| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
'on Vegeta-sei when it was destroyed'. lol Good one! Yes, it's good. Of course, it's good.
BTW, ROFLMBO at your comment. You might want to go check it. I think you have my sex confused...(snicker) Got a good laugh from my boss's reaction though, thanks for amusing me! lol If Vegeta were here, he'd be laughing too.....Seriously, go reread your review and see what I mean! lol
Anyways, I'll get off your mistake now (snicker) and say that I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter! I can't wait. and congrats on your win, good luck at State! |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is very funny and i liked the previous stories keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Mon2k2 On: August 09, 2002 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its real hilarious n i hope u write sum more!! i luv the way u hav set it out n great plot to da story!!!!! |
Reviewed By: masamune On: April 22, 2002 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! i absolutely LOVE it! i found it incredibly halarious when we find out about vegeta's hatred of wal-mart. i actually work in the electronics department and i can tell you, wal-mart SUCKS! (and it's a cult... heh.) KEEP WRITIN'! i want to hear more about their little escapades in wal-mart. (make them blow it up, please please please...) |
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