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Title: Hmm.
Reviewed By: Fano On: March 23, 2006 13:34 EST
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I'm still with you, and still enjoying the story. I must say, though, that I would expect the real Ranma to have more angst (had to use that word, since I know you love it:) about the conflicting emotions between his love of Akane (I interpret their relationshsip in the manga as love) and Kagome (if InuYasha's in there, it's got to be love, right?). I think Ranma's in love with Akane and Inu's in love with Kagome. That's got to suggest some really interesting plot opportunties!
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Title: lol I am actually Felicity_Angel46 but it doesn't let me stay signed in to review ^^;;
Reviewed By: felicity_angel467 On: March 23, 2006 13:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so much!!! It is a pleasure to read ^___^
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 10:36 EST
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not a problem I can do that. you sure can't update beofe tuesday... i had really bad week and could use the cheering up... please??? you don't really have to i'm just taking shameless advantage of the fact that my week did in fact suck and trying to get some sympathy... looking foward to tuesday
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Title: Nice Story, but...
Reviewed By: Calamity-Queen of Cordite On: March 21, 2006 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I'd like to say that I'm enjoying your story inspite of one major flaw; no Onna-Ranma. IMHO, Ranma just isn't Ranma with out two quintessential factors; the girl curse and the fact that he's a martial artist/warrior. Perhaps the girl curse is only temporarily cured and will come back? I think it'd be great to see Inuranma have to deal with being a half-female dog demon hanyou. That would sure put the Inuyasha personality off his stride like he putting the Ranma personality off his. Anyway, still a good story. It says something that I'm still following it even after the curse was cured. Usually that's when I stop reading. Good Luck with it... Calamity
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**pounces on new chapter** God, I have been waiting for this for 5 days! Its sad (or maybe not ^_- )when you define a day by how close you are to an update of a favorite fic. Needless to say, I enjoyed this one as usual. You had Ranma down absolutely pat in this chapter. He (much like Inuyasha, come to think about it) always tries to solve his problems on his own, and I think you got his dilemma over this particular problem down very well. He *knows* this is over his head, but is determined to take care of things himself. I also liked where he realized what it was that made him do it that way. Ranma is growing up even more, even if he doesn't realize it. The scene with Happosai had me nearly fall off the couch laughing. Yes, Happosai is a little OOC. But then again, you just explained his small size and extreme power for a "man" of his age. To come across a Ranma with demon powers of some sort - after knowing that the boy didn't have any - probably scared him out of his mind. And when Ranma muttered flea", it made me wonder if he is descended from a certain flea demon that we all know and love - and what that would mean for Happosai if he is. **giggles** If I remember right, even with the end of the samurai in the Meiji period, and all that went with it, including family retainers; demons would still follow the old ways. Jaken is still a retainer, after all. **grins evilly** Can you imagine Happosai honor- and blood-bound to serve Ranma? **howls with laughter** Oh, the irony THAT would be. Anyway, to continue with my monstrously long review... The end was very touching. Ranma realizing that he had to swallow his pride and go talk to Kagome. And I bet Ranma's stomach just went on a little trip to his feet when she told him that the "thing" inside him was himself. Time to meet the brother of his past life, perhaps? ^_^v I will wrap this up (its length is starting to scare me ;p ), but expect a response to your e-mail soon - I'll touch on that subject you asked me about there. But as always, great chapter. Really enjoyed it, and can't wait until the next one!
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984(i'm too lazy to log in) On: March 21, 2006 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. While not original plot wise you've definately taken the plot to a different place then most authors take it. I also cannot wait for you to have the rest of the Nerima crew meet Kagome, if you do that mind you. This is an ecxellent story and I find myself looking foward to Tues and Thurs just to read the updates.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 10:56 EST
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Yeah! it was good! I mean real good. Can't wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: Ormik On: March 19, 2006 07:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I have read couple of other Ranma/Inuyasha crossovers with similar idea of Ranma being Inuyasha's reincarnation, and this is absolutely the best of those fics. Simply magnificent.
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Title: You love to see me!? Right?
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: March 17, 2006 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly love this fic. I just found it and want to read more. Do, with out further ado, writer write more please. I especially want to know if Kagome and the others realize exactly what they have done. Inuyasha in Ranma's body? Yikes. I hope to see more. If you get time, please...... SI.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoooHooo!! We know what that little "extra" bit that Kagome exorcised was now! Its the "separation" between the two lives and personalities! Man, that has *got* to be wierd for the personality that seems to be coming out. I noticed that when Ranma was first talking to Kagome, he carefully maintained the "he" and "me" parts, but by the end, everything was "I". Is the Inuyasha part merging with the Ranma part? It would almost seems to be, given Ranma's reaction to the feline Shampoo. Instead of running screaming, it was like he was facing Goshinki all over again. He met his worst fear head-on, though not consciously, and still in total fear of his life. And I wonder if Ranma feared himself when he "woke up" from that short stint as full-demon Inuyasha (you are going to explain how that's possible, right?). That little shudder he gave at the end made me wonder. **snorts** I wonder if Genma will come up later to find out how to do that "new technique" that Ranma "learned". I can't wait to see *that* interaction. The relationship between father and son makes the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru almost warm and cuddly. **blushes** Awwww, well, I like to read your chapters and review them at least as much (and probably more) as you like my review! I really liked this chapter (in case this ginormous review hasn't told you). Transitional in that we see what happened to Ranma/Inuyasha, but brings the fiance contingent into it. I really LOVE this fic! Can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 16:43 EST
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Yeah I know thoughs things always say I'm dead! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 16, 2006 04:07 EST
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eh? well soz for taking so long to review. i only JUST realised you updated since last time i was reading. great job so far! im loving it
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 16, 2006 04:00 EST
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~SPOILER~ *gasps* those four items! i recognise them! theyre the four legendary items from the second movie of inuyasha that kaguya took! very fitting!
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Title: INUYOKIA87
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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iT WAS EXCENLENT! Can't wait til its finished.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**bows to artistic license** You are right of course. I make use of it myself from time to time. **grins** I can't beleive I forgot about Kanna's mirror, though. **smacks forehead** And now we know for sure! Ranma really IS Inuyasha! Sweeet!! I liked how you worked in the rosary; Inuyasha is probably so conditioned to her saying "osuwari" that he reacted without thinking. (how like an inu.... ;p )I am really looking forward to what happens when ...whomever is currently residing in the body of Ranma Saotome wakes up. Should be very interesting - especially for Kagome and Shippo. GREAT chapter, and I can't wait for the next update!
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