| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: May 23, 2002 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! I think poor Bertha is as good as dead-lol-oh and the hair looking like out-of-control bushes is so true. I never really thought about it till you mentioned it. Funny chap. Loved it. Write more when you can, ok? |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom0286 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny fic update soon I want more HE HE |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2002 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fic is GREAT!!!!!!!!!! I really hope you update it!!!!! I was laughing for hours! I really liked the whole Vegeta + Cashier thing!!!!! Great Fic!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
All those poor people. I am glad that you updated. I am sorry it was giving you *cough* a hard time. Fanfics can do that sometimes. Any ways, I really like. I really really like. I can't wait to the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 08, 2002 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they may not have blown up wal-mart but i still Loved it! that was great. hee hee, she thought they were gay. how cute! i'm surprised vegeta didn't catch that, he seems to undertand things a lot qiucker than goku, there! but anyway, great chap! write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 08, 2002 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap, lol, Amber thought they were gay. I think Veggie would have blown her away if he had known what was going thru her mind. Are you finished with this one (hope not) or are you gonna write more chaps (hope so). Either way, great story! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2002 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it very much lol i can't wait to see thenext ep |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 20, 2002 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!! I love Veggie's threats when he was looking for the cookies. I hope for that boy's sake that they ARE in aisle 7. Also our prince's disgust when Goku was looking for a parking space was rich. You have gotten Veg and Goku's characters down PAT and that's what makes this story work. Thanks for reminding me why I don't go to Wal-mart. Great chap JB. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2002 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A whole month, wow. I hope I didn't pressure you to much in to writing this. Your comedy is greatly appricated. But, jeesh a whole entire month, no wonder I was so down. Anyways, I still like your story, I would like for you to write more chapters. Going to the "W" word can be such a bummer. |
Reviewed By: Eilleen On: April 11, 2002 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goku shopping for tampons. I will never EVER get that image out of my head. lol |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: April 11, 2002 07:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(rolls eyes) Took you long enough to review DoY, I think it's your fault! lol Fine, more plugging for me, really and paybacks... I could say what you said, but I'm not quite going that LOW!
lol, Why doesn't Vegeta like Wal'mart's? lol, Vegeta got beat up by Goku, then smashed his face into the windshield! I still can't believe they got that many tampax! lol
I liked the whole N'Sync thing! Vegeta hates N'Sync! Now my friends think he's cool! lol
heehee, I'll be waiting to get you back....hmmmm |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 11, 2002 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYYYAAAAAAYYYYYYY You updated!!! I guess Vegeta "showed" Goku (^_^). Looks like Bra is gonna get her cookies after all-lol. Can't wait to see what disaster awaits dads and sons. |
Reviewed By: Rogue On: May 11, 2002 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! Go Vegeta!!!! WOOOHOOO!!!! That's ma boy!!
Teach them a little respect! If only I were a Saiyan!! Man, I would kick some serious a$$ out there. Shopping, driving, I'd take back every parking space ever stollen from me and heaven have mercy on the next person to cut me off!!!
I love Vegeta and I would be just like him. Who says power corrupts? I'm already corrupt, I'm just lacking a little in the power department. I already have the mindset now I just need the muscle. GIVE ME THE MUSCLE!!!!! pleeeaaaaaassse
i want the muscle soooooooooo bad :( |
Reviewed By: oroborus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this definitely has overtones of the time Goku and Piccolo were trying to get their driver's licences.
This is funny material, no doubt about that. However I think that if you spent some time on this story, tightening up some the phrasing and improving the spelling and typos (ironically, I just typed 'imporving'), that it would be time well spent. |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFL!! Oh man, I know where Goku and Goen are coming from. Any guy who has had to by embarrassing femenine hygene rpoducts for their girlfriend/wife/mother understand. Who is Summer and why does she have her own evening? Man that is great. I especially like the bread aisle joke. Yeast... |
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