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| "Perfection" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 09, 2006 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's a twelve toed hooker???? lol that kinda threw me. Okay, moving on. Good chapter, loved it as usual. Will there be 'melting' in the next chapter? Hope so ^.^ update soon
| Reviewed By: JCA_Saiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your f/f is really cool!!!! I love how you've got one of the oddest DBZ couples together and it works majorly!!!! But you know you need to keep the updates coming!!! IT'S MAY!!! (and my birthday) lol anyway i luv it and kepp it coming! Kadeta Royale, The JCA Saiyan
| Reviewed By: Cantare [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:20 EDT
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The exploration of narcissism is v. intriguing, especially after you started going into it in Strong Heart. It's also interesting that it's not an exact dichotomy of good/evil...I see "normal" Goku as having a strong potential to become like psycho Goku. Too bad Bulma's dead. :( Looking forward to more.
| Reviewed By: Dominic Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright hon, you know I love your work to death so here I am...reviewing...for you...whom I love. Okay, so one thing I was noticing...for most of the fict. you've had Goku's primal side more...animalistic. But now that he's with Kakarot it's different? Though I do love how they feel around each other. Like how even though they CAN think the same, they don't. It's so weird to see the impact Vegeta would of had on Goku. And I completely thought Kakarot had put bombs in Goku's kneecaps. And I so wanna know how Kakarot is keeping Bulma alive so that her father continues to work for him. 'Cause Krillin said her head was crushed in...I can't see someone walking away from that. Oooh, unless she was one of the people the dragon brought back all...zombiefied. I did expect Goku to be more...pitiable toward Kakarot, because we all know what a pussy he is for a sad story. I REALLY want to know in detail what happened to the others. Like Piccolo. ...you're gonna kill off Jessie aren't you? She's the only one I'm really attached to, so I know she's gonna die. Oh, and the super sayan thing...it increases your power/strength.whatever right? So how is it NOT detectable? And it just kills me that Kakarot IS as powerful as Goku. He just hasn't had anyone to test it against. I mean, he has the capacity right? Another thing...Goku's way of thinking is kinda bugging me. Like...he just had his heart ripped out by Vegeta, wished himself away to hell, and now he's all...'Okay, Imma jack myself off now'. Only one thought of Vegeta that really shook him? He's a strong one that boy. I'm completely in love with your words. I feel like...I dunno, like I already know enough about the world that I can draw it if I wanted. That sounds stupid, scratch that. And the spelling/grammer bit, I gave you a 9 'cause in two chapters you had 'than' and it should have been 'then'...it irked me. But now I can't find where they were.... Okay, I've reviewed, I've critiqued, and I've adored the cyber ground you walk on. Now will you please bless your readers...or just me ^.~ with the next chapter? You told me steamy sex was to be involved....
| Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the question at the end, it made me think "that's true" 'cause i never thought of it that way before... he's basically hiding from himself in more ways than one... ~ i love this fic cause it makes me think alot harder, look abit deeper than usual. Those are rare fics to find and i'm glad i found yours ^-^
| Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 07:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, you really thought those 'logical' answer out! O_O... it makes me think about the world around today... well, i'm not going to go to deep on that subject but, i liked the way kakarot seemed to have an answer for everything except that last question... *muses*... that is a hard question to answer aswell... well, hope the next xhapter comes as quick as the other to n-n
| Title: vegeta stalker:)
Reviewed By: chichidark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 04:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there, Camaro!I read chapter 10 at work and needless to say i was way too excited about it. This fic is great, stylishly sexual, and i hope you continue it:).
| Title: Chapter Two
Reviewed By: Teera Shavon On: April 24, 2006 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I needed inspiration and so I figured, why not read Camaro's story? And ya know what? It's beautiful and inspiring just like I knew it would be. The funny thing is, I don't even read DBZ stories anymore, don't watch the show since I saw the last episode. What I really loved was the new, original insight you've shown in Chi-Chi. Like jealousy being the reason she doesn't want Goku to train and do things she can't...it's beautiful and it's amazing of the honesty in your characters, especially Goku..so it's not just one-sided and we don't necessarily believe that one character is a complete God or devil..well, that's what I've gotten out of it. Honestly, you amaze me everytime I read something of yours. Love, Shay
| Title: Oooo..
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:21 EDT
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Wow. You have certainly put alot into this story and it shows. To be honest, I had to skip a bit of the graphic tales between Kakarot and Goku. This is such an intense story. Great job, Camaro. Can't wait for more.
| Title: Cold Shower...What?
Reviewed By: BG On: April 22, 2006 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god you are amazing! While we as humans tend to supress our "id," it seeps out of us when we fuck, eat, and sleep. When those things take presedence in our life, we are no better than the wild animals of the world, so the point I must make is this. While Goku allows his wild inhibitions to take him over, what separates him from the animals is this: He loves. He cares. He desires. So far, your story is amazing, sweetheart. I'm amazed again and again by your writing talents. Waiting for your next chapter...hmm...should I update BOS? Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: April 20, 2006 01:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keeps getting better and better. Did Kakarot go there just find Goku though? Update soon ^.^
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 19, 2006 20:38 EDT
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Can't wait for the next chapter! I love that Kakarot married Bulma, wasn't expecting that or her death. Kakarot and Goku together at last. Some hot sexy brutal lovin' soon to come, maybe? Hahaha! Can't wait til AFF is up and running this mediaminer formatting is giving me that shits. But then again I have a vendetta with AFF from back when you updated like 7 chapters of my one true love, Fathoming Love and only got to read half before it stuffed up and deleted them! I'll never forget that day it was the worst of my life :( Anyway, I'm hooked on this so keep going. Oh, and as usual beautiful writing and all that! Hahaha
| Title: wow...
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shit, that was a quick update.... cooL!! ~ ah man, Kakarot and Goku has finally met face to face... this is getting more and more exciting (if that's the right word for what i'm feeling)and Kakarot ending up marrying and then killing Bulma! that was a big shock O_O, i wasn't really expecting that, and usually things like that are made obvious in other stories i've read ^^, ~ well, looking forward to the next chapter ^-^
| Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 08:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really don't know what to write... i guess i could say that this is a awesome fic... very deep and emotional, and very complex... it's one of those story that forces you to think outside the box alot of the time.. makes you think alot basically (does that make sense??)which is a good thing, you don't get mcuh fics like this. great job and i hope you update soon
| Title: Delight
Reviewed By: Sinah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 19:51 EDT
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Yeah, so anyway you know I'm just in love with this story as well as your other work. I just thought I'd pop in and exclaim my excitement over the events of this last chapter beginning to unravel the other Goku and all. And how lucky for him to find that Journal! The only thing that has me stumped is how would Dende be around if there was no Frieza saga? Well I'm assuming there wasn't or Kakarot would be able to go SSJ and Krillian would be dead...Which makes Piccolo and the Dragonballs a real mystery? It’s eating me live here. I just wish one of Kakarots friends would have checked up on him and helped them get to the emergency room or something...And It's almost as if the way he was longing for "someone" (aka. Vegeta) implies that Goku timeline is the correct one, not just a timeline where things were slightly different resulting in no Vegeta… Some thoughts helping you get inside the mind of the reader… Until then I look forward to the next installment with much delight! Don’t be shy if you need a favor. ~Sinah
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