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Reviewed By: Veteta On: November 01, 2010 21:46 EDT
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OH MY GOD PLEASE CONTINUE OR I´LL DIE
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 17:20 EDT
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Thanks for continuing as I thought it was the end last chapter! I was really hoping Vegeta would see through Kakarot, after all the clues were there, but sadly he didn't until it was too late and he'd let his guard down. Pity. So Kakarot has Vegeta as well now, how will they get out of this? Maybe they won't leaving Kakarot to rule the universe.
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Reviewed By: MsKaren On: July 23, 2008 00:06 EDT
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It's a twisted tale you're telling. And,you're doin a good job telling it. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 20:32 EDT
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Wow, been awhile huh? Definitely wasn't expecting that when I opened my e-mail today. Love as always of course. Blew my mind as always of course. I'm so excited to see how this ends, even though I'm dreading it ending because it's just so damn good.
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Title: glad to have this back
Reviewed By: Cantare_ On: October 19, 2007 07:19 EDT
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Ah, Vegeta finally shows! I can't wait to see what happens next. It's been a while since I've read one of your darker fanfics, and this chapter was refreshing. your writing always makes me realize the cruelty that humans are capable of, and though it is shocking to read such graphic descriptions, all of the things that Kakarot has done are within our imagination. can't wait to see how Goku will deal with this new situation, and how Kakarot will deal with Vegeta...
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: October 19, 2007 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God I had lost hope of you ever coming back!! And okay, yeah that was kind of filler-ish...but I don't care, I'm just glad you haven't abandoned this story. And..um...wtf Vegeta??????????????????????????
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Reviewed By: Chloe(chainsawgames) On: October 18, 2007 19:56 EDT
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You're back and I am so happy! I've been reading Fathoming Love again and now this again. THANK YOU. =) Great writing, as always. Kind of a short chapter for you though, although a chapter at all is good. =)
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Reviewed By: Cantare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 15:14 EST
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Hey Camaro. This chapter is awesome. I love all the details in Goku's writing on the floor. It feels real, all the little things you put in there like when he thinks "wrasp" might not be a word, haha. The analysis into the horrible nature of manmade perfection is pretty true. Reminds me of books like the Giver, and something I wrote a few years ago called Perfect Earth. Your analysis of what is central to human life is pretty true. And the whole free will issue is something I've been thinking about a lot lately, interesting that you wrote Kakarot thinks it was a mistake for God to give humans free will. Not a mistake...just the right decision with good and (many) bad consequences. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cantare_ On: December 22, 2006 02:20 EST
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Oh Camaro...I had to read this as soon as the update email reached my inbox. I have to say those last two paragraphs were amazing. All along you've had me thinking Kakarot was so much worse than Goku. But in that last part you just turned it all around. A lot to think about. No one is faultless, and it's senseless to try to measure one person's sins against another's, because in the end everyone is guilty. Deeply hurting two people like your wife and son might be just as bad as hurting the faceless masses of people Kakarot currently rules over. Sad that the love both of them feel (Goku for Vegeta, Kakarot for his wife and son) is so flawed that it leads them both ultimately to be destructive and cruel.
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 21:45 EST
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great new chapter! it was full of shocking things and it kept me in suspense the whole time..i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Poe26 On: November 09, 2006 13:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Uh... The last chapter was a bit too disturbing for me. I read all of your story. I found I didn't liked the plot, but that I did liked the character's inner conflict and the other problems he has with admitting he's so very flawed. Other than that... your story portrays a lot of uh... I don't know what to call it that I really can't find myself ever liking it. Very gross... I guess it would be what I would call it.
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Reviewed By: Rogue13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 07:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had thought that I could only get this level of depraved sadism in my own personal rp's. I've thoroughly and completely enjoyed this from beginning to end. I'm absolutely captivated. I haven't read something this satisfying in...so long... And I really mean captivating...especially the relationship between Goku/Vegeta. That was perfection in itself. Damnit...I spent my entire graveyard shift reading this! I couldn't drag myself away for more than 20 minutes at a time to get any real work done! I'm so very impressed with your creativity and the depth here...such depth... I so look forward to more!
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
choujou! sorry, i'm tired and i don't know what else to write... i'm really crap at reviewing but, i still try to give something n.n;;
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Reviewed By: Alexandraite (not logged in) On: June 15, 2006 19:04 EDT
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I feel like it's been forever since I have gotten to read anything online! This is truly an amazing tale and you write it with such beautiful imagery. I feel so sad for Goku who, even after all that Vegeta did to him, still misses him. Things have become so bad for both Goku and Kakarot and I can't wait to see how it will end for them. And Bulma!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... Speechless... really!, i don't really know what to say...uhh... it was very deep.. i actually was able to understand which surprises me with how i didn't do so well in english ^_^;; banzai and R&R ya later! ^-^
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