| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 23, 2002 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOMAN! That was NOT funny!!! I almost had a heart attack! And then where would DoY be, huh? Shame! And if you even consider putting Yamcha in any review for any story of mine "I will make sure you regret it". Can you say no Trunks or Goten even being born!!! ^_^
Ok, the Burger King part was hilarious! You've worked fast food right? I worked for three HFIL-ish months at McDonald's. So, I happen to love Vegeta-blows-up-McDonald's scenes....but Burger King is also ok. I like the reactions to the orders! rolfmbo
So, does Vegeta finally get to kick *BEEP*?
Put me on the mailing list for all your stories please! (I should get one too, huh?) bttp@email.com |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2002 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! Please put me on your mailing list! My E-Mail is EvilGotenks@yahoo.com. Great Fic!!!!! Keep up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2002 08:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh!!! that was cute! good update :) i wish i was as consistent as you.. i think im losing my touch...nooooo! :) good job jb! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 23, 2002 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! I think poor Bertha is as good as dead-lol-oh and the hair looking like out-of-control bushes is so true. I never really thought about it till you mentioned it. Funny chap. Loved it. Write more when you can, ok? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 23, 2002 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! I think poor Bertha is as good as dead-lol-oh and the hair looking like out-of-control bushes is so true. I never really thought about it till you mentioned it. Funny chap. Loved it. Write more when you can, ok? |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom0286 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny fic update soon I want more HE HE |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fic is GREAT!!!!!!!!!! I really hope you update it!!!!! I was laughing for hours! I really liked the whole Vegeta + Cashier thing!!!!! Great Fic!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
All those poor people. I am glad that you updated. I am sorry it was giving you *cough* a hard time. Fanfics can do that sometimes. Any ways, I really like. I really really like. I can't wait to the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 08, 2002 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they may not have blown up wal-mart but i still Loved it! that was great. hee hee, she thought they were gay. how cute! i'm surprised vegeta didn't catch that, he seems to undertand things a lot qiucker than goku, there! but anyway, great chap! write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 08, 2002 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap, lol, Amber thought they were gay. I think Veggie would have blown her away if he had known what was going thru her mind. Are you finished with this one (hope not) or are you gonna write more chaps (hope so). Either way, great story! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it very much lol i can't wait to see thenext ep |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 20, 2002 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!! I love Veggie's threats when he was looking for the cookies. I hope for that boy's sake that they ARE in aisle 7. Also our prince's disgust when Goku was looking for a parking space was rich. You have gotten Veg and Goku's characters down PAT and that's what makes this story work. Thanks for reminding me why I don't go to Wal-mart. Great chap JB. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2002 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A whole month, wow. I hope I didn't pressure you to much in to writing this. Your comedy is greatly appricated. But, jeesh a whole entire month, no wonder I was so down. Anyways, I still like your story, I would like for you to write more chapters. Going to the "W" word can be such a bummer. |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: April 11, 2002 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goku shopping for tampons. I will never EVER get that image out of my head. lol |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 11, 2002 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(rolls eyes) Took you long enough to review DoY, I think it's your fault! lol Fine, more plugging for me, really and paybacks... I could say what you said, but I'm not quite going that LOW!
lol, Why doesn't Vegeta like Wal'mart's? lol, Vegeta got beat up by Goku, then smashed his face into the windshield! I still can't believe they got that many tampax! lol
I liked the whole N'Sync thing! Vegeta hates N'Sync! Now my friends think he's cool! lol
heehee, I'll be waiting to get you back....hmmmm |
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