| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: March 17, 2002 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job! Like where this is going keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2002 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, doesnt get any better than seeying Vegeta having to buy stuff like that. Perhaps Bulma can make him lick out the toilet bowl next?
!!!!!!!!!Keep it up!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 16, 2002 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny. You should most definitely continue this story, or at least until you have the same amount of chapters as "When You Least Expect" there is enough dramatized stories already. I need some comedy in my live. Keep up the good work, and write more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 16, 2002 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!! I think stupidity runs high in the Son family. Goku's conversation with Goten while on aisle 3 was rich. I'll be laughing about Summer and her Evening for a long time to come. Vegeta's lack of patience and Trunks definition of the word wimp was too much. LOL. I bet that poor kid behind the counter wished that his mom had used b.c. pills instead of bringing him into the world to have to deal with Vegeta. Please write more soon. This is just too funny. Peace |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 22:30 CST
Comment/Review:
The inclusion of Kakarrot. Very nice. This is looking good. |
Reviewed By: Mans On: March 11, 2002 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i loooved the story line. Especially Vegeta doing shopping and the way trunks is.
the down part is that some times its hard to read becuase of the tags in bwteen the writing. try going to the site and reading it your self u'll no what i mean
the story was grrrrrreaaaaaaatt
keep it up and u might be writing future story lies of the show!1
take care and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER
Ali |
Reviewed By: Mans On: March 11, 2002 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i loooved the story line. Especially Vegeta doing shopping and the way trunks is.
the down part is that some times its hard to read becuase of the tags in bwteen the writing. try going to the site and reading it your self u'll no what i mean
the story was grrrrrreaaaaaaatt
keep it up and u might be writing future story lies of the show!1
take care and HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER
Ali |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 11, 2002 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!!! "It'll be refreshing to see a Saiyan with a job"-LOL ChiChi said a mouthful. I love Trunk's horror at having to go shopping with daddy. Goten's miserable, Goku's pissed and Veggie would rather be having a root canal. What a lovely foursome. I can't wait to see what happens at the drugstore. The poor pharmacist has no idea of what is about to happen to him and his establlishment. Great job JB!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
LMAO!! I love it.. The kids reaction to having to go out with Daddy is just PRICELESS!!! |
Reviewed By: Mon2k2 On: August 09, 2002 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its real hilarious n i hope u write sum more!! i luv the way u hav set it out n great plot to da story!!!!! b |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 01, 2002 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOLLOL!! Great first chapter. I loved the fight, the kids' reaction and Veggie's disgust with the whole damn thing. And you used my little Vegetasei line too-I'm so flattered! This fic will kick ass just like the others you've done. I have a feeling that before Veggie's day is thru he's gonna want to get the dragonballs and wish Frieza back, so that Frieza can take him out PERMANENTLY! Thanks JB |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
'on Vegeta-sei when it was destroyed'. lol Good one! Yes, it's good. Of course, it's good.
BTW, ROFLMBO at your comment. You might want to go check it. I think you have my sex confused...(snicker) Got a good laugh from my boss's reaction though, thanks for amusing me! lol If Vegeta were here, he'd be laughing too.....Seriously, go reread your review and see what I mean! lol
Anyways, I'll get off your mistake now (snicker) and say that I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter! I can't wait. and congrats on your win, good luck at State! |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is very funny and i liked the previous stories keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Mon2k2 On: August 09, 2002 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its real hilarious n i hope u write sum more!! i luv the way u hav set it out n great plot to da story!!!!! |
Reviewed By: masamune On: April 22, 2002 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! i absolutely LOVE it! i found it incredibly halarious when we find out about vegeta's hatred of wal-mart. i actually work in the electronics department and i can tell you, wal-mart SUCKS! (and it's a cult... heh.) KEEP WRITIN'! i want to hear more about their little escapades in wal-mart. (make them blow it up, please please please...) |
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