| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, I'm loving this chapter and story more and more. My poor Sessy losing his arm (I'm crying now) he bought her back to life (happy dance). I love how you have each person (demon) come into their own. Will Inuyasha help? Where did kagura go? and Where are Kikyou and Kouga? Can't wait till the next chapter. keep of the great work.
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Title: Ooooooh Fuck Me!!!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: June 08, 2006 11:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Penny! That shit was fucking hawt, u hear me? Oh shit. I caould actually visualize that lemon. *Blinks* I mean, he turned full demon & grew his fangs & even marked her! SQUEEEE! The stuff with grandpa was funny too. I can't wait for the transformation to be complete and we see his white hair. I'm so giddy fir that. WOOOOOT!!!!!! You never disappoint!
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Title: sAL
Reviewed By: savesthedaygirl19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya, ok, ive FINALLY caught up on my reading, sorry its been a while, but HOLY DAMN life is one crazy ride, anyway, the story is great. i was disapointed in the begining and inu didnt have his lovely hair eyes and delicous little ears but you made me very happy to see that they are coming about in a way ive never read before. very original i must say. update soon, im enjoying so far. sAL
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, you did again this was a great chapter. I really love your Inuyasha and Kagome's Lemon "We do love our demon-dog don't we. Can't wait till next chapter.
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter .... how ya gunna write thid one? ;D ttly and email me!
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Reviewed By: leilachan *still nsi* On: June 06, 2006 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah, naraku is gonna start catching on soon, probably. wonderful chappy. i liked the inu/kag part, of course, and i think it's cute how miro is so protective of sango. awww. woohoo, the way you describe sexxhy checking himself out. O.O yum : P see ya next update.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, thanks for updating!! Great chapter! I just love this story. Hope you update again soon =)
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi* On: May 31, 2006 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry it took so long to get to ya. i was outta town. ^_^ and yes, my hubby really said that when i got pregnant. i know, *eye roll* XD lol it's good that sango told miro and things are alright. i hope that inu and sess will somehow make ammends and all. sess seems to be sincere. and, he could use the help at his business! great chap again!! i always lmao when you describe inu eating and his food flying from his mouth. bwahaha, so funny! ew
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:55 CDT
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Great story!! Really kept me engaged throughout the whole thing. Can't wait to read more!! =)
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Title: Hai!!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: May 29, 2006 03:23 CDT
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Well you've done it again, my girl!! Excellent chappie, and I love how Sessie is trying to do the right thing. I totally cracked up with the whole money exchange between Yasha & Kouga. This is turning out so sweet & I can't believe you're so many chaps along. Good for you!!! I love the note to Skye, kawaii!!!
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, great chapter, Fluffy smiled (I just love it). I like the part when Kagome yells at Inuyasha to "SIT DOWN" he felt something didn't he? Question is Kagome a miko and doesn't know it? Anyways can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 21:07 CDT
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Yay! They are back together again! I can't wait to find out whats goig on with Inuyasha, and i definatly can't wait for the big "showdown" with Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job! as a sessy/rin fan this chapter was good. Finally their back together liek they should be. ttly email me bye great great chapter!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Im just starting out here going on into chapter 3, but I like it thus far. Thouhgt I'd just let ya know...now Im off to read some more... :D This is good!
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Title: HOT DAMNNNNNNN
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Dollbaby On: May 24, 2006 01:43 CDT
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Ok, you know you had me climbing the walls with that lemon, ne??? OMG, Penny you RAWKED that shit, and I mean, fuck me! I'm just getting a chance to read tonight, and wow, I wasn't disappointed AT ALL. You're progressing soooo well, expecially the way you're adding the demonic elements & traits. I fucking love it. SO creative!! *applauds* I'll e-mail ya today *huggles*
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