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 Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in  On: March 19, 2007 06:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am still reading your story I hope you up date soon on it.
 Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 19, 2007 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. But I'm wondering if Inuyasha is going to get his full white hair or is he going to stay like that and is Koga and Ayama going to show up to help fight this battle as well? So hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
 Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2007 15:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was just wondering last night what had happened to you. So when the alert popped up today I was very pleased. The chapter is great as always - looking forward to more. Take care!
 Title: Mindless Chatter
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 31, 2007 03:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG... I'm utterly speechless with the events in this story and I can't wait for it to continue... then and only then can i bombard you with my questions and thoughst of the such! So much has to happen! Good luck with your love life and I hope you can eventually find time to be pulled away from it to work on this! LoVeD iT!
 Reviewed By: leila-chan nsi  On: December 01, 2006 11:34 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
good to see that you're still writing. now that inu is working with sess, things are going to get even more interesting, i'm sure. inu and kagome are so sweet together! but, it makes me feel so sad that sango and miro are going through such a tough time. i hope things turn out all right for them. lookin' forward to the next chap, as always. good luck with your new job and the training. take care.
 Title: Yippie Kiyah Mofo! 0.~
Reviewed By: Da Grrrl  On: November 26, 2006 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
YEAAAAAH! Now this is what I was waiting for. I've been heired!!! (and now I know it!) 0.~ Penny, this was great. I love the banter between Sessie & Yasha, enjoyed the lemon, & tell Skye that I play Mario 3 all the time too!! Gotta love the plumber! We missed you, chick, but I'm glad your back. "Paint it Black" -I flippin love that!!
 Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 25, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Glad your back. Happy to read this again. So hope you update soon and keep it up.
 Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 25, 2006 14:00 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Miss ya much Pen, I'm glad everything is working out for you, I'm also glad for the update It's the quiet before the storm don't ya think. Till next time Pen I wish you best stay safe and happy ok.
 Reviewed By: abcdefghijklmnopqrstu  On: November 24, 2006 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
you have to update this its really good
 Reviewed By: leila-chan *nsi*  On: October 01, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
noooo, please. not sango and miro's baby! this is terrible. i hate naraku and hope he dies a messy, painful death. this was seriously a major cliffy... meanie. ^_^ ayame is good for kouga, i think. and, i hope she chills him out. glad things are going well for you. take care. 'til the next update.
 Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 27, 2006 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pen, missed ya and glad you updated. Now it on Nakrau just messed up no one but no one fuck with the boys (Inu and Fluffy). Oh man Mirkou and Sango that was sad. This was a great chapter can't wait till the next.
 Title: Whoa o.o
Reviewed By: InuYasha's babydoll  On: September 26, 2006 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Naraku, that slimy bastard! How DARE he mess with sessie! Poor Sango, I totally didn't see that coming, and then to think that it all happened because of that energy wave. Jesum! The battle is coming and I'm salivating! Tell Skye I said Skyeeeeeeeeeeeee! ^_^
 Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, that was unexspected.Feel sorry for Sango's lose, I don't no how to react to such a thing like that. So I hope you update soon so we can read what happens next. And keep up what you do best, write.
 Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2006 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha i love this story update soon!
 Title: Excellent as Always!
Reviewed By: InuYasha's Babydoll  On: September 02, 2006 03:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Penny! I loved it as always, I absolutely ADORE the scenes with InuYasha & Kagome. They're written so well, just like a regular relationship when people are hot for each other. I also like the way you make sess formidable but not invincible - very realistic. Loved the title too (Go Def Leppard!) CONGRATULATIONS ON PASSING THE GED! I'm so proud of you, I knew you could do it! *huggles* Now, get over to AFF and update! You stopped at like 11 O.o
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