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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:34 EST
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So is Ranma Inuyasha's reincaration? Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 16:19 EST
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The fic is really good. Update again soon please. ~~Kuramas gurl
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 19:51 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Again, a bit of a filler, but a very important one - we're seeing what a chance meeting between Kagome and Ranma has wrought. Ranma is growing up and maturing (come to think of it, he's doing it in a very similar way to Inuyasha... ;p), and is being introduced to a world that he didn't really know existed (though he has met up with a real ghost and a cat demon previously). The thought crossed my mind that Kagome, on some level, "recognizes" Ranma (if you really are going the way I expect you to, of course), since she's introducing him to demons - and two in particular. Hachi and Shiori would know Inuyasha, having met him before. I also foresee a confrontation between at least one of Ranma's fiancee's and Kagome coming up - your mention of increased violence makes me wonder if it won't be Akane herself. Wonder what would happen if someone attacked Kagome right in front of Ranma.... **blushes** And thank you for the mention in your note at the bottom of the chapter. I love this story! Can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 16:48 EST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: What Happened?
Reviewed By: Fano On: March 02, 2006 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great premise - love the concept. Absolutely spell bound by the first two chapters. Then what happened? Kagome's angst dissapeared, as did the shadow demon society. I understand the need to set up the story and characters, but the momentum after Chapter 2 really suffered. Looking forward to where the two threads come back together.....Sorry if i sound critical, but i was just so entranced by those first two chapters!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was a little slow, but I think we're going to look back on this chapter and go, "ahhhh, NOW I get it!". I am starting to wonder if Kagome "recognizes" Ranma on some level - she is (so far! - she doesn't know he's one of the Wrecking Crew yet!)remarkably patient and tolerating of Ranma's quirks; a lot like she was with Inuyasha. That could just be because she is roughly ten years older than he is, of course. You know, Ranma's tensing when he expected Kagome to say something about his lack of interest in school and homework just like his finacee's makes me wonder what the consensus of said fiancee's is going to be when they meet Kagome. **grins** The fiance contingent probably won't like him - and I think Akane will be the one who is the most jealous. Should be interesting when they all do meet up. Meanwhile, good chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 16:38 EST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 01, 2006 04:46 EST
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i like it
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Title: ill be bac on the 2nd
Reviewed By: ????????????? On: February 27, 2006 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did you post on fanfiction.net if you didnt you should try your really a good writer
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Title: chap 5
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Title: Ah! Kami-sama!
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about the title, but it just...fit. I had dissolved into giggles by the time I finished reading the chapter. Only Ranma could manage to have such a screwed up aura. Not even Inuyasha ever managed to get himself into as much trouble (and without even trying most times) as Ranma can. And of course the idea of Ranma afraid of cats if you're heading this the way I think you are....hilarious. This is such a good story. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 16:44 EST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 14:19 EST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: KIT-YASHA MONROE On: February 25, 2006 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it but no need to spoil you w/ a pefect score ne?
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
**grins** I like that 'maybe' qualifier that Ranma throws in. Of course he wouldn't want to explain the Higurashi shrine to the rest of the Wrecking Crew - he knows they would be drawn into battles and the rest of the mayhem that surrounds Ranma. And then too, Kagome didn't treat him like a nutcase (or a pervert!) like everyone else does when they find out about his curse. Of course, with all Kagome has experienced in the last decade or so, finding a boy that turns into a girl when she gets splashed with cold water would kind of be small potatoes, wouldn't it? **grins again** Of course, you have to wonder a little bit about that "feeling" of Ranma's. Could it be for a different reason? **winks** Such as something half-remembered, like from a previous life, maybe?
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