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| "Sealed Past" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, Sesshoumaru showed back up again. What is the animosity between the wolves and the dogs, anyway? I can see the rivalry between Kouga and Inuyasha - it had its basis in Kagome. But I feel a bit lost on the whole wolves/dog thing. So..no Tessaiga for Ranma. At least the Inuyasha part knows what happened to his sword - and I was very glad to see that Sesshoumaru gave it back - though it was practically part of Sesshoumaru now, as his fang repaired Tessaiga after the last break. I'm glad Sesshoumaru got over that petty jealousy over the sword though. It didn't become him, if you know what I mean. **giggles** By sheer luck, I managed to read both chapters you posted today. I like them both, by the way. **winks** But I'll save that review until that one is officially posted. Great work, as per usual. Can't wait for next time!
| Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 11:59 EST
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I know what you mean, one time I made the mistake of taking 4 diff history classes at once in 4 diff time periods, i decided i was going to write a final paper on how the romans conquered vietnam and the nazi's rebelled while the velvet revolution conquered the whole continant... it sounded better in my head, but i was actually going to turn it in to all 4 professors ;) relax, take your time and if you're worried skip a day of updating... did i just encourage that? oh well i'm a bad reader... lol but grades do come first great chapter
| Reviewed By: inukoro On: March 28, 2006 05:40 EST
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ahhh! im sooo sorry! i just caught up with your story! GOMEN NASAI! i have been very busy with assignments and such i havent been able to read but im back now!! yYour story is great as usual. *sighs* u make nice plots and ideas i envy. oh well... i just wanted to tell you that i have a ff.net account if your interested but currently only one onshot in it but plz have a look if you have time^^ www.fanfiction.net\~yuenorei and i have a deviant art account with stuff i update every week here: http://fuyu-no-gekkou.deviantart.com/ well thats pretty much it from me. looking forward to the next update. i should be today i think but ill read it tommorrow coz i live in australia so... its not up yet^^
| Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 22:43 EST
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insert happy dance here (picture a variant of the scooby dance from charlie brown) screwing you over or not, i still got an extra chapter this week and it made me smile therefore i'm happy! and yeah koga's here i love koga...
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**grins** Wai!! An early update! Did my birthday come early? ;p Seriously though, nice chapter. So Ranma loosed his inner demon willingly, hmm? I would say that is progress - though Kagome might "sit" him when she finds out - or not, all things considered. There was a legitimate beef with Genkan, after all. Very good way to introduce Kouga, by the way. In the perfect setting for those two to fight without Kagome getting in the way and stopping things. ;p Speaking of Kouga, does he know about Kagome being the same Kagome from 500 years ago? Or is he in the dark like probably the vast majority of the demon-society? Whatever happens, I am looking forward to seeing the interaction between these two old rivals. And seeing some of the things that you hinted would be coming up. **grins evilly** Anyway, I enjoyed as always, and am looking forward to your next update!
| Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: March 25, 2006 15:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story please keep going with it. It has a great over all plot and is really well written. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Is Sesshoumaru going to find out about InuYasha soon? I can see him takeing him in instead of letting the Tendo's or anyone else besides Kagome/Shippo/fedual family taking him in. Well I hope to read more soon.
| Reviewed By: Neoyasha On: March 25, 2006 12:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tht was a deninit on my list to read so i just cann't wait for more chapters
| Reviewed By: Fano On: March 25, 2006 09:57 EST
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Ok. I give. I won't let it bother me that Akane is the enemy....because I am so enjoying what you're doing with the Inu in Ranma. Great Chapter! I really want Inu back!
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**sighs** This chapter is like a cup of tea - warm and comforting. I was glad to see Shippou pop back up again. I had kind of wondered what had happened to him when the new-and-improved Ranma woke up a couple of chapters back. I am also glad to see that Ranma is starting to - in some instances anyway - accept the *other* inside him, though he still seems to find it hard to beleive that the *other* is just another part of himself. And poor Ranma! Having memories of making love to someone - when his current body hasn't (yet, anyway ^_-). We saw just how distracting that is for him, and I can only hope there isn't some future battle (though with the craziness surrounding him, it wouldn't surprise me - follows from one life to the next, doesn't it?) where certain memeories distract him. Could be ...bad. I did like Kagome (and the rest of the family's) response to finding out that Ranma is one of the Nerima Wreckers. His "punishment" was pretty fitting, in his case. He usually only destroys to save his hide, unlike the rest of them, who destroy to try to get to him - or the others, depending on who is doing the attacking. While its hard to call Ranma innocent, he usually is. Its rare that he actually starts something, on purpose anyway. I am looking forward to the meeting between Kagome and the rest of the Wreckers. I figure that will come shortly, once all of the rest of the cursed ones realize that his curse is gone. He'll be shadowed like crazy then, I'm sure (any chance on P-chan getting his comeuppance for all those times he slept with Akane? that always rubbed me wrong). Anyway, yet another good chapter. Sort of like the calm before the storm - or the eye of the hurricane, if you prefer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: The Review!!
