| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: ohhhh so late, so sorry....
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 06:50 CDT
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Ooops so sorry, I am a day late reading this, shame on me.Good chapter! Poor, poor Rin. I really, really feel bad for her. And for Sesshomaru as well. All this drama is like a mad rush to my brain and I love it. I like that Kagome and Inuyasha have finally "worked things out a little." Curious question but I have to ask....Will Kaede be making an appearence in this story? :snikers: Tounge rings! Nice Touch!
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Title: Penny Pen!!
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: May 02, 2006 02:29 CDT
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WOWZA! That was a hella chappie! All that citrus & drama!! Poor Rin, she's really living in hell, ne? then sessie-sama -lawd! Poor lil' Chibi! Naraku that bastard, I can't wait for him to get his. The tongue piercings, haha. When I got mine don, all I did was scream. I don't know where Yasha & sango got cumming, but all I fucking got was pain! haha I'm ready for the next, girl. Bring it on!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: May 01, 2006 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I finally caught up with you... lol. Wow poor Rin. Great so far I don't think its a train wreck. Look forward to the next chapter. Chanda
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: Darksaint On: May 01, 2006 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it although maybe its just me but I think sango is getting alittle too close to Inuyasha. ggrrrrrrrrrrr I hope nothing happens and awww poor rin being raped by her dad and what sess does not want her anymore *tears* please update soon I really want to know what that evil kougas up to your fan darksaint
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: May 01, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Sesshomaru( i cried) ...What the heck is Kouga up to know ? (that boy is dense)..Will Rin and Kagura get even with Naraku?...I love the story and the chapter....Ok also loved the Piercing..keep up the great work...please update soon, Also will Inuyasha check on Sessy?
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang, that was one hit lemon you got in there. minus Naraku of course. I mean between Inu and Kags. Ta know what I mean. LoL. Anyway, I love your story, I really like how Inu is with Kags, so sweet. And that part with Naraku made me want to beat him and shoot him. He is very evel. Poor Rin. Well I can't wait for the next chapter, great story!!! ;-)
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Title: Suffix
Reviewed By: Idat On: May 01, 2006 21:11 CDT
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Good story, but I found one thing a little disconcerting. You've reversed the male-female suffix of Kun and san. Kouga-san should be Kouga-kun, and Kagome-kun should be Kagome-san. Of course status is important as well, and they would likely refer to each other as "Ookami-kun" or "Ookami-sama" and vice versa.
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: April 29, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you, long time no review...LOL sorry Ive been extreamly busy. Love this story so far. I'm only on chapter five and have a couple more chapters until you update. Dont fret I will happily review again. Koga is a nasty suit in this story, nice twist. Chanda
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, awesome, wonderful, etc email me kk? how r ya? im fine oh i forgot to ask what is ur tattos? bye
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Title: frani1375
Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh no! poor rin. she's cornered big time. good cliffy!!! or bad, depending on how you look at it. =P inu is too sweet for his own good. he's taking such good care of kags. and miro and sango, they are both big hentai's. so cute. great chappie. hope you have a nice weekend!!
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Title: Whoa!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: April 27, 2006 22:52 CDT
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Dayum, poor Yasha. Kags is a damn tease. If he can't have it, don't show it to him! Then there's sessie-sama...oh lawd! What's gonna happen to poor Sess. He's so pitiful *cries* Lots & lots of stuff coming... I can smell it! O.O Great as always, Penny!
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Title: Oh so good!
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 21:49 CDT
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Oh so excelelnt chapter! Loved the scences between Inuyasha and Kagome especially. I like how you are taking their relationship at a slower more normal pace. I am not saying that jumping in head first is a bad thing but just how you are writing this particular story it fits perfect. Also love, love, love the Sesshomaru/Rin plot. Poor Rin. Hopefully Sesshomaru will believe that she really truly had feelings for him and wasn't faking to get info. Oh gosh. I love the anticipation of it all. Thanks for the great chapter!
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Reviewed By: demoncatkuroro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:42 CDT
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update sooooooon!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, if sess finds out about rin's betrayal, there is no way he will believe that her feelings were real. i worried over that. and hopefully, sh*t will chill out with kouga tryning to hurt kags now that she's transferred.(yeah right) ^_^ i loved the sweet miro and sango part at the beginning. and scrooge mcduck office?! he had those locks installed just for that, huh. ^_~ lmfao. funny
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