| "Vegeta and the Great Shopping Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Just what I'd expect if Bulma ever sent Vegeta shopping. |
Reviewed By: GohanSj3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* hehehe Vegeta? Burger King? bad combination. *snickers* Goku? Goten? female products? bad combination. *snickers* Vegeta? Wal-Mart? bad combination. *snickers* Trunks? Goten? a security guard? Bad combination. *snickers* what do u get when u put them all together?? ONE HELL OF A FIC!! god this was a laugh. HAHAHA i like never stopped laughing. wau 2 go! |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:36 CDT
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You go, JB! That was undeniably great! ^__^
sr |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 12:35 CDT
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*Stops her laughing to say:* Ohmigod, that was really good! *stifled laughs* I love it; it was very funny! *breaks out in kaughter once more* |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 05, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(blinks) Ok, I was expecting an explosion, not the 'oh well why fight it' thing. Well, I certainly loved the Burger King scene! I hope that Vegeta will someday learn to curb his temper...oh, well. Then he wouldn't be the Saiyan we all love. I feel sorry for the cashier though... (winces) I was in that position once. A mix-up of burgers. Figures. Oh well, that's the way the poop floats...pr sinks, depends i suppose. Anyways, I must needs go drink lots of Vanilla Coke and write.... I am going home! (I'm at school, faster computers) |
Reviewed By: K\ On: July 05, 2002 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(blinks) Ok, I was expecting an explosion, not the 'oh well why fight it' thing. Well, I certainly loved the Burger King scene! I hope that Vegeta will someday learn to curb his temper...oh, well. Then he wouldn't be the Saiyan we all love. I feel sorry for the cashier though... (winces) I was in that position once. A mix-up of burgers. Figures. Oh well, that's the way the poop floats...pr sinks, depends i suppose. Anyways, I must needs go drink lots of Vanilla Coke and write.... I am going home! (I'm at school, faster computers) |
Reviewed By: tracoch On: July 05, 2002 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This much is true, Veggie is (in your mine anyway) the man. And the woman let him get away with it (in his mind), again. lollollollollol!
I loved it. Who did you get the creativity from? The man, i'll bet!! No human female could possible hold such great genes. Oh, and thanks for letting Goku kick a little a##!!! Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x On: July 04, 2002 14:46 CDT
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perfect, that ending fixed and settled it all...keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That was GREAT!!! I loved the ending. What Bulma said to him... damn, that musta hurt more than anything. I loved it. And all because of an onion. ^_^ I almost died when Trunks said to Vegeta that he was in deep shit and then Bra asked if "Daddy was in trouble." I couldn't stop laughing! Great fic, you really should write more like this.
And thanks, Susan ;) I'm glad that you encouraged her to complete the fic.
~Vegeta's Gyal~
Oh, and btw, if I could've, I would've rated this story a twelve, but the thingy only goes up to ten... |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 13:45 CDT
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Oh, yeah & thanks to Susan for inspiring the completion to this wonderful story :) :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 01, 2002 12:44 CDT
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Whew! Vegeta better be thanking his lucky stars. I loved how he just stood there waiting for his punishment! Meanwhile, poor Goku's the one taking the heat. Great story, I think this is probably my favorite of the adventure series so far. Can't wait to see what you have planned for the future. Great job JB :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 01, 2002 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm so touched JB, thanks for your kind words *sniff*. You know you're my fave writer and I can always count on being entertained by your fics ^_^. I will never look at Burger King the same way again. Just a few days ago I went there and ordered a burger. I told the dude behind the counter "Don't even THINK about putting onions in my burger or you'll find out if there's an afterlife". I must have looked serious cause everyone was looking at me like I was on drugs or deranged-lol. I guess there's a little Vegeta in all of us. Anyway, this was just too funny. Looks like Veggie got the wrong burger and look at the mess that followed-LOLLOL!! Trunks telling Veg that he was in deep shit and Bra asking Trunks if Daddy was in trouble was too much for me. I couldn't stop laughing. Leave it to kids to rub it in :). ChiChi's reaction to it all along with Goku's glares towards Veggie...well I'm still laughing. Of course Bulma blew Veggie (and me for that matter) away with her calm behavior. A containment crew?? LOL-yeah, Bulma doesn't need a few hundred lawsuits filed against her. Oh man, what can I say except thanks for all the laughs that this fic, and the other great adventure fics, have given me. With your super writing style and great sense of humor,how can you go wrong. Anywho, I'll be waiting patiently for more of Veggie's great adventures along with updates to all your other fics. Btw, have you seen how many reviews there are for Willpower?? YOU GO GIRL!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 21:17 CDT
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That's it! I'll never work for Burger King or any place that sells onions! Great fic, I love it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 22, 2002 08:53 CDT
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that was AWESOME! he blew up burger king! i hate burger king! more power to him! |
Reviewed By: priss On: June 19, 2002 18:56 CDT
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it was so funny but what happened to bulma? update soon k? |
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