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Title: speechless....almost...
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 08:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I cannot believe this. First, how did I miss TWO updates? This story is just so un-freakin-believable in how dark and morbid, yet deep and touching all at the same time. I really stink at writing reviews, but I want you to know how truly awesome this story is. Here I though I felt bad for Goku when Vegeta broke his heart, but this last chapter...oh man...I just felt so quiet and pained for a moment...You have a real gift, kiddo. To make readers really, and I mean *really* feel how the characters do. I cannot wait for more, but take your time. This is just an awesome tale. And I was so ready to hate this Kakarot...now I just want to hug him...^-^
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: April 17, 2006 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit, that was good. But now, I can't really hate the bastard can I? update soon
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 17, 2006 02:23 EDT
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That was intense and sad and really really intense. It made me cry, I'm not sure if I can handle more. But I'll keeping reading. But what I really wonder is in this timeline was Vegeta never born or did he just die? I'd love to see a chapter on that. You know how I love when you write from Vegeta's point of view! Hahaha!
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Reviewed By: ahhholychao On: April 15, 2006 00:33 EDT
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I like the development of the philosophical and political elements of this story. Your other stories seem to focus on psychological and religious themes a lot more heavily. Having read books like Animal Farm and 1984, and having parents who have lived under an oppressive regime that tried to dominate every aspect of life, I find this chapter especially interesting as you start to lay out the world the psycho Goku has created. The primary question is one of the nature of power, as I am reading Michel Foucault's Discipline and Punish right now and studying his redefinition of what power is. Is power really the ability to destroy and control other people and the world? To make the masses fear and worship you? Or is power simply the fact that we have free will, that someone as physically strong as Goku has many more choices than normal people, and that he could choose to live humbly and happily with his family in the woods, or he could choose to overturn the world order and set up a despotic regime? I'm interested by what you think about perfection and what is necessary for peace in the world. I'd like to see intense coverage of the philosophical issues raised by this new world. Thanks for an intriguing chapter.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 20:47 EDT
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That was a sad chapter. I feel so sorry for them.
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 14, 2006 17:34 EDT
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Hope to see Bulma in the next chapter, I'm interested to see whats going on there. Great as usual!
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Reviewed By: lord_of_the_pies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 17:39 EDT
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*scratches head* I'm sure I didn't notice this had another 4 or 5 chapters until this afternoon. Anyway, I have enjoyed this so far in butt numbing reading session. You certainly portray the moods of the characters very well- particularly in the scene when Vegeta had tricked Goku. (I think that one probably shocked me too, because I totally didn't expect the scenario.) The build up to it was excellent- the way Vegeta drew Goku out of his shell as you will, and Vegeta's own confession fit in well with the events. (When reading, I thought the "I love you" thing was rather OOC, until Vegeta's confession, until it suddenly made sense.) Great descriptions, particularly on the more, hmm, violent scenes. Anyway, I like the set up to this so far, and I'm looking forwards to reading what you are going to do with this "alternate universe" of Goku's. His alternate self is already delightfully sadistic. (BTW, I think mediaminer has messed up the editing on your chapters 4-6, since the paragraphs are not spaced like in the first few chapters.)
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE!! Such a sadistic bastard and with Goku's face! Fucking awesome. Update soon yeah!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Gryphon On: April 12, 2006 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I promised myself I would finish Monster before starting on another one of your fics. I'm such a LIER!! XD The imagery and how you've once again managed to keep everyone in character, grabbed me by the hair and pulled me in. And your theory as to why Chichi's so bitter rekindled the pity I had for her when I first watched the show. Well done Camaro, Well done ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Nity_Grity23 On: April 12, 2006 18:47 EDT
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This story kicks so much ass!!!! An evil goku and a good goku! Weird. I love how you made evil goku super psycho. NOw I dont know what to expect! PLZ PLZ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 18:06 EDT
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Goku is really in the sh*t now! This Goku 'clone' is quite a maniac...and he thought Vegeta was bad! I can't wait too see how this story unfolds. As always, you are doing a terrific job, Camaro. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 12, 2006 18:06 EDT
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Great. I can't wait to see how this future came about.
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Reviewed By: oh man! On: April 11, 2006 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update thsi asap!!!!
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Title: .....damn...
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 23:10 EDT
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Poor Goku...he's really in it this time. Will we ever get to find out if Vegeta died or not? And I agree with Angelsrebellion, I got a bad feeling that ain't Vegeta he's sensing. Great chapter! The beating part actually made me look away from the screen! LOL! Looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, beat the shit out of that fucker (Even though I adore Vegeta) Big pile of heart breaking mush. So, I'm guessing the big evil power Goku's sensing ISNT Vegeta. Yeah, that's what I think. Mmhmm. lol update soon!
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