| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: July 01, 2002 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm so touched JB, thanks for your kind words *sniff*. You know you're my fave writer and I can always count on being entertained by your fics ^_^. I will never look at Burger King the same way again. Just a few days ago I went there and ordered a burger. I told the dude behind the counter "Don't even THINK about putting onions in my burger or you'll find out if there's an afterlife". I must have looked serious cause everyone was looking at me like I was on drugs or deranged-lol. I guess there's a little Vegeta in all of us. Anyway, this was just too funny. Looks like Veggie got the wrong burger and look at the mess that followed-LOLLOL!! Trunks telling Veg that he was in deep shit and Bra asking Trunks if Daddy was in trouble was too much for me. I couldn't stop laughing. Leave it to kids to rub it in :). ChiChi's reaction to it all along with Goku's glares towards Veggie...well I'm still laughing. Of course Bulma blew Veggie (and me for that matter) away with her calm behavior. A containment crew?? LOL-yeah, Bulma doesn't need a few hundred lawsuits filed against her. Oh man, what can I say except thanks for all the laughs that this fic, and the other great adventure fics, have given me. With your super writing style and great sense of humor,how can you go wrong. Anywho, I'll be waiting patiently for more of Veggie's great adventures along with updates to all your other fics. Btw, have you seen how many reviews there are for Willpower?? YOU GO GIRL!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 21:17 CDT
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That's it! I'll never work for Burger King or any place that sells onions! Great fic, I love it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 22, 2002 08:53 CDT
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that was AWESOME! he blew up burger king! i hate burger king! more power to him! |
Reviewed By: priss On: June 19, 2002 18:56 CDT
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it was so funny but what happened to bulma? update soon k? |
Reviewed By: autumn On: June 19, 2002 14:09 CDT
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Man, that was too funny. I love the image of Vegeta losing it over a little onion, well he's had a rough day. Poor Bulma, when they news finds out that the psycho's associated with CC... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!!! Great chap JB, just great. Man, and I thought I hated onions on my burger. Jeez, Veggie should take an anger management program. Poor Bulma, the embarrasment of it all. Hell, what's gonna happen to Veggie now? It's not like prison bars can hold him back. Come on, ya gotta update this one asap, pretty please with a Veggie on top? |
Reviewed By: autumn On: June 17, 2002 20:49 CDT
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Uh oh... Looks like trouble... This story is great & hilarious as all the adventure stories are. Hope you update soon!! |
Reviewed By: anime otaku On: June 20, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Please , please , please , write some more !!
It was SO FUNNY when Vegeta bit the onion and went berserk ! Keep it up man ! I REALLY , REALLY enjoyed it ! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: June 17, 2002 10:34 CDT
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Yet again, you have me laughing out loud. Did I have any doubt? :) My favorite parts so far: Vegeta punching Goku for no reason, and his urge to shove the little old lady. Priceless!! |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I haven't read your stoof in awhile....*arches eyebrow* Vegeta is my hero. Stupid onion-serving burger jockeys! Anyway, I would like to be in a chapter of this if that's okay. My E-mail is "greybus4@cs.com" C ya |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: May 24, 2002 21:23 CDT
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Uh oh! looks like the shit hit the fan! I can't wait to see what happens in ch. 7. Oh, and in case you're wondering why I havn't shown myself in a while, it's because school's been a bitch (with exams coming up and all), plus I'm starting a fan fic of my own [a V/B (but others will come in the distant future)]. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my email; is tristar49@yahoo.com and i like to have all of them if you could please love this story very much and the others that i have read keep them coming |
Reviewed By: kiarene On: May 24, 2002 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*LOL* your fic is really really funny...i can't recall the number of times i felt the same way as vegeta when i go shopping! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin no Hime On: May 23, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is Great! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please get it out as soon as possible. I couldn't help but burst out laughing when Vegeta bit the onion. Your stories are both creative and well written, Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 23, 2002 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome update. those poor burger king people, they never rest. i can't believe you're discontinuing my favorite fics! that's TERRIBLE!!!!!!! i really hope you do finish them in the future, they were very good. |
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