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Reviewed By: beccapatty2 On: May 05, 2006 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
me again! :) hehe awesome chapter! yea unfortunately I havent seen any Reincarnation ones with ranma n Inuyasha.. and if i have they obviously werent good or i would have remembered them.. urs is awesome! I check the site like 3 times a day checking to seee if u updated hehe :) I was very happy when i saw that u indeed did this time i checked! :) .. I love where ur going with this story.. Im just dying to see if akane has the guts to attack Kagome and to see what Ranma/Inuyasha do about it or if he lets Kagome handle her with a lil spark of purification.. maybe to purify her anger issues or sumthin! LOL .. I really hope Kagome does get a chance and at least cures Moose's curse. he is really a good guy and maybe he can have his eyes fixed.. I mean he seemed to be the only one really paying attention to Kagomes story and interested in it!.. I just hope he can find someone to make him happy as well.. Hes great when hes serious and not all nutso about Shampoo.. anyways pleasee please keep up the great work and update soon.. or whenever ya want haha ill jus keep looking for the update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lasagna~_~gurl On: May 05, 2006 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This really is the most original crossover I have ever read! It is a wonderfully colorfull story with all the spicy details. This fanfiction brings into light the unending immaturity of all the Ranma 1/2 characters and the very tangible connection between Inu-Yasha's and Ranma's personalities. I also thought it was interesting to hear the comment from Sesshomaru that Nabiki was an eccellent photographer, a wonderful detail, what with Nabiki always taking blackmail pictures. Thank you for writing this,.......-Lady Orange
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 18:20 EDT
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I didn't need to know about the only two chapters left! *covers eyes in a Shippo-like way* That's something no reader should know!
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: May 05, 2006 15:33 EDT
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Oh come on, i want to see Genma suffer. I love Sesshoumaru the mercanry. The line about not burning down the house was very apt considering who we are talking about. I can't wait to see the rest of the confrontation between Ranma/Akane/Kagome and Sesshoumaru/Genma please keep it coming.
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Reviewed By: Vex The Warlord On: May 03, 2006 14:13 EDT
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slaying a thousand demons with one blow. If I remember right its only a hundred demons with one blow. I may be wrong though.
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Reviewed By: Mrs Cake On: April 29, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOOOVE your story! Sorry i haven't reviewed in a while! Ha, Happousai was hiarious in Ch. 22, It was Ch. 22 right? Oh well, great job!
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Reviewed By: TheDudeAbides On: April 29, 2006 14:55 EDT
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Grammar check time! The "than" in "Well, come in than" should be "then". "Than" is usually used to compare things, "then" indicates consequence or something happening next. "You're" vs. "your". "You're" is a contraction of "you are". "Your" is a possesive pronoun. So, they would be "your responsibilities", not "you're (you are) responsibilities". When in doubt, just substitute "you are" for whichever version of "your" you used. If it makes sense, use "you're". If not, use "your".
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Reviewed By: beccapatty2 On: April 29, 2006 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story! ive been reading it from the beginning i jus never got a chance at reviewin.. I absolutely love it! soooo good.. I can't wait to see what happens next.. lol I have this story linked in my favorites and i check it daily to see if u updated! Inuyasha and Ranma crossovers are just great.. but this is the first one ive seen where the two didnt meet and instead u had them one in the same .. Inuyashas reincarnation. ahh and with his memories and demon likeness in him.. I love this story.. please keep up the excellent work!
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Title: cool stuff
Reviewed By: BiG SiR On: April 29, 2006 09:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I would love to see how Inu-Ranma would take Akane trying to smack Kagome. Anyways, that last chapter seemed unfinished rather than put through a cliffhanger. Either way, good job.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 01:45 EDT
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Akane is as impatient as ever. One thing you forgot to mention on your description of the Soul of Ice was that one has to be void of emotion for their aura to turn cold.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not going to ask how Nabiki would know something not human - and willing to spy on the Shikon no Miko. That's just scary. **pauses** And so everyone meets! I got such a giggle out of the the way that Sesshoumaru shut Genma up when he started in on Ranma. I also enjoyed it when Sesshoumaru called Ranma "brother". Hints around that Ranma has been accepted by him. I was a little surprised that the Wrecking Crew was more taken aback by Sesshoumaru calling Ranma brother than by Shippou calling Ranma "Father, though. I would have thought that to be the more startling statement, especially given all the romantic entanglements that Ranma has had to suffer through over the years. I also wonder who Kagome went to go call. It might be a red herring, or it could mean something. The reason I wonder if its a red herring is becuase of something that Ranma said to Genma when his father started in on him. Genma complains that Ranma must do his duty, and Ranma replies, "I have done my duty." Did you get he and Kagome married between chapters? I hope so! Might shock Akane into some sense! Besides the fact that I just want them to get together, of course. ;p Wasn't really surprised that Akane interrupted Kagome, but was surprised that she called Kagome a bitch...of course, if Kagome is mated to a dog-demon (in a roundabout way), she IS one. Can't wait to see Ranma's reaction to THAT. **giggles** But as you can tell from this lenghty (and seemingly endless) review, I did enjoy the chapter - though this cliffhanger is probably the hardest to live with. :) I want to know what happens! **chuckles** But as always, great chapter! Congrats on finishing your first year of school - and the job up in Saskatchewan, by the way. See you next time!
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 28, 2006 18:21 EDT
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I have never read a better Chapter. I love these lines especailly.Thank-you. I have no wish to clean up your mess.Ah… but that's what one's employees are for. The part where there all talking to Ranma as family just makes it better. Thank you for the start of the Sesshoumaru and Genma incounter. I can see Sesshou ripping him to shreds. Sesshou may have not liked his brother but he still protects him from harm at times. I can't wait to read more. That saying is very adapt for what is going on in the last couple of chapters. Update soon
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 14:57 EDT
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oh my daisies! That fire is burning bright! It may still need another log though...good chapter!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: April 28, 2006 07:10 EDT
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(remembers kagome's reaction to that word used by someone she loved, ponders what's going to happen to spoiled tomboy) *hysterical laughter*
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Title: !!!!
Reviewed By: lilcar12(LOGGED OFF) On: April 28, 2006 02:20 EDT
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this is no fair!!! they still haven't found out the truth yet!!!! U can't just end it like that >.< ...But its still better than nothing... i await your next updaate...>.
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