| "Impoverished Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 176 ] |
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Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi* ; ) On: May 24, 2006 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, so happy for sess/rin. ugh, he is so mean and scary when he's angry! wouldn't ever want to be on the receiving end of the 'sess glare'... or smile. -_- lol atleast sess still wants to share their father's company with inu. i wonder how miro will take the good news!? with alot of 'super-sperm' jokes, i'm sure. wait, that was my husband *rolls eyes* XD jk jk yes, twas a very quick update. thanx. tc
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: May 23, 2006 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I'm slacking again..lol. Yikes Sango is Pregnant...oh boy. I wonder will Sessh forgive Rin. I hate to see what he's going to do to Naraku when he finds out that he rapes his own daughter. Definetly look forward until your next chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That was one hot little lemon between Rin and Sessh. I'm glad he knows the truth now though. Great chapter update. I loved it. I can't wait till the next. ;-)
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: May 22, 2006 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Myoga you old dog ( I mean flea) he got my Rin and Fluffy to talk.I love the Interaction between Kagura and Sesshomaru that was a funny with her using his phrase and him resenting it. (priceless). The hit man line was funny. (These one liners are too funny). This long winded reviwer loves this chapter, can't wait till next update
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 20, 2006 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE all the scenes when Inu and Kags are together. They are just too hot. LoL. The plot is thickening as each chappie passes. I love it. This update was great, I can't wait till the next. Awesome job girl!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i just looked at some of the other reviews and i feel weird, it's like i am the only person who doesnt write alot... should i write more? i mean the chapters are great and everything. let me know ttly i wonder if ur on now anyweays bye
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Reviewed By: Eartha (nsi) On: May 19, 2006 16:43 CDT
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I really love your story and have been reading it for some time. I was just reviewing today to correct one small mistake to the japanese culture. Japanese never wear shoes in homes or religious buildings. I was once told that shoes can be worn on stone, usually at the entrance to a shrine or temple, but must never touch the wooden slats or floor boards. Similarly, they should not have attempted to wear shoes inside the house. Even modern Japanese follow these rules. Anywho, I just thought I'd tell you because it is a very prominent and obvious part of their culture. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as always, you have left me wanting more and more! rin was a suprise at the end for sure. what news does she have? news to destroy naraku, i hope. ^_^ and what's this with sango, hmmmm? interesing. awww, sess thinking of a dark haired baby in rin's arms. sweet. i'm glad kag's not freaking out too much over inu's changing. things could be bad if she did, eh!? *prays for next update to be soon* =P
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Pen,(using Sesshomaru language)came up with another great chapter. Ok, how cool is this Miroku and Sango are going to have a baby. I love it when they go home to meet his parents and their getting ready to get busy and his mom comes to say goodnight and to remind they they are right next door that was too funny. Love it when Kagome going through Inuyasha's hair looking for white hair, And while they are making "Lemonade" his eyes change color that was good. Give a high five to Kagura for saving Rin's ass from Naraku, and then she goes to see Fluffy awwwwwwwwww!! Ok let not forget our favorite brick, Kouga got caught by his father again. tell me this fool is what I call " a fuckup waiting to happen" he can't do anthing right. Pen, see you like Star Wars LOL (should put a disclaimer in there Lucas will sue) Don't go to the dark side, Kouga great just great. Well this Danny Girl can't wait till the next chapter. Please update soon. Hey random though why can't we all talk like Sesshomaru that would be so cool.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: inuyashasramen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 23:59 CDT
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Wow, this story is really good. Please continue. ^_^ loving it, inu's ramen
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 23:55 CDT
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Wow, lots of stuff happend in this chapter! First off I have to ask who that mysterious new secretary is of Sesshomarus? I love the fact that you are having Inuyasha and Kouga change! Oh and lets not forget that Sango is/or might be pregnant! Sweet! I did have one tiny, little, itty bitty problem with this chapter...you left it as a cliffy....so so not good, but at the same time so so good....lol sorry I can't help it I love cliffhangers just like I hate cliffhangers...I'm a little weird. Anyway great Job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: The Lady Of The Night [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very awesome.. glad to have read it, hope to talk to u soon great chpater! bye! oh, and email me....
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: May 16, 2006 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Kouga what can I say about him I've seen bricks less dense then him, man. Who is this old man he went too anyway and how does he know Kikyou? Kouga and Kikyou in her office, only thing I can say is ewwww. Poor Rin (cry) she miss her Fluffy (Sesshomaru). What is Kagura up too really and who was she talking to on her cell phone? (beware Rin). Ok, I'm going back to my orginal statement how dense is Kouga? I just love the fact that Inuyasha turn demon and kicked Kouga's ass to protect Kagome and her frecking out. As you can tell I just LOVE THIS CHAPTER, this just keeps getting better and better keep up the good work can't wait till the next update
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a gret update. Hot lemon too. I'm glad Kags realized it was still the same Inu despite the momentary change. Still don't like Kouga. Great story and update!!! ;-)
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Title: Whoo-hoo!
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 19:09 CDT
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Go Inu! Kick Kouga's Ass!! I loved that part! Kouga's all like yeah I have power now I am so much stronger, and, Inu's like he he he NOT! Sorry, I just thought that was funny. Anyway excellent update. have I mentioned how much I love the fact that you update very quickly? Good job!
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