| "Sealed Past" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: May 24, 2006 08:01 EDT
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ahhh... me again. i have to give you my apologies for taking so long to review because my computer for some reason did not show me that you have updated until now even though i have tried to check every now and then. *sighs* oh yes... now that i found out what your ff.net account is i have to review it on there too when i have time. ah yes and also to leave my account link for you ^^. i have to congratulate you on how you put together and ended the story so OMEDETOU! obviously your story is quite original and i havent read one with anything like it really. you have made the character seem more in depth and perhaps more knowledgable than in the original mangas. ive had a fun time reading and waiting for your updates and hope to do so again. good luck with your other stories
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Reviewed By: Morita Ayumi On: May 21, 2006 22:08 EDT
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I liked the story in general, but it was kind of hard to follow with the who-was-who stuff sometimes. One time, I got Sessomaru(sp? Forgive me! >.< I forgot how to spell his name) confused with Kagome's granfather.. I forgot how, but I did...
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 10:17 EDT
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:tear: it's over... good ending, great story... contemplating a sequal???
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Title: All Good Things....
Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**takes deep breath** I enjoyed this story so much - though by now I think you know that. **big grin** The ending was very characteristic of Ranma/Inuyasha (I really enjoyed the disavowal of the Crew, by the way) and Kagome. And the idea of changing the trigger for the curse to the rosaries was a stroke of genius. **chuckles** How Takahashi-esque! I plan to read the revised version once 2.0 comes out, of course. I just wanted to say that this was a wonderful fic, and you are a really good writer. I have both this fic, and you as an author in my favorites, and I look forward to many more works by you. Gambatte ne in all you do!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 14:36 EDT
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GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I encourage you to keep writing and most definitley to work on your grammar... not that it is a major issue its just people tend to understand the story more if you use correct english.Look forward to seeing your next fanfic. Kisses bye!!!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 02:05 EDT
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I love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111You have to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'll be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Wolfie Nightshade On: May 11, 2006 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like this story. Ity has taken my about 2 days to get thru all the chapters. I find someparts most amuseing. Please do continue. Thanks
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**sighs** I hate real life. That's why I wasn't able to review before now. Anyway....very good chapter, as always. I really thought you had the characterizations perfect on this one (not that they aren't always good). Akane is being shown to be extremely jealous - and not a little arrogant as well. Ryouga seems to be the first to able to think and react to all this, considering his question. Maybe there is hope for he and Ranma to be real friends after this is all over - Akane probably won't want anything to do with him for awhile (I remember your earlier hint about P-chan ^_- ). I am looking forward to the denouement, of course. **grins** Let Akane get her comeuppance. And to see our favorite couple move on and finally get the happiness they deserve. Very well done chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
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Title: Luv it write more!
Reviewed By: Majiin Yusuke [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 00:58 EDT
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Love it you gotta write more...your chapters are getting shorter....(pokes them)
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Title: dreamgirl
Reviewed By: update!!!!!!! On: May 07, 2006 01:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 19:40 EDT
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define consecutively please... as in the next to chapters right in a row or what... update soon please please please... i'm begging here don't make me beg... oh wait too late.
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: May 06, 2006 17:06 EDT
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ah, the joy of watching someone use cool logic to smack down the irrational and outraged. bravo, lol.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 01:23 EDT
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I halfway expected Akane to say something along the lines of "It's the principle of the thing!". Looks like there'll be some explanations next time, not that everyone will accept them.
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Reviewed By: ebit333 On: May 05, 2006 22:05 EDT
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thank you for updating!!! please write more i really want someone to put akane in her place! i didn't like her in the series and i don't like her know!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 21:42 EDT
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LOL!!!!!! You rock!!!!!!!!! Keep it coming cause I love your story !!!!!!!!!!!
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