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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Kachie-chan On: April 05, 2006 10:32 EDT
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I like it! I was a little surprised since I'm not a huge Ranma fan but when a story is well written ... I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the stoey , please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 05, 2006 03:51 EDT
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hmm so that must be why... no u didnt leave any comments XD be sure to correct that. it would seem a lot is going to come together in the very near future. then nerima wreckers meet kagome and others.
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Title: Cool.
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: April 04, 2006 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the vote of confidence. And I really think I might try it. But I have to find an angle. I'm a huge fan of Ranma but I don't know much about it other than a bit of information. I'm a huge fan of both Shampoo and Sesshomaru and have an idea boiling in my brain. Now as for your new chapter... I was glad you updated. Now all he has to do is move out... And survive Akane's mallet. It's a bit sad to discover that Miroku and Sango are dead. I wish they had been reincarnated too. Thanks. SI.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:00 EDT
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Then write it Toukijin. That would be proper romanization anyway. Are you sure on Inuyasha's sword's name? Tetsu means iron, sai means cut, and the name has always been translated as Steel-cleaving Fang. I don't even know a definition for tessai(although tessei means Made from Iron). Plus, even the anime pronounces it Tet'saiga. What's your source of information for it being pronounced Tessaiga?
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And...you're wish is my command. My review. ^_- I adored this chapter, just so you know. Ranma is aboout to take the biggest step of his life (or second biggest, depending on how far that bit at the end of the chapter went) - moving out on his own, away from his father and all of the fiancees. THAT is going to be an interesting chapter when he tells everyone that bit of news. **giggles** Its probably a good thing that Nabiki can't find out how and why Ranma got that invite to the Full Circle Dojo - she might have a stroke if she found out that Toyota Shippou is actually Ranma's adopted son in a previous life (do they still claim each other, I wonder? It has to be kind of wierd to Ranma on some level), and that he has *grandchildren* when he he's still a virgin. Speaking of sex...you do realize that you are evil, right? Those last few sentence...and we don't know how far things went! You will tell us on Thursday, ne, ne? Onegai? **giggles** Genma is probably going to freak out, you know. He might even lose his place to live when Ranma moves out - especally if Ranma once and for all says that he isn't marrying Akane. I can't wait for that chapter! Anyway...as I said before, I did adore this chapter. Its was so good! Can't wait for next time!
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984(i'm not signing in cause i'm a lazy bum) On: April 04, 2006 18:26 EDT
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:insert snoopy happy dance here: thank you thank you thank you... fluff fluff fluff yea!!! i'm all happy now... can't wait for thursday... hehe hey my spam filter spells kile funny huh? i need more sleep
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 04, 2006 17:29 EDT
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Keep it coming. I want more please *-*. I want to see the others blow there tops.
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Reviewed By: Nysk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 17:22 EDT
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Still a great story!! Question: Did I miss something... when did Kasumi start trying to cover for Ranma? Or did I miss read that? My only complaint.. SHORT CHAPTERS.. but than I love epic tales hehehehehe
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Reviewed By: kirara the cute hell cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow,this jest more better and better,update
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Title: CHAPTER 14 WAS SO COOL!!!!!
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: March 31, 2006 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was a great chapter. 14 looked really good. I've been reading so many good fics lately. But yours is one of the better ones. I hope that this gets even better. I just wish there were more InuYasha/Ranma crossovers. I found a DBZ/IY crossover that was pretty good. But, still, I hope your next update is soon. That way I can find out more. Still, when is Nerima gonna meet his 'brother'? That would be funny. Anyhow, bye. SI. Is my name cool or what? And should I try and write fanfics too?
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 31, 2006 02:46 EST
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hm.. this was interesting. i like how you write kasumi's character. too often is she depicted as some air-headed person. good job. oh yeah now that i think of it did you check out my accounts? just wondering...
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**smacks self on forehead** I'd forgotten all about when Rin was killed by the wolves. I was thinking, for some reason, that whatever the reason was happened later on. **sighs** Anyway, I did like this chapter (both times ^_-). I liked the way that Ranma argued with Akane - and it didn't turn into violence for once. He, very logically, I might add, shot down every argument that Akane had as to why Ranma should tell her where he had been. Another bit that is rubbing of from Kagome? Or is that what Inuyasha had matured to by the time of his death during WWII? And i just realized something: other than Happosai, the others don't seem to notice that he hasn't changed into a girl lately - or did I miss something? I wonder what Akane will do when she realizes that she can't call him a "pervert" and mallet him to Hokkaido anymore. **evil grin** And now Nabiki is going to step up and find out what is going on - even she might let that icy facade break when she sees just why and how Ranma is changing. If she doesn't tease him to death because he is "seeing an older woman". **rolls eyes** Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 14:09 EST
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That's Tetsusaiga (the u is silent, so it's pronounced Tets'saiga) and Tokijin. Good story. Um, how old is Kagome in this, anyway? I can't recall you saying.
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: March 30, 2006 14:08 EST
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Keep it coming. It just gets better and better.
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