| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i just finished reading chap 1 and i'm already drawn to it _< & Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: tetsuya yamatashi (not logged in_ On: August 22, 2007 22:04 CDT
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OMG I LOVED the Pirates quotes in chapter 24. That made my day. True story. I love this story so much that it's unnatural XD
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Title: Lurvely!!!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: June 20, 2007 17:40 CDT
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Pennnny! Sorry for another late one. My arms are shot to hell, but I had to get in here and drop my girls some love! Awesome, loved the lemony goodness and I thought the part with sessie's haircut was really touching. Another fab chappie -but how could I expect any less?? Now, hug Skyeeeee and get another chap out here, dammit!!!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its great to read this again, was about to worry when you didn't update in so long. But as I can see that you came up with a fine chapter, wonderful. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Title: Gosh
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 14:56 CDT
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It's funny. Everytime I think about checking the story, you show up with a new chapter. I really like that actually. How come Kagome didn't say anything about the dagger and badguys in suits thing?
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Title: A holla from your INU
Reviewed By: inuyoukiskye On: June 16, 2007 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(lets sing like barney)i love you , you love me lets get together and pet lita and angie. Love you sooooo much baby and this story is getting very good, i remember u started writing this when we started dating over a year ago and you told me it was gonna be a short story LMAO. well our anniversary came, weve been together a whole year wow and what a year . I love you so much Penny. and just so ur readers know , not even I the fiancee knows the ending to this story, but i know it will be good!!!!
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Title: I'm not always there when you call, but I'm always on time! ^_^
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: May 05, 2007 20:18 CDT
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PENNNNNNNNNNY-PEN!!!!!! A most lovely update you have bestowed upon us! Sorry I'm late, but there's so much crap gong on! >.< ANYWAYZ! I looooved it. I love that Miroku finally broke down and let it all out. Sango is written as such a strong character. I loved the fighting between out favorite brothers and I also like that Yash isn't so quick to forgive Sessie. Nice Shippo itro as well. As always, a stellar job from one of my fave authors. Huggles to you and Skyeeeeeee!
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Title: Oh my word... I'm... I'm.. Left Speechless... again!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love the new update- so many thing happen and I'm happy that you continued it cause I was getting a bit tired of waiting- and guess what- it's just in time for my B-DAY! haha! Well like I was saying- I love seeing Inuyasha's soft side as he went to help out his friend and I'm really happy that Shippo is now in the story- I still wanted to see a bit of fluff after a long wait between any of the couplings but I can wait longer for that- I hope life is going great for you!- Again I love this story so much and I can't wait for the next update to see what happens to who? And what's up wit Kanna? Shes starting to freak me out a bit... oh well- till then- you're faithfull fan- StephanieRoxUrSox!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Hope you update and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 21:18 CDT
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Yippee! I love your updates and I'm so glad that you are hangin' in there!
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Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I only got through the first three chapters, but so far, so good. ^.^ Keep it up.
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Title: PENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNY-PEN!!!!
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: March 22, 2007 16:49 CDT
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I'm sorry I'm late! I didn't check e-mail in a few days, but I'm here now!! I'm loving this update. Nice and long for the palette! Naraku, arrogant piss ant that he is -can't wait to see him get it. I loved Kagura in this too. I've discovered a real liking for her (and it helps that she beat the shit out of Kouga in the anime!), Yash and Kagome are really cute. I love how his gray hair is fucking with him! Poor Miroku and Sango -gah! He doesn't see that he's just making things worse. Then of course, there's Sessie-sama. He's like, "I may only have one arm, but dammit, I'm still the man!" Fab update, Penny-pen! can't wait for the next. Love to Skye, eh? ^_^
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pen, glad to see everthing did work out for you chapter 24 was great, just great. Can't wait till chapter 25. Till then stay cool.
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Title: Oh BOY! OH BOY!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG- so much after such a long break made my head explode! I'm like WTF! So much to say and so little time for me to say it! what's goign on with rin and sesshy? Have they confessed their love to each other? Why is Kagura actually helping them out? Poor Miroku- will he find confidence again and face Sango- what if Sango became pregnant again- I'm positive Miroku won't let her out of his site and keep her locked away from Dark enery fields- how much of the supernatural things and the past be involved with this story? what's naraku's true plan to bring down the Takahashi corporation? Who does Kanna loyalties lie to? Wassup with Shippo in this story? Now that Inu and Kag are together what's next in their relationship? Will the relationship between Inu and Sesshy ever repair itself? And what's up with Inu's hair- why haven't it completely turn white yet? there were more questions but since I'm not a rereader and My mind is too blown away from this chapter I am not sure what they were... tee-hee* I'm happy that you have emailed me because I assure you that mm wouldn't have let me know what's up... I would've been left in the dark about your updates! well there's my commentary- next chap you should read and perhaps promote my story if you find the time! Awesome chap but it definitely felt like a filler??? Maybe I'm saying that cause I was too anticipated and waiting for this chapter and all that excitement built it up to be something more than it should be- but I'm happy you never failed to surprise me with what you do put out! Can't wait for the next update and again- AWESOME JOB!
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