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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 08:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**shivers and relaxes** Ahhhh, my fix. You do know you've made me a junkie for this story, right? **chuckles** I did enjoy the chapter, though it was interesting that Inuyasha hadn't been told about it, and didn't even seem to know it had happened. Of course, as over-protective as he sometimes is, its not surprising that Kagome never mentioned it to him. **grins at the thought Inuyasha's expression had he known at the time that she put herself in danger - without him around to protect her** I certainly can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and as to putting reviewer replies in the chapter, or replying to the reviewer directly - I'm good either way. I certainly don't mind getting e-mails from you, if you want to go that way. Do whatever works best for you. Hope your exams went well, and see you next chapter!
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Title: Ha!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 07:57 EDT
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Conditioner! Took me a few minutes, but I got it. Very cute. So that disc wasn't the one that Cologne gave Happosai in the anime? I was half expecting Kagome to meet her (but now that I think about it, she's only supposed to be, like, 300 years old, right?)
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Reviewed By: Calamity - Queen of Cordite On: April 19, 2006 06:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, as far as I know, the NWC thing, while very widely used and acccepted, is a "fanon" term. I didn't say anything before because it's your story and if I'm the only person it bugged then I didn't think it worthy of mention. -- I can understand about the cliffhanger thing. I never try to do them on purpose since I can't stand them myself. =D -- Reading through my last review, I was chagrinned to see all the spelling errors. Guess thats what I get for trying to leave a review when I had a migraine and was on some pretty good pain meds. =D Sorry 'bout that. -- Good chapter. Thanks for sharing. -- Calamity
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Title: Back again ne?
Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 19, 2006 02:40 EDT
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ah! i dont think my last review got through... oh well... kagome speaking bad chinese? hahaha. u even put in the menomaru arc. nice job. and here another reminder: REVIEW NE?!
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:31 EDT
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stupid dial up it's evil isn't it? i love the names you gave the chinese amazons... gave me a pretty good laugh can't wait for tuesday... tendos going to appear in that chpater? at least kasumi? (sorry she's my favorite tendo)
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:25 EDT
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That explains that. But there's more to resolve.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 15:34 EDT
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hoorah! new chapter, Kags seemed very authorative, I was scared XD
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 17, 2006 12:10 EDT
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I love it. That was a classic way to take care of the amazons have Kagome put them in there place. I can't wait to read more. What is Kagome and Ranma going to do about the Tendo's?
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Reviewed By: Vex The Warlord On: April 16, 2006 10:07 EDT
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I noticed another reading this one. Airen is misspelled.
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Title: Back again ne?
Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 14, 2006 23:19 EDT
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ahh i only just realise you have updated since i couldnt read your updates befor for some reason.. mayhap it was the computer. anyway i just remembered that you have not correct your little wrong. you still owe me a review XD. yeah i think thats it. oh and i think the last bit of the meeting with cologne was quite interesting.
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Title: I'm back....
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: April 14, 2006 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. I just finished with the last two chapters... Well, there's one more fiancee to go. Akane... Maybe the crazy one. But.... I'm rather curious where this is all about to lead. I'll be keeping a look out. And doing research. I have a possible idea. SI.
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Reviewed By: Kammi On: April 14, 2006 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this story has me tied down to it and tight! I love it! I can't even begin to say how interesting and VERY original this story is! See, I was one of the first people to join MM.org way back when and back then, the stories were of quality and people reviewed when they read. But as of late, the stories are all crappy with poor spelling and grammars skills and hardly no one reviews anymore. You are one of the exceptions! Great job! Keep up the good work! ~Kammi
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 08:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**opens mouth...closes it** Um... **continues doing fish impression** Ummm...... **shakes self** Wow.... I think my world just tilted on its axis. Kagome as one of the founders of the Amazons? I *hope* you're going to explain that more next time. If not, do a side story! It was a nice touch though, having Cologne be the one to decide that the "engagement" is over. Very well reasoned and thought out. And a good point - without Cologne's tricks, Shampoo would have had to retreat in defeat a long time ago. **giggles** I also got a kick in finding out that Cologne had a hand in her own defeat, so to speak, with the correspondence between she and Kagome. Poetic justice, that. I was glad to see the deeper definition of the "single soul" thing. I understood it in theory, but this helps a lot. Anyway, I must do some actual work now (since I am reading - and writing this review - on my work computer. **evil grin**), but I am looking forward to the next chapter - most definitely. I can't *wait* to see Akane (and the rest of the Tendo's) reaction to the news. As always, great chapter, and I am SOO looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Calamity - Queen of Cordite On: April 14, 2006 04:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still hangin' in there. It's a great Inuyasha story. Of course, like for some others, it stopped being a Ranma story for me when you removed the 1/2 part. As I said though, it's a great Inuyasha story. I tend to agree with Vex about the MWC thing. Calling them the "Nerima Wreckers" makes me thing of when my grandma tried to be hip and totally screwed up the coloquialism she was attempting to use. It is a bit distracting for the primarily Ranma fan. Lastly, don't listen to Mr. Axelrad. We work to gether developing my own stories and he's always trying to get me to leave cliffhangers, even to the point of having a rediculously short chapter to do so. He loves them, no matter what he says. :p Anyway, good work and thanks for the nearly religeous updates. Calamity
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 04:20 EDT
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(sweatdrops at your reaction) Yay, the Amazons are out of Ranma's hair! Or are they?
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