| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn On: June 19, 2002 14:09 CDT
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Man, that was too funny. I love the image of Vegeta losing it over a little onion, well he's had a rough day. Poor Bulma, when they news finds out that the psycho's associated with CC... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!!! Great chap JB, just great. Man, and I thought I hated onions on my burger. Jeez, Veggie should take an anger management program. Poor Bulma, the embarrasment of it all. Hell, what's gonna happen to Veggie now? It's not like prison bars can hold him back. Come on, ya gotta update this one asap, pretty please with a Veggie on top? |
Reviewed By: autumn On: June 17, 2002 20:49 CDT
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Uh oh... Looks like trouble... This story is great & hilarious as all the adventure stories are. Hope you update soon!! |
Reviewed By: anime otaku On: June 20, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Please , please , please , write some more !!
It was SO FUNNY when Vegeta bit the onion and went berserk ! Keep it up man ! I REALLY , REALLY enjoyed it ! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: June 17, 2002 10:34 CDT
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Yet again, you have me laughing out loud. Did I have any doubt? :) My favorite parts so far: Vegeta punching Goku for no reason, and his urge to shove the little old lady. Priceless!! |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I haven't read your stoof in awhile....*arches eyebrow* Vegeta is my hero. Stupid onion-serving burger jockeys! Anyway, I would like to be in a chapter of this if that's okay. My E-mail is "greybus4@cs.com" C ya |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: May 24, 2002 21:23 CDT
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Uh oh! looks like the shit hit the fan! I can't wait to see what happens in ch. 7. Oh, and in case you're wondering why I havn't shown myself in a while, it's because school's been a bitch (with exams coming up and all), plus I'm starting a fan fic of my own [a V/B (but others will come in the distant future)]. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my email; is tristar49@yahoo.com and i like to have all of them if you could please love this story very much and the others that i have read keep them coming |
Reviewed By: kiarene On: May 24, 2002 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*LOL* your fic is really really funny...i can't recall the number of times i felt the same way as vegeta when i go shopping! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin no Hime On: May 23, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is Great! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please get it out as soon as possible. I couldn't help but burst out laughing when Vegeta bit the onion. Your stories are both creative and well written, Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 23, 2002 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome update. those poor burger king people, they never rest. i can't believe you're discontinuing my favorite fics! that's TERRIBLE!!!!!!! i really hope you do finish them in the future, they were very good. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 23, 2002 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOMAN! That was NOT funny!!! I almost had a heart attack! And then where would DoY be, huh? Shame! And if you even consider putting Yamcha in any review for any story of mine "I will make sure you regret it". Can you say no Trunks or Goten even being born!!! ^_^
Ok, the Burger King part was hilarious! You've worked fast food right? I worked for three HFIL-ish months at McDonald's. So, I happen to love Vegeta-blows-up-McDonald's scenes....but Burger King is also ok. I like the reactions to the orders! rolfmbo
So, does Vegeta finally get to kick *BEEP*?
Put me on the mailing list for all your stories please! (I should get one too, huh?) bttp@email.com |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2002 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! Please put me on your mailing list! My E-Mail is EvilGotenks@yahoo.com. Great Fic!!!!! Keep up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2002 08:01 CDT
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Ahh!!! that was cute! good update :) i wish i was as consistent as you.. i think im losing my touch...nooooo! :) good job jb! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 23, 2002 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! I think poor Bertha is as good as dead-lol-oh and the hair looking like out-of-control bushes is so true. I never really thought about it till you mentioned it. Funny chap. Loved it. Write more when you can, ok? |
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