 07, 2006 03:09 EDT
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Hiya. I've just read the new update. That was really good. Now, I bet things are really going to get fun for Ranma. Hehehe. Life was never easy for him or Inuyasha... as far as I know. So, now... I'll wait for the next update. By the way, I have a fic idea. Thanks. SI.
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Reviewed By: wowi'mlucky On: April 06, 2006 23:34 EDT
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I really love this story PLEASE write more!!!!!! Also this is KICKASS! yep so hurry up and write more!!!
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 23:17 EDT
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if it makes you feel any better i can't write it at all you should try reading my fanfics on ff.net... it's terrible i'm half considering just taking them down i write so much better now but i'm too much of a chicken to put them up. i so cannot wait til he tells Akane off woohoo fun times ahead!!!!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!! **stares at the end of the chapter, picks jaw up off the floor, and promptly falls off the couch** What a chapter! I was a little surprised to see Ranma go into a lot of detail over what has happened to him in the last three years, but then I realized he had to. Who'd believe him, otherwise? I am glad that he didn't mention just who the priestess is, or where she lives (though Nabiki will probably find out in about five minutes once she knows where to look), as things are probably going to get pretty dicey for Kagome (not like she can't handle herself, of course - this IS the Shikon priestess, after all) and the shrine in times to come. Considering what Shampoo alone does to walls....**shudders** I hate to see what Akane is going to do. I did like how merciless Ranma was with Ukyo at the end of the chapter. It probably is the only way to do this kind of thing. Especially since she didn't seem to be interested in giving him up. She does usually have the most sense, and low-key approach, to chasing Ranma, though. Never know. I assume there will be one chapter per "official" fiancee (I do *not* count Kodachi) for the telling of Ranma's life over the past three months? I certainly hope so - I look forward to the Shampoo and Akane chapters. **chuckles** I am rambling a bit, but Ranma's parting line was absolutely perfect - it showcases exactly how far he has come in the last three months versus the rest of the Wrecking Crew. I know I say this every chapter, but I really did love this one. Made me grin (and fall off the couch). I really like this amalgamation of Ranma and Inuyasha that you've come up with. Its a fun, and well-written story - and I can't wait until the next chapter!
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