Reviewed By: Nysk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have to say I am enjoying this story and look forward to more. I wonder how the NWC will react to the "new" Ranma... and how they will fair against TRUE demons. I cannot image Cologne will be... very happy about the change of things! "ALL GLORY TO THE FLEA DEMONS!!"
| Title: Hmm.
Reviewed By: Fano On: March 23, 2006 13:34 EST
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I'm still with you, and still enjoying the story. I must say, though, that I would expect the real Ranma to have more angst (had to use that word, since I know you love it:) about the conflicting emotions between his love of Akane (I interpret their relationshsip in the manga as love) and Kagome (if InuYasha's in there, it's got to be love, right?). I think Ranma's in love with Akane and Inu's in love with Kagome. That's got to suggest some really interesting plot opportunties!
| Title: lol I am actually Felicity_Angel46 but it doesn't let me stay signed in to review ^^;;
Reviewed By: felicity_angel467 On: March 23, 2006 13:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so much!!! It is a pleasure to read ^___^
| Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 10:36 EST
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not a problem I can do that. you sure can't update beofe tuesday... i had really bad week and could use the cheering up... please??? you don't really have to i'm just taking shameless advantage of the fact that my week did in fact suck and trying to get some sympathy... looking foward to tuesday
| Title: Nice Story, but...
Reviewed By: Calamity-Queen of Cordite On: March 21, 2006 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I'd like to say that I'm enjoying your story inspite of one major flaw; no Onna-Ranma. IMHO, Ranma just isn't Ranma with out two quintessential factors; the girl curse and the fact that he's a martial artist/warrior. Perhaps the girl curse is only temporarily cured and will come back? I think it'd be great to see Inuranma have to deal with being a half-female dog demon hanyou. That would sure put the Inuyasha personality off his stride like he putting the Ranma personality off his. Anyway, still a good story. It says something that I'm still following it even after the curse was cured. Usually that's when I stop reading. Good Luck with it... Calamity
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**pounces on new chapter** God, I have been waiting for this for 5 days! Its sad (or maybe not ^_- )when you define a day by how close you are to an update of a favorite fic. Needless to say, I enjoyed this one as usual. You had Ranma down absolutely pat in this chapter. He (much like Inuyasha, come to think about it) always tries to solve his problems on his own, and I think you got his dilemma over this particular problem down very well. He *knows* this is over his head, but is determined to take care of things himself. I also liked where he realized what it was that made him do it that way. Ranma is growing up even more, even if he doesn't realize it. The scene with Happosai had me nearly fall off the couch laughing. Yes, Happosai is a little OOC. But then again, you just explained his small size and extreme power for a "man" of his age. To come across a Ranma with demon powers of some sort - after knowing that the boy didn't have any - probably scared him out of his mind. And when Ranma muttered flea", it made me wonder if he is descended from a certain flea demon that we all know and love - and what that would mean for Happosai if he is. **giggles** If I remember right, even with the end of the samurai in the Meiji period, and all that went with it, including family retainers; demons would still follow the old ways. Jaken is still a retainer, after all. **grins evilly** Can you imagine Happosai honor- and blood-bound to serve Ranma? **howls with laughter** Oh, the irony THAT would be. Anyway, to continue with my monstrously long review... The end was very touching. Ranma realizing that he had to swallow his pride and go talk to Kagome. And I bet Ranma's stomach just went on a little trip to his feet when she told him that the "thing" inside him was himself. Time to meet the brother of his past life, perhaps? ^_^v I will wrap this up (its length is starting to scare me ;p ), but expect a response to your e-mail soon - I'll touch on that subject you asked me about there. But as always, great chapter. Really enjoyed it, and can't wait until the next one!
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