| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: *Dying of hysterical laughter.*
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (I'm lazy.) On: April 08, 2004 05:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this. . . and. . . well, you know how when you're up waaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy late and trying to keep quiet so as not to wake your family? Umm. . . *laughs nervously* Can you pay for a doctor's bill for me?
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Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: Bakurikai17 On: December 31, 2003 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That story was totally hilarious!
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty On: March 14, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again,again, and again. i loved it! great story. Very funny. And as always Vegeta being pissed off was great. Taking goku and goten along for the ride was fun too. Iloved the tampax thing! and the onions. I feel for veggie...onions are gross! poor bulma. She needs a serious vacation.away frm the family! all in all i enjoyed this and im looking foward to more of your stories. later!
-Sb |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god!!!!! That story was too too funny. Damn you gotta write some more, your story's got me laughing like a mad woman. The Tampax thing and the Burger King things were too priceless^_^ |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just what I'd expect if Bulma ever sent Vegeta shopping. |
Reviewed By: GohanSj3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* hehehe Vegeta? Burger King? bad combination. *snickers* Goku? Goten? female products? bad combination. *snickers* Vegeta? Wal-Mart? bad combination. *snickers* Trunks? Goten? a security guard? Bad combination. *snickers* what do u get when u put them all together?? ONE HELL OF A FIC!! god this was a laugh. HAHAHA i like never stopped laughing. wau 2 go! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:36 CDT
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You go, JB! That was undeniably great! ^__^
sr |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 12:35 CDT
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*Stops her laughing to say:* Ohmigod, that was really good! *stifled laughs* I love it; it was very funny! *breaks out in kaughter once more* |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 05, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(blinks) Ok, I was expecting an explosion, not the 'oh well why fight it' thing. Well, I certainly loved the Burger King scene! I hope that Vegeta will someday learn to curb his temper...oh, well. Then he wouldn't be the Saiyan we all love. I feel sorry for the cashier though... (winces) I was in that position once. A mix-up of burgers. Figures. Oh well, that's the way the poop floats...pr sinks, depends i suppose. Anyways, I must needs go drink lots of Vanilla Coke and write.... I am going home! (I'm at school, faster computers) |
Reviewed By: K\ On: July 05, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(blinks) Ok, I was expecting an explosion, not the 'oh well why fight it' thing. Well, I certainly loved the Burger King scene! I hope that Vegeta will someday learn to curb his temper...oh, well. Then he wouldn't be the Saiyan we all love. I feel sorry for the cashier though... (winces) I was in that position once. A mix-up of burgers. Figures. Oh well, that's the way the poop floats...pr sinks, depends i suppose. Anyways, I must needs go drink lots of Vanilla Coke and write.... I am going home! (I'm at school, faster computers) |
Reviewed By: tracoch On: July 05, 2002 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This much is true, Veggie is (in your mine anyway) the man. And the woman let him get away with it (in his mind), again. lollollollollol!
I loved it. Who did you get the creativity from? The man, i'll bet!! No human female could possible hold such great genes. Oh, and thanks for letting Goku kick a little a##!!! Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x On: July 04, 2002 14:46 CDT
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perfect, that ending fixed and settled it all...keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was GREAT!!! I loved the ending. What Bulma said to him... damn, that musta hurt more than anything. I loved it. And all because of an onion. ^_^ I almost died when Trunks said to Vegeta that he was in deep shit and then Bra asked if "Daddy was in trouble." I couldn't stop laughing! Great fic, you really should write more like this.
And thanks, Susan ;) I'm glad that you encouraged her to complete the fic.
~Vegeta's Gyal~
Oh, and btw, if I could've, I would've rated this story a twelve, but the thingy only goes up to ten... |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 13:45 CDT
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Oh, yeah & thanks to Susan for inspiring the completion to this wonderful story :) :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 12:44 CDT
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Whew! Vegeta better be thanking his lucky stars. I loved how he just stood there waiting for his punishment! Meanwhile, poor Goku's the one taking the heat. Great story, I think this is probably my favorite of the adventure series so far. Can't wait to see what you have planned for the future. Great job JB :) |
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