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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984(i'm too lazy to log in) On: March 21, 2006 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. While not original plot wise you've definately taken the plot to a different place then most authors take it. I also cannot wait for you to have the rest of the Nerima crew meet Kagome, if you do that mind you. This is an ecxellent story and I find myself looking foward to Tues and Thurs just to read the updates.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 10:56 EST
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Yeah! it was good! I mean real good. Can't wait for your update.
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Reviewed By: Ormik On: March 19, 2006 07:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I have read couple of other Ranma/Inuyasha crossovers with similar idea of Ranma being Inuyasha's reincarnation, and this is absolutely the best of those fics. Simply magnificent.
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Title: You love to see me!? Right?
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: March 17, 2006 20:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly love this fic. I just found it and want to read more. Do, with out further ado, writer write more please. I especially want to know if Kagome and the others realize exactly what they have done. Inuyasha in Ranma's body? Yikes. I hope to see more. If you get time, please...... SI.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoooHooo!! We know what that little "extra" bit that Kagome exorcised was now! Its the "separation" between the two lives and personalities! Man, that has *got* to be wierd for the personality that seems to be coming out. I noticed that when Ranma was first talking to Kagome, he carefully maintained the "he" and "me" parts, but by the end, everything was "I". Is the Inuyasha part merging with the Ranma part? It would almost seems to be, given Ranma's reaction to the feline Shampoo. Instead of running screaming, it was like he was facing Goshinki all over again. He met his worst fear head-on, though not consciously, and still in total fear of his life. And I wonder if Ranma feared himself when he "woke up" from that short stint as full-demon Inuyasha (you are going to explain how that's possible, right?). That little shudder he gave at the end made me wonder. **snorts** I wonder if Genma will come up later to find out how to do that "new technique" that Ranma "learned". I can't wait to see *that* interaction. The relationship between father and son makes the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru almost warm and cuddly. **blushes** Awwww, well, I like to read your chapters and review them at least as much (and probably more) as you like my review! I really liked this chapter (in case this ginormous review hasn't told you). Transitional in that we see what happened to Ranma/Inuyasha, but brings the fiance contingent into it. I really LOVE this fic! Can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 16:43 EST
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Yeah I know thoughs things always say I'm dead! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 16, 2006 04:07 EST
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eh? well soz for taking so long to review. i only JUST realised you updated since last time i was reading. great job so far! im loving it
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 16, 2006 04:00 EST
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~SPOILER~ *gasps* those four items! i recognise them! theyre the four legendary items from the second movie of inuyasha that kaguya took! very fitting!
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Title: INUYOKIA87
Reviewed By: INUYOKIA87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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iT WAS EXCENLENT! Can't wait til its finished.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**bows to artistic license** You are right of course. I make use of it myself from time to time. **grins** I can't beleive I forgot about Kanna's mirror, though. **smacks forehead** And now we know for sure! Ranma really IS Inuyasha! Sweeet!! I liked how you worked in the rosary; Inuyasha is probably so conditioned to her saying "osuwari" that he reacted without thinking. (how like an inu.... ;p )I am really looking forward to what happens when ...whomever is currently residing in the body of Ranma Saotome wakes up. Should be very interesting - especially for Kagome and Shippo. GREAT chapter, and I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 16:52 EST
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Lol. Yes I am alive! Keep up the great work!
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Title: UpDaTe
Reviewed By: chibimechibiyou (from fanfiction.net) On: March 14, 2006 16:29 EST
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yayyyy!! you updated and the chapter is going good!! i can't wait until you update soon~!~! have you ever thought about writing on fanfiction(dot)net?? cuz i think you should try it out. ^-^ ...im babberling..wel bai baiz
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Title: Getting back the angst
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. You're bringing it back. For what it's worth, the "angst" really came through more when it was Kagome's POV early on. Switching to Ranma's POV is where some of it got lost. I like this last chapter....the plot thickens.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:28 EST
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^-^ he's 'membering the past life...update again soon please ~~Kuramas gurl
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My oh my! Poor Ranma! Or, is he really Inuyasha now? I am of two minds on what that "something else" that went with the Jusenkyo curse into the mirror (and...didn't that mirror break in the second movie?) was. On one hand, it could be "Ranma". On the other, it could just be the seal on his past life, allowing Ranma to know who he was last time around. Or something else entirely. I am curious as to how Kagome got all of the sacred objects needed for the ceremony. I thought, for some reason, that everything but Inuyasha's kimono and hakama were left in the dream castle at the end of the second movie (and where DID she get the fire rat from, anyway? Surely Sesshoumaru would not loan it out for this, assuming he has it.). The only thing I am a little concerned about is the time location for his random memories. Its obviously set during the time of the jewel quest. Wait until the Inuyasha soul sees Kagome in her mid-twenties! Can we say confusion - yessiree! **chuckles** And that brings up another question: how will Kagome handle the reincarnated Inuyasha? We all know what happened when Kagome first came to the Sungoku Jidai. Comparisons between her and Kikyou abounded! Will turnabout be fair play, in this case? But I really did love this chapter. Settled for once and for all on whether Ranma is the reincarnation of Inuyasha, and brought a bit of angst back into the picture. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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